| "Storm Front" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: ai_heiwa On: January 12, 2003 22:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sighs happily* You KNOW I love this story, don't you? I hope so because I do, very much. Gives me warm and fuzzy feelings and all that. Great characterization, description, and emmotion. No complaints here. Great job, I applaud you! |
Reviewed By: Vegetas Gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2002 13:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD! This is such a brilliant fanfic! I'm almost at a loss of words, almost ^_~ Your writing style is perfect, I never once got bored at all! It's so easy to read and it held my attention right to the end and I'm thirsty for more! I can't wait to find out what happens next! I was wondering when the first kiss would come, awwwwwwww! I'm a big Final Fantasy fanfic reader (lack of social life) and this is BY FAR the best I have ever read. It's nice to read a fanfic on Laguna and Raine, probably the most ill-fated couples in FF history, but as you say the most important in FF8. Well I can't wait for the next chapter and I'll be checking everyday to see if there's any updates ^__________^ Keep on writing!! ~Tasha |
Reviewed By: Nikki On: December 17, 2002 23:00 CST
Comment/Review:
WHOOOOO!!! Another chapter! And the first kiss!!! That was so sweet. I love the way you didn't make it hero saves damsel in distress, and they immediately kiss, and fall to the floor in a fury of passion. You spread things out, making them believable, and then made that wonderful scene with the kiss in the rain. That was perfect, simple, and yet so sweet. Anyway, GOOD job, you're an excellent writer, once again, so keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Nikki On: December 14, 2002 23:55 CST
Comment/Review:
WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER COMMING OUT!? |
Reviewed By: Keeren_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2002 19:33 CST
Comment/Review:
That was nice. Even though I wasn't able to keep the mood all the way through [I had to go to bed at the end of chapter 7] I really liked it ^_^ Keep it up, if you try short stories you might make somthing of yourself! |
Reviewed By: Vlakky [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2002 17:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh, excellent, excellent. This is extremely good writing, and I have to say that it's one of the first times a fanfic has kept me so captivated. The little details from the game are fantastic, and I'm a huge sucker for details like that. I can't wait until the next chapter. Please keep going! You're doing great! ^_^v |
Reviewed By: Nikki On: November 20, 2002 22:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, another chapter! Awwww that was so sweet, but poor Raine. When will they make a move!? Gosh, they are so perfect for eachother it drives me crazy. Anyway, a job nice done as always. Keep writing!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Nikki On: November 17, 2002 20:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Whoo...that got a little steamy.....but nonetheless, a good chapter. Laguna's really starting to break her down, which is a good thing ^^ Anyway, excellent work. I hope you keep writing, because this story is really good. |
Reviewed By: shaddeh [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 22:56 CST
Comment/Review:
YAY! An update!
I was surprised at how happy I was to see this pop up ^_~ And you certainly didn't disappoint! Brilliant job. :D Continue-continue-CONTINUE~!
Bravo. ^_^
~Shad |
Reviewed By: Nikki On: November 06, 2002 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet chapter; the end was really cute and funny, although I myself find burping out loud like that really gross.....I wonder when *something's* gonna happen btwn. them. Hopefully soon! Well keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Nikki On: October 27, 2002 19:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Only 4 people have reviewed this!? They must be crazy! This is an excellent fic, really. As said before, it's really hard to come across fics that are actually worth your time. I think the couple you chose is really awesome too. They're not really discussed much, which is actually quite a shame, since their love was quite beautiful & tragic. Anyway, you are an excellent author, and your ability to write is impressive. I'll be waiting for an update, so keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: KittyKatKween [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2002 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved it! You have just got to write more, especially if you keep up that outstanding grammar and spelling! *sighs* You don't know how difficult it is to find well-written fics these days! Write some more of this, if you please! |
Reviewed By: Kyheena On: September 30, 2002 20:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best Final Fantasy fanfics I have ever come across; unique and heart-warming at the same time. Great job! I'll be waiting for the rest! |
Reviewed By: Karlaimon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2002 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not a big reader, but this did catch my eye.
I will read the rest and mots likly enjoy them!
The blood and gore is cool, too! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Karlaimon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2002 14:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not a big reader, but this did catch my eye.
I will read the rest and mots likly enjoy them!
The blood and gore is cool, too! Keep it up!
By the way, I loke this a lot! |
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