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| "Absence" Reviews/Comments [ 84 ] | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] | Reviewed By: bikichan On: October 13, 2002 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kirika...*sniff* That was one of the best rei/usagi fiction i ever read. I want to thank you for the enjoyment. I really am sorry this is late but im glad your okay from that accident i havent been really reviewing much cause of problems irl. But I Do hope to read more of your stories. I defintely want to read this fiction again. JA! | Reviewed By: p3originale On: October 13, 2002 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe it's actually over. i feel like a part of me is missing now. i'm one of your readers that was there from the beginning all the way to the end and i thought i would just let you know that i truly enjoyed you story. | Reviewed By: xGohanStrifex On: October 13, 2002 20:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Heh... so it's finally finished. Well, congradulations on finishing your first fanfic! ^_^ I say, I'm really glad you didn't let Fanfiction.net hold you back...
-gets yelled at by mediaminer.com's site master for free publicity, and is threatening to sue-
... Erm.. well, I'm glad you didn't let... uh.. I'm just glad you finished it ^_^
And what a great ending! I swear, I was really on edge on most parts of your story, and the action, which is my favorite thing about fanfics, was so well written, I could picture everything. The entire time Rei had left, and every fight she had gone through, I could picture in my head. It was so detailed, and continued to get more detailed as more battles occured when Rei returned ^_^;
I had a feeling the Time Gaurdian would find someone new ^_^; And glad to see the Senshi of Love isn't the only senshi who didn't have someone o_O that would of been akward.
So, a sequel in progress? Well now, I guess I shall have to be reading that now... well, when it comes out.
I hope you do write that comedy Fanfic soon ^_^; I haven't read a comedic fanfic in a while, and would like to see what you have in mind here =D
Well, I don't know much about Noir... well, actually, nothing at all, really o_O I have a friend who is an Anime Freak, and buys a bunch of DVD's, and I think she has one of those, so I'll be watching and researching and stuff for your upcoming fanfic, just so I can review it ^_^
Hope to see some more great work to come ^_^
-Your great, and superb reviewer and fan-
Gohan Strife,
-Will- | Reviewed By: Byakko Rei [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2002 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was the most riveting, well-balanced fanfic I have read to date... and that includes stories from some pretty 'hot-damn' authors. With a little grammatical help, this author will raise the bar for excellence in fanfic writing. Well done, Kirika! I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. | Reviewed By: Nora On: October 13, 2002 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh boy oh boy it's finished!! *sniff* It's so sweet!!! Oh how I loved this story, reading it from the very beginning! Thank you so much for bringing me some joy by writing this wonderful story!
PS I hate FF.net now too...those $&#^%%@#*&! | Reviewed By: Al Kristopher On: October 13, 2002 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
O Kirkia, how do we love thee? Let us count the ways!
We love thee for the depth and breadth of thy fanfic.
We love thee for the insane amounts of angst you force us to read, and we love thee for spooning happy and funny moments in between.
We love thee for dedicating hundreds of hours to one single story, proving quality over quantity.
We love thee for championing a pairing not often seen.
We love thee for thy deliciously insane amounts of gore and blood thou hast shown us.
We love thee for thy references to Noir.
We love thee for thy boundless knowledge and love of anime, manga, and fighting styles.
And yes, dear author, we even love thee for thy incessant ramblings.
...But we'd love thee more if thou wouldst write shorter chapters! Dost thou wishest us to stay up til' wee hours reading such a story?
...Tis thy decision, noble author, and for your contributions, we art forever grateful.
In short, you rock the house. | Reviewed By: EPM On: October 12, 2002 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!!! The end?!?!? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! What I am supposed to read now???............oh wait the sequel.....I'm fine now! I think the whole Rei being Chibi-Usa's mom was ALSO a bail out but who cares?? I have to agree that A) Of Demons and Love is a fantastic Rei/Usagi fic and B)Most Rei/Usa fics are the same.....my 'Fire on the Moon' being one of them. BUT thanks to you I am going to try and make 'Ghost Rider Rei' a more interesting romance/action fic so I hope you read it!! I know you'll find a good way of explaining how a Setsuna/Minako romance would work.....I know you just didn't put them together for the hell of it.....why can't this be a manga??? Sure it would take like 100 books at least to cover it but still!!!! BTW Have you seen that pic on reiandusagi.com with Usagi and the flowers Rei gave her on it?? The artist drew it JUST for you and this great fic.......that just proves that this is the greatest Rei/Usagi fic on the planet....thank you, goodnight and that's the game!!!!!!EPM has left the building!!!! | Reviewed By: cherub girl On: October 12, 2002 11:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it Love it!! So sad to see it end, but it was a wonderful fanfic. I was hooked into the story every second. You have a great gift for writing and I cannot wait for you to write another story!!!! | Reviewed By: Quistis On: October 11, 2002 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this has been the most enjoyable fanfic ive ever read....i am so sad to see it end...but so very grateful that it was concluded, unlike countless other fics that have drawn me in, and then left me hanging...THANK YOU!
