| "Never Meant to Love Him" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: October 31, 2002 17:25 CST
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GAH! Evil evil evil! What a mean cliffy!!! *sniffle* I don't wanna wait two weeks!!! *pout* Heh heh, great chapter though! Absolutely fantasmal! I wanna see what happened! Good thing Vegeta's showing her! |
Reviewed By: Vampiric_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2002 06:45 CST
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Great... Bit darker then I normally like, but nicely written. I can't wait to discover Vegeta's motives! |
Reviewed By: Dark Jades [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2002 17:30 CDT
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Wow...gotta love it! I wish I could give you a better review, but I'm all out of compliments! Can't wait for more. |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2002 01:13 CDT
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Neato! What do you mean, I have to wait 'till Halloween to read the rest? Gah! Well, writing of this calibre is worth waiting for.
Like: Bulma's characterization, perky and self-assured without being overly annoying, to me anyway. Vegeta's characterization in refusing to be waylaid by anything he considers trivial - not like some other fics in which he's a total pushover for anything Bulma does. Huzzah!
Bothered by: in the video camera footage, the camera was strapped to his belt, right? I was having trouble telling what exactly was in the footage - after all, you really shouldn't have been able to see what he was doing from that angle. Bulma would have to deduce what was happening in some places because bits and pieces of the action would be all that was visible. IMHO.
Waiting for more! |
Reviewed By: Mela989898 On: October 11, 2002 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm loving it! I can't wait to for the next chapter! Halloween will be a long what but I'm sure it will be so wroth it! |
Reviewed By: valeayrd On: October 10, 2002 16:32 CDT
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You have me intrigued!
Vegeta becomes a member of Reality TV:-)
Me want more! |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2002 13:42 CDT
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I like it! |
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2002 13:16 CDT
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Wonderfull, as always. Once Vegeta discovered the camera he knew who put it there and why. I believe with your writing skills Bulma will see there's much more to the Prince than just destroying planets and murdering innocents.
Anxiously awaiting update.
Waiting..................... |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2002 11:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! What a great idea for a Holloween fic! Wow, that was intense and gruesome in chapter two...can't wait to read the rest on Bulma's overall reaction on what she saw! |
Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2002 14:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT? WHAT DID BULMA SEE?????????? 0_0 EXCELLENT! Meh ish luvin' it! KEEP WRITING, OH GODDESS OF THE BULMA AND VEGETA FAN WORLD! *bows down* |
Reviewed By: HardCandyVegetto On: October 01, 2002 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
original and in character. i like it |
Reviewed By: Susan On: October 10, 2002 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, even though it was a dark chapter, it was still awesome. I love your description of all the places he went to and the things that occured while he was there. Poor little girl, but at least Vegeta put an end to her suffering. Bulma is stronger that I gave her credit for. Personally I would've been puking all over the place. Well, I can't wait to see what's next. Great job, as always ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Dark Jades [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2002 17:11 CDT
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Hey...I like! Cute idea, and of course excellent writing. Can't wait for the rest! |
Reviewed By: Aka-Chan On: October 01, 2002 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this, you portray the charestics of both Bulma and Vegeta very well. As a writer of fanfics myself, I know how hard that is to do with this particular couple, so I applaude you. ^.^ I like your style of writing especially, not to stiff, nut it's got good content to it, another applaude. *claps* ^.^ Keep up the good work and update soon! |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: October 01, 2002 10:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow! Naughty Bulma all lying and stuffs to Vegeta.... Well, I bet she finds enough in those cameras that she won't want to look in the private section huh? ^_~
So, the only thing I didn't get was how Vegeta could just trust her to not look in his personal stuff. Is he brain-damaged? Not thinking? Why didn't he think of that? Or does he realize it later...?
So, I'm a hard person to scare or get to a I'm-gonna-puke state. The last movie to do the latter was We Were Soldiers. You know, the flesh coming off the leg of the burnt person like my bar-b-qued chicken legs? I burn them, so that works.... And scaring me. That hasn't happened in two years!
Scare me! Make me retch! Heehee, it'll be a boring Halloween if you don't! Continue! |
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