| "Absence" Reviews/Comments [ 84 ] |
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Reviewed By: xGohanStrifex On: October 10, 2002 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, they don't give a billion out of ten, so... O_O Wow... I really did tear up through out the story. Such a great ending, I could not have thought of one any better ^_^;;;;
So glad that th is story is still going strong, even tho FF.net decided to be bastards. =/ It matters not. What matters is that you didn't let a mild challenge stand in the way of finishing your great, touching, action-pact story ^_^
Can't wait for the ending.
-Will- |
Reviewed By: Miko633 On: October 10, 2002 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there Kirika you meanie!!!! I think you forgot to e-mail me and tell me you were going to post here!!!!! I'm very annoyed with you for forgetting but I am glad that I finally got to read the next chapter!!!!! This was awsome!!!! It was your best fight scene yet, with more blood and gore and way cool awsome fight scenes and all of the really great stuff that your story is made of!!!!!!!! I loved the whole resurection part it was awsome Mamoru's link to Usagi was ripped out of him and placed in Rei and now they can live happily ever after!!!!! Sequel Sequel!!!! That is after you post the next two chapters can't wait for them so please post them soon!!!!!!!!! Till then ~Miko~ |
Reviewed By: Silverpaw On: October 10, 2002 00:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kirika from fanfic writer to fanfic writer. I must say this was one of the BEST stories i have every read. I am a total Rei and Usagi fan and this story really touch my heart.
Kirika if you can, please email me at Quita_Valentine@hotmail.com it would be a great honor if i could post your work on my site. Keep up the good work and i hope to read many more of your works.
Oh and a lil word about FF.net :p to them. they don't know what they lost. But as the saying goes 'one mans trash is another mans treasure' and indeed your work is a treasure. |
Reviewed By: p3originale On: October 09, 2002 13:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been following this story since you started it and i must say that i have really become attached to it. i can't believe fanfiction.net is taking it off of their site! i'm just glad you were able to find another place to post it. keep up the great work. it's an AWESOME story. |
Reviewed By: Ruka-chan On: October 08, 2002 22:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've loved your fic from the start! I can't believe FF.NET though.. those sick bastards... |
Reviewed By: Dunefar On: October 07, 2002 13:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm.
A good chapter for the most part, but I do have a few hangups about it. I don't like how you killed Makerus(sp?) much. Having Rei get up after all that and get a killing blow in pushed believability too far, I found myself muttering 'whatever' and shaking my head as I read that. She'd been beaten, cut, impaled and demoralized before that, yet manages to kill him anyway? I just can't buy that, even with how you've set up Rei, it's just too much.
My other bone to pick is Rei being resurrected. Sure, it's possible in the Sailor Moon universe, but I don't think it meshes well with the tone you've set in your fic.
Otherwise, a good job. |
Reviewed By: Saxxmann5000 On: October 06, 2002 13:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read it when it was on FF.net and couldn't wait to read the next part...still can't wait to read the next installment!
FF.net doesn't know what they are losing! |
Reviewed By: Steele Dragon On: October 05, 2002 10:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant!
I certainly didn't see thewhole scene with the crysal coming - i was afraid that rie would end up some kind of guardian spirit, only reappearing when usagi was in danger - ya know, like the blonde chick in the first conan movie, coming back from the spirit world when her love is threatened.
those pricks at ff.net don't know what their missing by getting rid of such a gifted writer - i loved the final fight between Rei and Makareus
Rei + Usagi 4 ever |
Reviewed By: RavenShadow On: October 05, 2002 01:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You made this boy cry.
Not hard to do since I'm a hopeless romantic,
but still...
Fight scenes were the best! |
Reviewed By: Project2501 On: October 04, 2002 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kirika, you really know how to create an emotional "rollercoaster". Chapter 58 stands as a premier work of fanfiction within itself, though I could not honestly discount a single chapter, paragraph, or sentence throughout the entire work. Absence stands as the greatest sailor moon fan fiction ever imagined, if not the most detailed and expressive anime fanfic ever. I honestly can not wait until you start on your next project!
You truly have a gift in regards to your creativity. Perhaps you should direct your efforts towards a professional career as an author. I am a published author (non-fiction for me, but I do know great work when I read it), and I can clearly see your great talent for writing and expressing yourself. Keep up the great work!
And by the way; yes, the FF.net admins are jerks for tossing your 700+ reviews. Also, props to Bill over at reiandusagi.com for pointing me towards this site, as I was suffering from fanfic withdrawl without regular updates of this amazing tale. |
Reviewed By: NovemberBlues On: October 04, 2002 01:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i give it a 10 because Kirika-san make the storey so thrilling and suspenful and yet she did not forget to add the love and romance into it too.and i actually cry when usagi choode moma over rei... and i don't cry very often...Great fics. hope to read more. |
Reviewed By: Nipala On: October 03, 2002 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great, kirika. Have been reading this fic since last feb but never commented until now. Shame on me. >. |
Reviewed By: Tenkaichi On: October 03, 2002 01:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Lol, I'm not even going to use the rating system because this story is more than a "10" Kirika ^_^. This really tops the story, I enjoyed reading the fight scenes (so dramatic!).
98% done, eh? We're happy to know the ending, but we're sad that it's going to end...boooooh. :(
I'll be waiting for that last chapter, ja ne!
Tenkaichi |
Reviewed By: biki On: October 02, 2002 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sugoi!!!!!! That was the best chapter i ever read! I loved it and cried! thanks kirika! |
Reviewed By: Warui On: October 02, 2002 15:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh this is so GREAT!!! I love this fic. It's the GREATEST in the ENTIRE world!
The entire thing has been just one emotional roller coaster. I had no idea if I should be crying of beaming in happiness. I love you fight scenes, I can see it ALL in my mind's eye.
It was total anguish for me to wait for you to update. *shakes fist furiously* Stupid idiotic ff.net. It's lost a great author and a great fic.
I think it would be GREAT if this fic could be illistrated or animated...but I think it would just take away from what it is.
Well I'm going to go and sulk until you update. *grins like a maniac* Or go and read the entire thing again!
BAI BAI!!!! |
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