| "Storm Front" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nikki On: January 15, 2003 19:35 CST
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Finally! Laguna & Raine are together!!!!!!!!! I'm soo happy. I adore FF8, and it is true how you fill in the unknowns from the game. Gah! But how can you leave the story at a point like that!? Oh well, I can wait. Good job on the work. I'm so glad I found this story! |
Reviewed By: Vegetas Gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 10:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gah! How could ya do that? Leave us all like that with a LEMON coming next, a big fat LEMON! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon because all us lemon fans out here are just DYING to read the next chapter! This was a good chapter, so sweet! KEEP GOING! |
Reviewed By: mtlxiaoangel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 21:19 CST
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HOLY CRAP...THIS IS SOO GOOD! DUN MAKE ME WAIT FER THE NEXT CHAPPIE PLEASE!! |
Reviewed By: dragon88 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 19:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loooooooooooooove it! Beautiful work! Positively stunning. I love how you described the dragon, and how Laguna and Raine argue, along with how you made Ellone act. the way you did this really seems to bring the characters to life. And you put my work to shame.More please! |
Reviewed By: SgAltima [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 02:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A most EXCELLENT fiction. People before me have commented on the rarity of finding a good fiction in the mass of the mediocre ones. Please let me expand in saying that it was most gratifying seeing a quality, tasteful fiction in the NC-17 section among all the tasteless lemons. Your scene was wonderfully written, and not created for the sake of writing it. I am impressed, and will be watching for updates. |
Reviewed By: Mei On: January 06, 2003 20:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been waiting for the next chapter for so long! I was making it a point not to comment until the story was done...This story is excellent, my favorite by far. I can just get into it. Please update soon, I can't wait. |
Reviewed By: mtlxiaoangel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2003 12:55 CST
Comment/Review:
why you stop?? :( makes me sadd... |
Reviewed By: Brandon Crane On: January 01, 2003 03:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have played FF8 and recognized the scenes that you use. I really enjoy how you fill in the empty space of story about Laguna. I can't wait for the other 3 chapters!
P.S. I think fanfiction.net's new policy sucked too. I'm glad great writers like you don't just stop presenting their work when you hit a wall like that. |
Reviewed By: ai_heiwa On: December 28, 2002 01:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great writing, nice and intriguing. I'm anticipating future chapters. Laguna, in my opinion, is perfectly in-character. A very enjoyable read, keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Aria Blaire On: December 27, 2002 01:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome fanfic! Actually gave me a picture in my mind and I felt as if I were there.. can't get much better than that. Do you have a sequel of some sort?! Greatness! :) |
Reviewed By: mtlxiaoangel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2002 16:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, this is sooo good! It made me so sad when Raine figured out that Laguna liked Julia. I'm loving it and dying to figure out how Laguna is doing with the red dragon! Please update! I really want to see how this turns out! ^^
Email me when you do: xoEnchantedAngelxo@yahoo.com
~*Enchanted Angel*~ |
Reviewed By: ai_heiwa On: January 12, 2003 22:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sighs happily* You KNOW I love this story, don't you? I hope so because I do, very much. Gives me warm and fuzzy feelings and all that. Great characterization, description, and emmotion. No complaints here. Great job, I applaud you! |
Reviewed By: Vegetas Gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2002 13:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD! This is such a brilliant fanfic! I'm almost at a loss of words, almost ^_~ Your writing style is perfect, I never once got bored at all! It's so easy to read and it held my attention right to the end and I'm thirsty for more! I can't wait to find out what happens next! I was wondering when the first kiss would come, awwwwwwww! I'm a big Final Fantasy fanfic reader (lack of social life) and this is BY FAR the best I have ever read. It's nice to read a fanfic on Laguna and Raine, probably the most ill-fated couples in FF history, but as you say the most important in FF8. Well I can't wait for the next chapter and I'll be checking everyday to see if there's any updates ^__________^ Keep on writing!! ~Tasha |
Reviewed By: Nikki On: December 17, 2002 23:00 CST
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WHOOOOO!!! Another chapter! And the first kiss!!! That was so sweet. I love the way you didn't make it hero saves damsel in distress, and they immediately kiss, and fall to the floor in a fury of passion. You spread things out, making them believable, and then made that wonderful scene with the kiss in the rain. That was perfect, simple, and yet so sweet. Anyway, GOOD job, you're an excellent writer, once again, so keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Nikki On: December 14, 2002 23:55 CST
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WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER COMMING OUT!? |
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