| "Dominion" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bronze Eagle [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2002 19:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Man .... That was one heck of an ending. Not that it's over yet. Epilouge!! ::crosses fingers in hopes of lemony goodness:: Everyone's happy ... even Turles. Gotta feel sorry for the kid, even if he did try to kill Kakkarot and Vejiita-sama. Here's for Vejiita x Kakkarot, and maybe Bardock x Turles. ^^ Ja ne, minna-chan, and happy holidays!! |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2002 14:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been saving this fic for last, until I had time to sit and read it, and my five year old is ready to call DCFS and report me for neglect! I've spent my entire afternoon here reading!!
WOW is about the most coherent thought I can wrap my brain around right now. This fic was absolutely AMAZING!
It goes without saying that you write among the best yaoi lemons in the fandom, so I'm not at all surprised at how wonderful they were. The story, however, blew me away upon it's own merits! Excellent plotline, reference to events in earlier chapters are related in later chapters (which seems to be rare lately! Many authors seem to forget what they wrote early on!), richly developed characters. Just an all around wonderful fic! I'm anxiously awaiting the epilogue! Can we hope for a Turles X Bardock lemon? ~bats eyelashes~
The fact that I have now read ALL of your fics (at least here at MM) just struck me. WAAAAAAH!!! I can't believe I don't have any more to look forward to reading in the immediate future! I SINCERELY hope that you continue putting out the excellent quality fics that you have been writing! :o) |
Reviewed By: Chanchan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2002 13:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has to be one of the most awesome DBZ fics I've read in a while. I loved the fact that for a change, Vegeta is the stronger one. I can't wait for the epilogue. Truly, one magnificant story. |
Reviewed By: Silver On: December 01, 2002 10:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic. it had angst and romance and action and most importantly... yaoi. I hope you write more xero!!! gambate!!!
Silver |
Reviewed By: LadyJessy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2002 15:34 CST
Comment/Review:
WOW! That was great! After reading chapter 15, i was going to rage and scream at you for not letting Goku go Super Sayain, however, Chapter 16 was put up before i got a chance to review and i'm very happy with it!!! Its awesome!!! It was a such a good, story, i sort of hate to see it end, but i'd be pissed if you didn't end it too.... maybe a sequel??? Anyways, i hope there is a lemon or something in the epolouge. I'd like to see more of Bradock's and Turles relationship too. |
Reviewed By: Maya On: November 25, 2002 15:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How you describe all these details is unic, and the discriptions of feelings and thoughts is the greatest I've ever read.
I love the charachters which you choose, I love the parrings, I love everything.
Sky, write as much as possible cause I love it,
I just simply adore your fics. Go on forever. |
Reviewed By: Jady [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2002 14:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*spins around* Yay! Beautiful! Just beautiful! One of my favorite stories ever! So beautifully intertwined. Just beautiful. Is there a limit on that word? I'm so happy it had a happy ending! Veggie/Kakarrotto 4ever! Lol! Only gripe I have is that Raditzu was all alone. *sob* My lil Raditzu! *hugs Raditzu* I still love you. *is flung across the room in disgust*
Lol!
~Jady |
Reviewed By: Jady [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2002 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AH! I love this story!!! It's woven so well. I swear, I think I've cried a buncha times! I really hope it has a happy ending! Really really really! *sob* Not my Veggie-chan!!! *grabs Nappa* Let's go kill ff.net for taking away this story there! They don't know the horrific crime they've commited for taking away his works and depriving unknowing fans of such work!
Nappa: Violence? Sure, I'm in!
Jady: YEAH! *Jady and Nappa fly off*
Please please continue soon! |
Reviewed By: Serenestorm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2002 18:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! How could you cut off there? Talk about leaving a person in suspence. Well, you'd better update soon, or I'll kidnap you, put you in a dark room with a widescreen tv, and force you to watch reruns of Mash!! I'll do it too! Mwahwahhaha!! Insert more evil laughter here:
Seriously, I love this fic. Hope ya update soon. |
Reviewed By: Nuria On: November 22, 2002 16:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best fanfic I've ever read. I'm going to cry when it's over. Sorry about the lack of constructive criticism, but there's so little to be critical of in this story. |
Reviewed By: Raiyden On: November 22, 2002 04:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This storie is just awesome! After you post a new chapter I hunger for the next, you know how to keep you're readers on the tip of their chairs. |
Reviewed By: gunshou On: November 17, 2002 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Beautiful. I've read a lot of explanations for Turles, but you're the first I've seen to make him Bardock's brother. What a compelling story, with a wonderful characterization of the Saiyajin race. Goku just begs for victimization, ne? I love it. Please don't keep us all in suspense for long. |
Reviewed By: Bronze Eagle [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2002 20:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Man, V-sama is just oblivious, isn't he? Too confident about Goku-chan's (couldn't spell his other name to save my life) feelings for him to realize how much he wants to kill him, no da. ^^;;;; And Turles has a few issues too, ne? Whoo. That boy has got his plate loaded. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! Ja ne, minna-chan!! |
Reviewed By: SoccerVegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2002 16:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lUV U! U roxx my SOXX! DIs story is so PhAT yO! I can't be waiting 4 yUR update! mORE soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*cackles* Did mine come close to being as bad as the other one? But it really was a good chapter, I can't wait to see how you resolve of this! It keeps getting better and better!
Ash |
Reviewed By: Nuria On: November 15, 2002 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The numbers speak for themselves. |
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