| "Never Meant to Love Him" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Title: Very Original
Reviewed By: Caprice [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 23:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
A nice read Ember. I particularly enjoyed the ending. It was very well crafted and left a very good flavor on my tongue. It wrapped it all very well. Nice job!
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Reviewed By: Sarah aka Vega [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 15:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Great fic! Very original, adding unseen scenes from what happened to Vegita before and during that trip. Liked it very much!
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Reviewed By: fyrechylde [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 05:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gotta say that I was addicted...I read this entire story without stopping. *rubs eyes* I like the way you can draw your readers in until the story becomes the reality around them. My favorite part (morbid I know) is whne he tells the little girl sweet dreams. You showed such an interesting dimension of character with just three words. And by the way, the story was so engrossing it would have seemed almost a shame to add in a lemon. Keep up the great work!!!
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Reviewed By: Kandy On: June 10, 2003 02:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think its standing pretty well. I just wonder why it took me so long to read this? I'm really sad to see it go though. Really sad. Extremely sad. So very sad. |
Reviewed By: mikky_2 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2003 20:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again, no words to add... Just perfect... I must confess, I'm becoming addicted to your writings *lol*
Marvellous!!
Mikky |
Reviewed By: Hetchi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 18:22 CST
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this was a very unique fanfic for the get together of Bulma and Vegeta. It was well done. |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: November 18, 2002 18:12 CST
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Ahhh! Soooo good! And don't worry 'bout the lack of lemon! I loved the entire story, with or without!!! The whole thing was absolutely fantabulous!! |
Reviewed By: chibi On: November 17, 2002 11:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so sweet* |
Reviewed By: Ms2ry Angle7 On: November 15, 2002 13:08 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I never thought I would say this sentence and will more than likely never say it again but here goes. In this particular story a lemon would not be needed. There I said, that wasn't so bad. Anyway you did a great job writing this fic and for that Bravo! We got to see a side of Vegeta that is rearly seen and you did a great job!
***Now just between you and me if you want to do a lemon be my guest. It's a little warm in Virginia today and a glass of lemonaid will be greatly accepted!!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: November 13, 2002 16:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Mother of God that was beautiful! A great ending that doesn't even need a lemon. Don't get me wrong, if you want to write one be my guest-I'll read it ^_^. Again you have blown me away with you writing style. So fluid, yet you are able to tackle V/B's emotions and get into their heads in a way that makes the reader feel that they're part of the whole enchilada. I don't know what else I can say except BRAVO for another great effort :D. |
Reviewed By: Bulma On: November 13, 2002 10:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ember, I loved this story!!! It was short, but explained everything! But, I still want one more chapter. Maybe a lemon scene? ;)
[ ]īs, Bulma. |
Reviewed By: Chibi-Dacras babysitter On: November 13, 2002 09:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Awwww...that's a great ending...better than mine! Lol! |
Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2002 23:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so sweet and so beautiful! I really loved the ending ... even without a lemon, it was perfect! |
Reviewed By: valeyard On: November 01, 2002 07:51 CST
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Wha? We are supposed to know what happens by now!
You've definitely got me interested. So what is the big secret of Somoria? I gots to know! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: October 31, 2002 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I'm stunned. What a chapter. You're writing is damn beautiful and poetic. You could've given Keats a run for his money ^_^. Well, it'll be interesting to hear what Vegeta has to say to Bulma, and even more interesting, how will she feel about Vegeta after he spills his guts out. Excellent chapter. Can't wait for the next and last. Great job Ember!!!! |
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