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Reviewed By: Slim On: April 09, 2003 15:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I remembered your fic from way back on ffn, and I've just re-read it (including extra chapter 13). It is still as amazing as it was before, the characterisation is spot on (even if Ellone does have quite an extended vocabulary for a four year old) and its just generally great. Keep it up. |
Reviewed By: Kenmei On: March 15, 2003 10:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This isn't just the best FF fic i've ever read, it's one of the best fics i've EVER read! Laguna's possibly more adorable than he was in the game - the skillet incident was pure genius - and you have given an incredible insight on Raine's character when she has all of about ten lines of dialogue in reality! And the spelling and grammar! This fic deserves an award for that alone! Fics that are different, interesting, tasteful, not about Squall and Seifer and actually make sense are like gold dust in this category, and... I'm babbling again... ^_^; Please keep writing, I NEED updates!!! |
Reviewed By: Vegetas Gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 11:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy!! Yay! This is so sweet! I can't wait for the next chapter but I'm afraid it's going to be getting scary soon (with Esther after Elle!) but please continue! The lemon was uh.....extremely well written, good job! *gives you a pat on the back* |
Reviewed By: Nikki On: March 05, 2003 23:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Yes! Updates! This story is so well written. I really, really love the fact that you chose these characters. There love is so sad, and happy at the same time...I wonder how you will end this. Can't wait; good job with the chapters! |
Reviewed By: Nikki On: January 15, 2003 19:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Finally! Laguna & Raine are together!!!!!!!!! I'm soo happy. I adore FF8, and it is true how you fill in the unknowns from the game. Gah! But how can you leave the story at a point like that!? Oh well, I can wait. Good job on the work. I'm so glad I found this story! |
Reviewed By: Vegetas Gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 10:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gah! How could ya do that? Leave us all like that with a LEMON coming next, a big fat LEMON! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon because all us lemon fans out here are just DYING to read the next chapter! This was a good chapter, so sweet! KEEP GOING! |
Reviewed By: mtlxiaoangel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 21:19 CST
Comment/Review:
HOLY CRAP...THIS IS SOO GOOD! DUN MAKE ME WAIT FER THE NEXT CHAPPIE PLEASE!! |
Reviewed By: dragon88 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 19:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loooooooooooooove it! Beautiful work! Positively stunning. I love how you described the dragon, and how Laguna and Raine argue, along with how you made Ellone act. the way you did this really seems to bring the characters to life. And you put my work to shame.More please! |
Reviewed By: SgAltima [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 02:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A most EXCELLENT fiction. People before me have commented on the rarity of finding a good fiction in the mass of the mediocre ones. Please let me expand in saying that it was most gratifying seeing a quality, tasteful fiction in the NC-17 section among all the tasteless lemons. Your scene was wonderfully written, and not created for the sake of writing it. I am impressed, and will be watching for updates. |
Reviewed By: Mei On: January 06, 2003 20:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been waiting for the next chapter for so long! I was making it a point not to comment until the story was done...This story is excellent, my favorite by far. I can just get into it. Please update soon, I can't wait. |
Reviewed By: mtlxiaoangel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2003 12:55 CST
Comment/Review:
why you stop?? :( makes me sadd... |
Reviewed By: Brandon Crane On: January 01, 2003 03:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have played FF8 and recognized the scenes that you use. I really enjoy how you fill in the empty space of story about Laguna. I can't wait for the other 3 chapters!
P.S. I think fanfiction.net's new policy sucked too. I'm glad great writers like you don't just stop presenting their work when you hit a wall like that. |
Reviewed By: ai_heiwa On: December 28, 2002 01:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great writing, nice and intriguing. I'm anticipating future chapters. Laguna, in my opinion, is perfectly in-character. A very enjoyable read, keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Aria Blaire On: December 27, 2002 01:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome fanfic! Actually gave me a picture in my mind and I felt as if I were there.. can't get much better than that. Do you have a sequel of some sort?! Greatness! :) |
Reviewed By: mtlxiaoangel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2002 16:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, this is sooo good! It made me so sad when Raine figured out that Laguna liked Julia. I'm loving it and dying to figure out how Laguna is doing with the red dragon! Please update! I really want to see how this turns out! ^^
Email me when you do: xoEnchantedAngelxo@yahoo.com
~*Enchanted Angel*~ |
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