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| "Yumenimo" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] | | Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 16:51 CST
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I know some of the things I complained about in Episode II and I'm a diehard Star Wars fan. I even got into an argument with a customer at work over it once. Uh anyway, how about Obi Wan's beard, YUCK! Or that Anakin is such a baby. Just a thought. I liked your chapter and for some reason, I picture Vegeta to be a Star Wars kind of man, er alien. Maybe its just me. | Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 16:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL i like the part she was arguing with her self. great job keep going ^_^ | Reviewed By: Maxelle On: January 05, 2003 21:52 CST
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Holy Crap! This is good. ^_^ | Reviewed By: Lina On: January 05, 2003 09:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great as always. Short and sweet. | Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2003 03:37 CST
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Yay! You have no idea how long I've been waiting for this new chapter! It was well worth the wait--I don't think I've ever read a fic where Vegeta was compared to toast before; that was GREAT!!! ^.^
I can't wait to read chapter 4! Keep up the good work and I hope you update soon!! ^.^
Oh yeah, and that last line was GREAT--I loved it! I literally squealed out loud with glee when I read it! ^.~
Love, Tina | Reviewed By: Vampkestrel On: January 05, 2003 02:15 CST
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lol keep going | Reviewed By: Carolyn On: December 21, 2002 18:17 CST
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BULMA! Love her. Anyway, excellant story. Can't wait to see more of Vegeta in the next chapter. *hint, hint* | Reviewed By: Maxelle On: December 20, 2002 12:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm always down for the Bulma angst since she's my favorite character of all times! Of course, when Vegeta shows up it's always a good time. Can't wait to see what you have in store for Bulma and Vegeta. Very nice story you've put together. | Reviewed By: Tina Lang On: December 06, 2002 22:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, sorry, too lazy to sign in ... umm, I'm just saying that my previous review about the update ... hehe, well the reason i didn't notice anything different (and I'm so stupid for JUST realizing this) was becuz i read the 2nd chapter on ff.n before i found out that it was here ... and the 2nd chapter on ff.net was already the updated one!! ^.^ Gosh, I sure feel like a fool for not noticing that sooner ... -.-;; (and I didn't even figure it out myself, my bf did X.X)
So, congratulations on your 2 year anniversary next monday ^.~ And keep up the good work with your writing! I can't wait to read the next chapter update!
Love,
Tina | Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2002 05:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O ... M ... G ... you mean to tell me that the second chapter has been out for a WHOLE MONTH and I MISSED IT?!??!?!! GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!
Ahem. Sorry about that ... I was just so eagerly anticipating the second chapter for so long ... and then I only found it, just a few minutes ago, on ff.net ... and I wuz like OMG!!! And I wuz so happy, and I wondered if you had put the second chapter up here ... and then I come here ... and what do I find, that the second chapter has been up since NOVEMBER 7th?!?!?!?!??!!?? And for some reason I NEVER KNEW THIS AND HAVE BEEN WAITING ALL THIS TIME IN EAGER ANTICIPATION WHEN REALLY I DIDN'T EVEN HAVE TO WAIT AT ALL?!??!?!?!?!? GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
Phew. Well, I feel much better now, after venting. No ... wait a second ... I don't!!! You know, I don't think I'll be feeling any better until ... (C'mon, you know what I'm gonna say! ^.~) ... that's right ... UNTIL YOU UPDATE AND GIVE ME A NEW CHAPTER TO MAKE UP FOR THE FACT THAT I MISSED THE LAST ONE BY NEARLY AN ENTIRE FREAKIN' MONTH!!! Damn I am so pissed off right now (at myself and my own stupidity for not actually checking to see if there was another chapter, STOOPID STOOPID TINA!!!) ... and yet, there's still hope! ^.~ The hope that you will write another chapter soon, and that the Star Wars 2 DVD will come out soon (if it hasn't already? o.O I'm so clueless! I think I might be a closet blond, too, xangeliz91487x!!! But then when I tried to bleach my hair, years and years ago, it came out ORANGE!!!! DAMMITT!! NOTHING EVER GOES MY WAY!! *SOB!!!!*)
Anywho ... ignore me ... I explained my craziness in my review at ff.n ... dang, ranting makes me tired!! But anywho ... ummm ... yeah ... so ... please don't hate me!! ^.^;;; I'm not REALLY crazy ... I'm just obsessively in love with this fic ... not stalkerly obsessive tho, just ... ummm .... *is sweating profusely and sitting in a puddle of my own sweat* ummm .... you know what I mean!! Don't you????
Oh yeah and pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeze write a lemon!!! Lemons are so ... lemony!! And have you ever tried dousing a banana split with lemon juice?! Well, it tastes really really disgusting, but it sure is sexy! ^.~ Ok, you can just ignore me now (as if you weren't doing that already!) ^.~
The actual Review part of the Review: I LOVE IT!! WRITE MORE AND WRITE A LEMON!! AND UPDATE SOON!! THANK YOU!!!
Love,
Tina | Reviewed By: raska [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2002 22:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice work so far. The flashbacks are a little disconcerting, but I will get used to them. They give meaning to the things that happen, anyway. I can't wait for Vegeta to make an entrance. just one thing-The large spaces inbetween the sentences were a little distracting. Felt like I was scrolling more than I was reading. I'll be here for the next chapter, though. great job! Star wars forever. | Reviewed By: Dawn Dusk [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2002 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! this is really really good so far! I can't wait to read the rest of it! keep it coming!!~Dawn Dusk | Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2002 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice nice, just one lovely comment...what is it that bulma 'can't' tell her mother? i honestly couldn't pick that up. itz not ur fault i'm just incredibly ditzy, my friends pick up my black hair all the time and go 'is there any blonde underneath there?' so don't worry about it, maybe i'll just go and read the chapter again, and see if i can pick it up. o btw: great great chapter, i will most certainly be looking for your reviews. | Reviewed By: Tina On: October 24, 2002 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is a GREAT start to this fic! You should definitely continue, I can't wait to see what happens next!
Although, personally ... I think that, instead of (or even with? o.0) the banana split, there could be a lemon ... and then something other than the banana would be split! ^.~
Hehe, don't mind my dirty comments, I just love lemons! But even if you don't put one in there, I look forward to reading more of this fic! | Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2002 20:20 CST
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Gosh, you can tell my memory's really really bad becuz I just read chapter 2 last night, er, I mean, this morning *blush* and after reading the updated version I was hoping I could go "Ooh! Ooh! There's something different before!" but I couldn't notice anything different ... because I couldn't even remember anything about it from this morning ... but then again that could just be becuz I got no sleep last night and was busy all day and am now just about ready to collapse ... or something like that! ^.^
Anywho, chapter 2 STILL makes me cry, even when I'm just RE-reading it!! (and that's really good, becuz usually if I know what's coming, then I don't cry at all, but I did here!!) You are SUCH a great angst author!! And I hope you get to work more on the new chapter soon ... because it is eagerly anticipated!!! ^.~
Love,
Tina | | Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 ] |
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