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Title: Good Work!
Reviewed By: TerraChrno [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I have to say I'm very impressed. Not only were you able to write an amazingly good story, but you were able to write one about a relatively obscure couple (I can't count the number of times I have seen a Squall/Seifer fic. Talk about a total lack of originality) But, on to the critiquing. I noticed in various parts of the story that you forgot to put a space in a couple of places. Running over this with spellcheck, or going through it manually, should solve that problem. I also noticed that you didn't so much mispell words sometimes as you used the wrong word. Sorry that I don't have an example of it out on this, but it's there. Other than those tiny flaws, though, this is a well-crafted piece of writing, much deserving of this rating. Pity there isn't an actual money-making market for fanfiction
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Title: Awesome story!!
Reviewed By: Kellie On: May 07, 2004 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, just wanted to say that this story is one of my most favorite stories of all times! I just started reading it recently. Please update soon!! Keep up the good work! Kellie
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Reviewed By: EyesOfATragedy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is BY FAR one of my absolute favourite fan fictions. (I've told many friends about it.) Your style is very impressive, you capture the characters' personalities perfectly...Ahh, I just can't say enough good things about it. The only part that makes me sad is that is hasn't been updated in awhile. I know that writers have lives and can't always write when they want to, but I do hope that it will be finished someday.
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Reviewed By: AtheneMiranda On: August 07, 2003 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I first read this on FFN a year ago, would you believe? Chapter 14 was new to me, and it's great to see you keeping this thing burning now it's off FFN. It's one of those very rare fics that I regard as being, well, canon. It's a very original idea for a fanfic, and you've written it brilliantly. Please, write more of it. I think that there's some go in here yet. |
Reviewed By: PrinceAmeh On: July 23, 2003 23:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wonderful! Bravo! The writing was very explict. Something that was nice, and sweet and made sense! And the "lemon" part was not to rushy- very nice. Please continue chap. 15 soon!! |
Reviewed By: Nikki On: July 18, 2003 03:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awwwww... that is the sweetest thing. Kept me smiling almost the entire time. The way you've portrayed Laguna, Raine, and Elle makes them seem so real... it's really great how their personalities come to life. Shame how it ends up though, huh? Anyway, the suspension starts to build in my mind, as to the time when Laguna, Raine, and Ellone's lives change forever- as we all know they do. I wish it were'nt so! Well, good job as always, and keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Chibi-Moogle-Addy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 02:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it!! You must contiune!! |
Reviewed By: David On: July 16, 2003 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT FEW CHAPTERS !! I READ THE WHOLE THING IN ONE DAY AND I'M DYING FOR MORE !!!! I'VE BEATEN THE GAME SO I ...KNOW HAT HAPPENS TO RAINE, BUT IT'S EXCITING !! I LIKE HOW YOU ALSO MAKE RAINE ACT THE SAME AS SQUALL !!! BRILLIANT !!! |
Reviewed By: SgAltima [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 01:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's wonderful to see another submission, Arafel. I've been waiting a long while to see more of your story unfold, and the wait was definitely worth it. So many questions blossomed in your most recent Chapter 14, and I wonder if Laguna is to return from Timber after all. Is this the dreaded separation?
Kudos! Continue the excellent work.
SgAltima |
Reviewed By: Tairen oc Pirloth On: July 14, 2003 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An enchanting rendition of Laguna and Raine's growing relationship! I finished all fourteen chapters in one reading. Your diction is wonderful, absolutely wonderful. |
Reviewed By: Blade Redwind On: July 02, 2003 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved this. I don't come across many good NC-17 fics anymore, and this took the cake. Great character depth, great emotion and I loved seeing Ellon's relationship with Laguna and Raine. Very touching and extremely well written. |
Reviewed By: Slim On: April 09, 2003 15:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I remembered your fic from way back on ffn, and I've just re-read it (including extra chapter 13). It is still as amazing as it was before, the characterisation is spot on (even if Ellone does have quite an extended vocabulary for a four year old) and its just generally great. Keep it up. |
Reviewed By: Kenmei On: March 15, 2003 10:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This isn't just the best FF fic i've ever read, it's one of the best fics i've EVER read! Laguna's possibly more adorable than he was in the game - the skillet incident was pure genius - and you have given an incredible insight on Raine's character when she has all of about ten lines of dialogue in reality! And the spelling and grammar! This fic deserves an award for that alone! Fics that are different, interesting, tasteful, not about Squall and Seifer and actually make sense are like gold dust in this category, and... I'm babbling again... ^_^; Please keep writing, I NEED updates!!! |
Reviewed By: Vegetas Gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 11:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy!! Yay! This is so sweet! I can't wait for the next chapter but I'm afraid it's going to be getting scary soon (with Esther after Elle!) but please continue! The lemon was uh.....extremely well written, good job! *gives you a pat on the back* |
Reviewed By: Nikki On: March 05, 2003 23:11 CST
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Yes! Updates! This story is so well written. I really, really love the fact that you chose these characters. There love is so sad, and happy at the same time...I wonder how you will end this. Can't wait; good job with the chapters! |
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