| "Yumenimo" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: raccly e.r 17 On: June 29, 2005 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im reivewing for all of the chap's in this reivew.. This is a GREAT fic so fare!!! It's go drama, really good humor, (that I have takin notes on, and ask for your apruval if I may use some of the lines in my fic's?) romance, and *blush* a good 'sorta' lemon...Since it wasn't really..well, you get it..I hope you up-date agin!!and, try checkin out my fic's! my e-mail is raccly_er@yahoo.com! And, I to have a accout here, and at FF.net! lol. P.S: i'll be reivewing more of your fic's soon as I can! -raccly e.r 17
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Reviewed By: teardrops2m On: March 24, 2005 23:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fic cant wait till its updated.
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2003 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you ever going to update?!!!! |
Reviewed By: outtadaloop [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've already read this over at ff.net but I just want to leave more compliments since I reread it. Again, I really like your approach of alternating between B and V's POV ~ very realistic, non-OOC and extremely entertaining. I liked the aftermath response from both of them. I like it when they warm up to each other slowly instead of just instantly falling in love and screwing each other (many B/V's fall into this category- hey I like lemons but it's way better with a good plot). Once again, this is one well-written, engrossing B/V get-together - plz finish it some day! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2003 20:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
CONTINUEEE!!!!! I LOVED IT! PLEASE MOREE!!!!!!! AND MORE LEMONNNNN!!!!!! WHOOOHOOOOO!
It wasant confusing to me so oh well WRITE MORE DAMN U !!! IM craving more!!
LATER! |
Reviewed By: kureeji [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 15:56 CST
Comment/Review:
This story is written so well...youre awesome. |
Reviewed By: dragonlady sakura On: March 08, 2003 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need a higher score than all 10's. That scene with Bulma and Vegeta...whew! Lemon-riffic. The next chapter can't come soon enough. |
Reviewed By: Maxelle On: March 08, 2003 09:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing, awesome, fabulous, etc. I can go on and on. Nice plausible breakup with Yamcha that leaves room for the BETTER man Vegeta to move in. Loved it. |
Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 06:19 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! This is the best chapter yet! It keeps getting better and better. And you actually put up the lemon! Yay!! ^.^ It was so good, one of the best I've ever read! Hmm, and I wonder what made Veggie-poo so amorous all of a sudden? ^.~ Heehee, I think I know! ^.~
Keep up the good work, and write more soon ... I can't wait for the "morning after"! ^.^
Love, Tina
PS More lemons in the future would be good, too! ^.~ And ... IS he?!?!?! |
Reviewed By: Viny88 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 03:02 CST
Comment/Review:
I like how the story is playing out. Its a fun fic and I love how eveyones thoughts are exposed. And more frankly, that they are believable. A lot of times, thoughts are portrayed as would be expected from a friggin' dictionary, and I'm glad your one of the few authors that understand thoughts are usually very well...odd. Hey, that's why we don't speak most of our thoughts aloud, nay? lol, I actually can relate to some of Bulma's thoughts. hehe...
...o_0....ahem...well, update soon!
p.s
you should check out some of my fanfictions, if you're a B/V lover as I suppose you are, I believe you'll find them most intriguing!
Bye!
...did I mention to update soon? Ok, fine, so I did, but I'll say it again anyways...
UPDATE SOON! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: John Stewart On: March 07, 2003 22:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lemon has become my new favorite word in the dictionary! Since the foreplay has commenced with Bulma and Vegeta, it'll be getting even hotter between these two. Yes! And can I say, nice fight with Bulma and Yamcha. What a clever way to get rid of him. |
Reviewed By: Pammy On: March 07, 2003 21:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Fans self* Alright! I don't hate Yamcha, but I'm sure glad he's gone. Hope his butt stays gone. Vegeta and Bulma have chemistry! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 19:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SWEEET SWETTTT SWEETTTT! LemoN!!!!! 2 thumbs way wayyyyyyy up!!
I want more more more! The way u wrote it I mean it was very very good! I loved it! Please continue and please Update soon! u have an avid fan and reader!
Later! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 18:49 CST
Comment/Review:
Ooh, me likes! Must have more, MORE I TELL YOU!
Hee hee. Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 18:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Great lemon ^^
I loved it
CONTINUE SOON |
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