| "Yumenimo" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: Maxelle On: March 08, 2003 09:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing, awesome, fabulous, etc. I can go on and on. Nice plausible breakup with Yamcha that leaves room for the BETTER man Vegeta to move in. Loved it. |
Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 06:19 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! This is the best chapter yet! It keeps getting better and better. And you actually put up the lemon! Yay!! ^.^ It was so good, one of the best I've ever read! Hmm, and I wonder what made Veggie-poo so amorous all of a sudden? ^.~ Heehee, I think I know! ^.~
Keep up the good work, and write more soon ... I can't wait for the "morning after"! ^.^
Love, Tina
PS More lemons in the future would be good, too! ^.~ And ... IS he?!?!?! |
Reviewed By: Viny88 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 03:02 CST
Comment/Review:
I like how the story is playing out. Its a fun fic and I love how eveyones thoughts are exposed. And more frankly, that they are believable. A lot of times, thoughts are portrayed as would be expected from a friggin' dictionary, and I'm glad your one of the few authors that understand thoughts are usually very well...odd. Hey, that's why we don't speak most of our thoughts aloud, nay? lol, I actually can relate to some of Bulma's thoughts. hehe...
...o_0....ahem...well, update soon!
p.s
you should check out some of my fanfictions, if you're a B/V lover as I suppose you are, I believe you'll find them most intriguing!
Bye!
...did I mention to update soon? Ok, fine, so I did, but I'll say it again anyways...
UPDATE SOON! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: John Stewart On: March 07, 2003 22:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lemon has become my new favorite word in the dictionary! Since the foreplay has commenced with Bulma and Vegeta, it'll be getting even hotter between these two. Yes! And can I say, nice fight with Bulma and Yamcha. What a clever way to get rid of him. |
Reviewed By: Pammy On: March 07, 2003 21:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Fans self* Alright! I don't hate Yamcha, but I'm sure glad he's gone. Hope his butt stays gone. Vegeta and Bulma have chemistry! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 19:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SWEEET SWETTTT SWEETTTT! LemoN!!!!! 2 thumbs way wayyyyyyy up!!
I want more more more! The way u wrote it I mean it was very very good! I loved it! Please continue and please Update soon! u have an avid fan and reader!
Later! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 18:49 CST
Comment/Review:
Ooh, me likes! Must have more, MORE I TELL YOU!
Hee hee. Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 18:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Great lemon ^^
I loved it
CONTINUE SOON |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 01:54 CST
Comment/Review:
lol the thing with puar was funny. oh by the way i read an interview with the creator of DBZ and it said that puar was definatly a girl..... but not a cat... weird huh... lol i think she has a thing for yamcha as well... |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 22:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Ack! You just had to leave me hangin' there! Oh well, at least Yamcha's out of the picture! :) Hmm, is that going to ruin her Star Wars watchin', banana split eatin' evening with Vegeta? Hope not. Of course it only makes sense that it would. Aaahhh, I don't know. Maybe after passing out from crying so much she could have a dream where Vegeta was dressed up as a Jedi and she could could be Senator and they could have a wild night of passion in the space ship and....Uh sorry about that. Too many thoughts pouring in too quickly. Vegeta's going to eat all the ice cream and watch the rest of the movie..blah blah. I'm just gonna shut the hell up now, because I'm not even making sense to myself. Sorry for this horrendous review. Heh heh. No more Starbucks for me!:) |
Reviewed By: Chick On: January 22, 2003 21:02 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm loving the story it's really good!!!! keep up the good work!!! |
Reviewed By: Tina Lang On: January 22, 2003 17:41 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm very disappointed in you! I was hoping that Bulma would heft up Veggie's big ol' banana split in her arms, spin it around like a discus, and toss it at Yam****'s ****in' HEAD!!! *sigh* But we can't always have what we want, can we?
Grrr ... but Yamcha is just SUCH a bastard!! (and acutally I'm pretty sure Puar IS a girl! at least she sounds like one in the dub, but it's not like that means anything -.-;;) I hate him so much!!! GRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!
Anywho, this chapter was GREAT!! (except it would have been better if that bastard Yamcha never showed up at ALL but ... that's just me ^.^;;)
It had MANY memorable lines! Such as:
"Her hands were covered in ice-cream, fudge, juice from the strawberries, and general sticky goodness." Ok, out of context, that sounds a little dirty. ^.~
"So you're calling him a lesbian shape shifting cat because he talks to me? Hell, you don't even know his sex, so for all you know . . . he's gay for you." YES!! LESBIAN SHAPE SHIFTING CATS!! lol ... I love that line ... I think i'll stare at it for awhile, and keep on laughing ... O.O
And there were more but I'm too lazy to go look for them ^.~
KEEP UP THE EXCELLENT/WONDERFUL WORK, AND PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZE WRITE A LEMON INTO THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!! |
Reviewed By: John Stewart On: January 15, 2003 22:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Keep them chapters coming! |
Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Another great chapter!! ^.^ I can't wait to read the next one! *reminds herself to go rent a copy of the movie before reading the next chapter so she's not completely clueless*
And do I sense a sex/banana split thing going on? ^.~ I hope so!! Keep up the good work and hope you upload another chapter soon! ^.~ |
Reviewed By: Pammy On: January 10, 2003 10:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was pretty funny in parts, especially Bulma arguing with herself. She's as nutty as Vegeta is. Cute couple! |
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