I'll be looking for that Noir fic to be started soon, but even more so, I'll be looking for this sequal!!
You ROCK Kirika!!!
Quistis(GapKidd15@aol.com) | Reviewed By: Rogue Angel barton On: October 11, 2002 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of course, I'm in love with this fic, and a bit sad to see it end. But I am VERY happy with the ending. YAY! They were together! Of course, the overall rating and enjoyment factor has to be 10 since this is one of the best fics ive ever had the pleasure of reading. Hopefully there will be a sequal, since you're a totally brillant author. I'll be checking! | Reviewed By: Warui On: October 11, 2002 17:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sighs* You've finally finished it. That in and of itself is a good and bad thing. I shall truly miss waiting every week for the next update. Now I wait for the next fic.
I really liked how you ended this. Rei is happy, Setsuna isn't alone (or at least is working on not being so), and most importantly nobody died.(Well except of course a lot of youma and a few demons.)
This is the best story that I have ever read, original or fanfic. And I am glad to heard that you have thought of writing a sequel of sorts.
UGH!! I hate writing reviews, I cannever find the right words, so sorry.
With all of your great imagery has made it hard to do anything but like this story. I have managed to get a friend to read it. They never wouldread something like this...but after the first chapter they were hooked. I find it rather funny because she has absolutely no time to do it...now she makes the time.
Well I think I've made a fool out of myself for long enough...
Continue to create such wonderfully great fantasies in which one can lose themself completely.
Love the story, BAI!!! | Reviewed By: Dunefar On: October 11, 2002 16:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm.
Well, this fic is finally completed, eh? Hell of a good ride, indeed. :)
Anyway, on to the comments. Was it really nessesary to end up making the all the Senshi lesbians? -_- Minako and Setsuna was overkill, IMO. Getting together simply because all the other Senshi hooked up with each other doesn't cut the mustard for me. If you want to do a blossoming lesbian relationship in the next installment, why not soley focus on Chibi Usa and Hotaru instead? At least there is a strong framework to work with in that case instead of the nonexistant frame for a Minako/Setsuna pairing.
At any rate, just my two cents. | Reviewed By: Ghostdraconi On: October 11, 2002 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sad to see this end but the news of a possible sequel does make me feel better.
Thank you for sharing this incredible fic with the rest of us | Reviewed By: himitsu-no-hi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2002 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When i said I hope you write more soon-i really was not expecting to find the last two chapters up a second later^.^ but i was very pleased about it^.~
A lovely ending to a lovely story.
I thought the summary sections for everyone was great- I'm glad Tsubasa and san- San-(ick i've forgotten how to spell his name!) came out well in the end; they were blessable really.
For a second when i was reading Minako and Setsuna's last conversation I thought you were going to make chibi usa their child...I must be really tired.
I don't really want to blab on for half an hour about how wonderful this story is-because that you know already. Instead I'll just say this:
Thank you for the emotion, the action, the angst, the romance, the happy ending and most important-the entertainment-a truely amazing piece of work.
Thankyou and Kudos.
^-^
Looking forward to seeing more of your work!
Adios por ahora. | Reviewed By: himitsu-no-hi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2002 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't seem to write anything at all tangable today so please excuse the mess of this review~~
(It'd probably easier if I just said- ditto all the great things everyone else has said, but since you worked so hard on it...I should at least try to put a legiable sentence together right?)
Wonderful Chapter- as always kirika!
There is no one else who could sucessfully pull off Three(?) near death experiences of one character inside of one fic other than you.^-^ and beautifully written ones at that.
I said that the ending of the last chapter was profound- the (almost) ending of the story was beyond perfection. The battle bits (which seem to be somewhat of a speciality with you) were expertly done once again, the emotion was high but not over done-
I loved how you had Tuxedo Kamen save Mars^-^ thats certainly one way to get him on our good side ne? that part was amazing in its tension suspense-and ultimately relief.
The end of the chapter was great! I'm so glad that you gave us a happy ending! *does a happy dance* Rei's worked hard enough-she deserved it!!
^-^
I did see Usagi healing Rei coming-it just seemed like the automatic response I guess...I didnt expect the 'i love you' way in which she saved her though! That was an added bonus^.-
so ahum- I loved it great work! and Big Kudos^.^
Hope you get the next chapter out soon! | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] |
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