| "Never Meant to Love Him" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2002 07:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Huh? I read this this morning and left a review, but it's not here anymore! What happened, eh? Oh well.
There are a few sentences and situations which are a little cliche, but I enjoy the story and your writing style. It feels intricate and nicely detailed without being too dense. :) |
Reviewed By: Meliza On: September 30, 2002 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man, I was just as nervous as Bulma as she hovered over the private files! You've described Bulma and Vegeta's personalities to a T, but not in the standard way that everyone else does.
A great beginning to what promises to be a fantastic fic. I sure hope you update soon! |
Reviewed By: Bulma Wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2002 13:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Intriguing start. I'm looking forward to reading another story written by you.
Bulma Wannabe ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 30, 2002 12:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Ember I think you have another winner here. I love the way you describe Vegeta's character and his overall disgust with humans. Also, I like the way you portray Bulma. She's aware of all he has done in the past and shrugs off his little threats just enough to piss him off ^_^. It seems to me that Bulma is about to open up a can of worms. I just hope she has the intestinal fortitude to deal with what she's about to watch on that screen. Good time to post this with Halloween coming up, because I always have a hard time finding fics to fit the mood on 10/31. Can't wait for your next update. Good chapter! TTYL
suenami927@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2002 11:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A few cheesy sentences, but other than that nothing much to complain about. I really like the style you're using, your word choices and your sentence structures. They feel intricate and interesting without being bogged down. :) |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: October 01, 2002 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooohhhhh, it sounds sooooo good so far! wow! you've got a real knack for writing stories that i get completely hooked on, and this is definitely another one! |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2002 19:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow - this chapter was well worth the wait!
As bummed as I am that we have to wait until around Halloween for the next chapter, I know it will be another fantastic one. Your writing style is exemplary and this story line is extremely enjoyable and not too OOC, IMHO. 8-)
Keep up the good work!
Meliza |
Reviewed By: lil debbie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2002 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I'm going to need to see the next chapter as soon as it is written! |
Reviewed By: Da Bomb On: November 14, 2002 16:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great plot and also u pretty much keeped them both in charater. I loved it.
Also could u do a lemon one shot. |
Reviewed By: Da Bomb On: November 14, 2002 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great plot and also u pretty much keeped them both in charater. I loved it.
Also could u do a lemon one shot. |
Reviewed By: dark rain On: October 01, 2002 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh bad bulma i can't wait to see wht she finds hurry out with the next chapter soon |
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