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Reviewed By: Rogue Angel barton On: October 11, 2002 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of course, I'm in love with this fic, and a bit sad to see it end. But I am VERY happy with the ending. YAY! They were together! Of course, the overall rating and enjoyment factor has to be 10 since this is one of the best fics ive ever had the pleasure of reading. Hopefully there will be a sequal, since you're a totally brillant author. I'll be checking! |
Reviewed By: Warui On: October 11, 2002 17:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sighs* You've finally finished it. That in and of itself is a good and bad thing. I shall truly miss waiting every week for the next update. Now I wait for the next fic.
I really liked how you ended this. Rei is happy, Setsuna isn't alone (or at least is working on not being so), and most importantly nobody died.(Well except of course a lot of youma and a few demons.)
This is the best story that I have ever read, original or fanfic. And I am glad to heard that you have thought of writing a sequel of sorts.
UGH!! I hate writing reviews, I cannever find the right words, so sorry.
With all of your great imagery has made it hard to do anything but like this story. I have managed to get a friend to read it. They never wouldread something like this...but after the first chapter they were hooked. I find it rather funny because she has absolutely no time to do it...now she makes the time.
Well I think I've made a fool out of myself for long enough...
Continue to create such wonderfully great fantasies in which one can lose themself completely.
Love the story, BAI!!! |
Reviewed By: Dunefar On: October 11, 2002 16:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm.
Well, this fic is finally completed, eh? Hell of a good ride, indeed. :)
Anyway, on to the comments. Was it really nessesary to end up making the all the Senshi lesbians? -_- Minako and Setsuna was overkill, IMO. Getting together simply because all the other Senshi hooked up with each other doesn't cut the mustard for me. If you want to do a blossoming lesbian relationship in the next installment, why not soley focus on Chibi Usa and Hotaru instead? At least there is a strong framework to work with in that case instead of the nonexistant frame for a Minako/Setsuna pairing.
At any rate, just my two cents. |
Reviewed By: Ghostdraconi On: October 11, 2002 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sad to see this end but the news of a possible sequel does make me feel better.
Thank you for sharing this incredible fic with the rest of us |
Reviewed By: himitsu-no-hi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2002 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When i said I hope you write more soon-i really was not expecting to find the last two chapters up a second later^.^ but i was very pleased about it^.~
A lovely ending to a lovely story.
I thought the summary sections for everyone was great- I'm glad Tsubasa and san- San-(ick i've forgotten how to spell his name!) came out well in the end; they were blessable really.
For a second when i was reading Minako and Setsuna's last conversation I thought you were going to make chibi usa their child...I must be really tired.
I don't really want to blab on for half an hour about how wonderful this story is-because that you know already. Instead I'll just say this:
Thank you for the emotion, the action, the angst, the romance, the happy ending and most important-the entertainment-a truely amazing piece of work.
Thankyou and Kudos.
^-^
Looking forward to seeing more of your work!
Adios por ahora. |
Reviewed By: himitsu-no-hi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2002 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't seem to write anything at all tangable today so please excuse the mess of this review~~
(It'd probably easier if I just said- ditto all the great things everyone else has said, but since you worked so hard on it...I should at least try to put a legiable sentence together right?)
Wonderful Chapter- as always kirika!
There is no one else who could sucessfully pull off Three(?) near death experiences of one character inside of one fic other than you.^-^ and beautifully written ones at that.
I said that the ending of the last chapter was profound- the (almost) ending of the story was beyond perfection. The battle bits (which seem to be somewhat of a speciality with you) were expertly done once again, the emotion was high but not over done-
I loved how you had Tuxedo Kamen save Mars^-^ thats certainly one way to get him on our good side ne? that part was amazing in its tension suspense-and ultimately relief.
The end of the chapter was great! I'm so glad that you gave us a happy ending! *does a happy dance* Rei's worked hard enough-she deserved it!!
^-^
I did see Usagi healing Rei coming-it just seemed like the automatic response I guess...I didnt expect the 'i love you' way in which she saved her though! That was an added bonus^.-
so ahum- I loved it great work! and Big Kudos^.^
Hope you get the next chapter out soon! |
Reviewed By: xGohanStrifex On: October 10, 2002 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, they don't give a billion out of ten, so... O_O Wow... I really did tear up through out the story. Such a great ending, I could not have thought of one any better ^_^;;;;
So glad that th is story is still going strong, even tho FF.net decided to be bastards. =/ It matters not. What matters is that you didn't let a mild challenge stand in the way of finishing your great, touching, action-pact story ^_^
Can't wait for the ending.
-Will- |
Reviewed By: Miko633 On: October 10, 2002 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there Kirika you meanie!!!! I think you forgot to e-mail me and tell me you were going to post here!!!!! I'm very annoyed with you for forgetting but I am glad that I finally got to read the next chapter!!!!! This was awsome!!!! It was your best fight scene yet, with more blood and gore and way cool awsome fight scenes and all of the really great stuff that your story is made of!!!!!!!! I loved the whole resurection part it was awsome Mamoru's link to Usagi was ripped out of him and placed in Rei and now they can live happily ever after!!!!! Sequel Sequel!!!! That is after you post the next two chapters can't wait for them so please post them soon!!!!!!!!! Till then ~Miko~ |
Reviewed By: Silverpaw On: October 10, 2002 00:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kirika from fanfic writer to fanfic writer. I must say this was one of the BEST stories i have every read. I am a total Rei and Usagi fan and this story really touch my heart.
Kirika if you can, please email me at Quita_Valentine@hotmail.com it would be a great honor if i could post your work on my site. Keep up the good work and i hope to read many more of your works.
Oh and a lil word about FF.net :p to them. they don't know what they lost. But as the saying goes 'one mans trash is another mans treasure' and indeed your work is a treasure. |
Reviewed By: p3originale On: October 09, 2002 13:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been following this story since you started it and i must say that i have really become attached to it. i can't believe fanfiction.net is taking it off of their site! i'm just glad you were able to find another place to post it. keep up the great work. it's an AWESOME story. |
Reviewed By: Ruka-chan On: October 08, 2002 22:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've loved your fic from the start! I can't believe FF.NET though.. those sick bastards... |
Reviewed By: Dunefar On: October 07, 2002 13:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm.
A good chapter for the most part, but I do have a few hangups about it. I don't like how you killed Makerus(sp?) much. Having Rei get up after all that and get a killing blow in pushed believability too far, I found myself muttering 'whatever' and shaking my head as I read that. She'd been beaten, cut, impaled and demoralized before that, yet manages to kill him anyway? I just can't buy that, even with how you've set up Rei, it's just too much.
My other bone to pick is Rei being resurrected. Sure, it's possible in the Sailor Moon universe, but I don't think it meshes well with the tone you've set in your fic.
Otherwise, a good job. |
Reviewed By: Saxxmann5000 On: October 06, 2002 13:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read it when it was on FF.net and couldn't wait to read the next part...still can't wait to read the next installment!
FF.net doesn't know what they are losing! |
Reviewed By: Steele Dragon On: October 05, 2002 10:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant!
I certainly didn't see thewhole scene with the crysal coming - i was afraid that rie would end up some kind of guardian spirit, only reappearing when usagi was in danger - ya know, like the blonde chick in the first conan movie, coming back from the spirit world when her love is threatened.
those pricks at ff.net don't know what their missing by getting rid of such a gifted writer - i loved the final fight between Rei and Makareus
Rei + Usagi 4 ever |
Reviewed By: RavenShadow On: October 05, 2002 01:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You made this boy cry.
Not hard to do since I'm a hopeless romantic,
but still...
Fight scenes were the best! |
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