| "Yumenimo" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 01:54 CST
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lol the thing with puar was funny. oh by the way i read an interview with the creator of DBZ and it said that puar was definatly a girl..... but not a cat... weird huh... lol i think she has a thing for yamcha as well... |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 22:33 CST
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Ack! You just had to leave me hangin' there! Oh well, at least Yamcha's out of the picture! :) Hmm, is that going to ruin her Star Wars watchin', banana split eatin' evening with Vegeta? Hope not. Of course it only makes sense that it would. Aaahhh, I don't know. Maybe after passing out from crying so much she could have a dream where Vegeta was dressed up as a Jedi and she could could be Senator and they could have a wild night of passion in the space ship and....Uh sorry about that. Too many thoughts pouring in too quickly. Vegeta's going to eat all the ice cream and watch the rest of the movie..blah blah. I'm just gonna shut the hell up now, because I'm not even making sense to myself. Sorry for this horrendous review. Heh heh. No more Starbucks for me!:) |
Reviewed By: Chick On: January 22, 2003 21:02 CST
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I'm loving the story it's really good!!!! keep up the good work!!! |
Reviewed By: Tina Lang On: January 22, 2003 17:41 CST
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I'm very disappointed in you! I was hoping that Bulma would heft up Veggie's big ol' banana split in her arms, spin it around like a discus, and toss it at Yam****'s ****in' HEAD!!! *sigh* But we can't always have what we want, can we?
Grrr ... but Yamcha is just SUCH a bastard!! (and acutally I'm pretty sure Puar IS a girl! at least she sounds like one in the dub, but it's not like that means anything -.-;;) I hate him so much!!! GRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!
Anywho, this chapter was GREAT!! (except it would have been better if that bastard Yamcha never showed up at ALL but ... that's just me ^.^;;)
It had MANY memorable lines! Such as:
"Her hands were covered in ice-cream, fudge, juice from the strawberries, and general sticky goodness." Ok, out of context, that sounds a little dirty. ^.~
"So you're calling him a lesbian shape shifting cat because he talks to me? Hell, you don't even know his sex, so for all you know . . . he's gay for you." YES!! LESBIAN SHAPE SHIFTING CATS!! lol ... I love that line ... I think i'll stare at it for awhile, and keep on laughing ... O.O
And there were more but I'm too lazy to go look for them ^.~
KEEP UP THE EXCELLENT/WONDERFUL WORK, AND PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZE WRITE A LEMON INTO THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!! |
Reviewed By: John Stewart On: January 15, 2003 22:01 CST
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Keep them chapters coming! |
Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Another great chapter!! ^.^ I can't wait to read the next one! *reminds herself to go rent a copy of the movie before reading the next chapter so she's not completely clueless*
And do I sense a sex/banana split thing going on? ^.~ I hope so!! Keep up the good work and hope you upload another chapter soon! ^.~ |
Reviewed By: Pammy On: January 10, 2003 10:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was pretty funny in parts, especially Bulma arguing with herself. She's as nutty as Vegeta is. Cute couple! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 16:51 CST
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I know some of the things I complained about in Episode II and I'm a diehard Star Wars fan. I even got into an argument with a customer at work over it once. Uh anyway, how about Obi Wan's beard, YUCK! Or that Anakin is such a baby. Just a thought. I liked your chapter and for some reason, I picture Vegeta to be a Star Wars kind of man, er alien. Maybe its just me. |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 16:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL i like the part she was arguing with her self. great job keep going ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Maxelle On: January 05, 2003 21:52 CST
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Holy Crap! This is good. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Lina On: January 05, 2003 09:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great as always. Short and sweet. |
Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2003 03:37 CST
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Yay! You have no idea how long I've been waiting for this new chapter! It was well worth the wait--I don't think I've ever read a fic where Vegeta was compared to toast before; that was GREAT!!! ^.^
I can't wait to read chapter 4! Keep up the good work and I hope you update soon!! ^.^
Oh yeah, and that last line was GREAT--I loved it! I literally squealed out loud with glee when I read it! ^.~
Love, Tina |
Reviewed By: Vampkestrel On: January 05, 2003 02:15 CST
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lol keep going |
Reviewed By: Carolyn On: December 21, 2002 18:17 CST
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BULMA! Love her. Anyway, excellant story. Can't wait to see more of Vegeta in the next chapter. *hint, hint* |
Reviewed By: Maxelle On: December 20, 2002 12:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm always down for the Bulma angst since she's my favorite character of all times! Of course, when Vegeta shows up it's always a good time. Can't wait to see what you have in store for Bulma and Vegeta. Very nice story you've put together. |
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