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Reviewed By: Metallic maniac On: June 17, 2005 10:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Asm fic. *nods head in enjoying manner*
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Reviewed By: serena_kolapop2001 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this fic you should write a sequal or how ever the hell you spell it
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Reviewed By: lee-lee On: May 27, 2004 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the story.I'm glad u had my fav. couple as the main characters V/G. Please write more stories! I can't wait to read them.
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Reviewed By: bubbley freedom On: January 28, 2004 16:53 CST
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HEY I WANT SOME MORE!! WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Brilliant
Reviewed By: ReDiCuLoULy_gOoDlOoKiNg On: January 07, 2004 10:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IM LUVING IT...it's so surreal im serious lol plz rite more I dont usually read fics like thse but i didnt expect it to end the way it did...THE FIRST CHAPTER GOT ME ADDICTED and im glad that youve finished it so I CAN rest an dnot check evrytime so you have updated...I just WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT THIS FANFIC WAS KEWL VERY KEWL...!!!!
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Reviewed By: bubbley freedom On: January 05, 2004 23:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story was so amazing!! I loved it. write another story quick!
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Reviewed By: joy_animefreak On: January 02, 2004 04:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story
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Reviewed By: atshi On: November 08, 2003 16:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!! : ) please
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Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 12:15 CDT
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Really, really great! I only just found this fic, and I'm already waiting for an update! Good characterization. I am enjoying the reactions of Goku's family to his and Vegetas changing behaviour. Try to update soon!
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Reviewed By: Chi chan On: September 29, 2003 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I have no problem with you drawing from the subs. Vegeta's seiyuu is the best! That smooth deep voice... And Goku is just so much more- Goku in the subs too. I love this story.Good Goku/Vegeta ficcys are getting harder and harder to find. *sigh* But that last chapter was great. Do I see the milestone that marks the turning point of their relationship coming up? And how could no one care when our boys didn't come home? That was just so un Zsenshi like! Oh well,that just makes more snuggle time for our two Saiyans! Oh, writing in Domino's pov was a good idea. It really helped to understand him better to see from his perspective. Maybe you could try that more to help flesh out his character in the coming chapters.
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Title: Linel17@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: MeLaiya On: September 28, 2003 23:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOOHHHHHH MAN! that was too beautiful. Please, you have got to hurry and update. Im dying here. Please hurry, I love this. Chow Babe ;)
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Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Kisama = you fucker. It's a REALLY bad word. lol I want to say one thing...Gohan, Krillin, Yamcha, and Piccolo (for his I don't have faith in Goku comment about 3 chapters back) are all kisama's. Why? Why shouldn't Goku and Vegeta enjoy their time together? Does everyone want Vegeta going off at a moment's notice and Goku whiny and depressed? Use some sense, senshi! Hm, Yamcha's running interference. Or rather, when he isn't himself he is. He seems to be under control either without noticing it, or flickering so fast between in and out that he doesn't notice it. What's a few seconds missed after all? *smirks* Good. A smart bad guy.... Well, except for one thing. He underestimates loves. Silly man. He'll simply have to die. But I'd much rather see something happen to him that is like what he did to G and V. Take some benevolent creature who wouldn't mind, patience of a Saint, and bond Domino to him. Make sure the other, and Domino, is immortal. Voila! Instant eternal torture.... ^_^ Very nice. Vegeta finally gets all of Goku's feelings eh? Good.... Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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O.O You have to read my story. I know I'm plugging, but you and I are on the same wavelength about Vegeta and Goku.... Plus...you obviously like Kakarott more than me. ^_~ I personally hate him...yet Kakarott-lovers everywhere like my story. And it's in his pov. >.< I hate him damn it.... Anyways, lol @ the book exchange.... Like little children. "Am not!" "Are too!" Etc.... I do that with my six year old brother. I always win! ^_^ >.< It is too something to be proud of! I gotta ask this. What the hell does it matter if they like each other? What? It's suddenly 'evil' to like Vegeta? Well, sign me up for the evil alignment! I worship the man--er, Saiyan. Okay...looks like in the end...the story between G and V goes the way it usually does. Kakarott learns about his heritage. Thank you for not using the 'wish' cliche. You know, Kakarott wishes to know about his heritage. This way is much more personal.
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Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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"...and do his best impression of a guppy-fish." lol Guppy. Yes, Kakarott would look like a guppy. Guppies are coot! ^_^ Finally. I was waiting for the explosion. Not only that--but Vegeta's right! Baka no Kakarotto. Nice kiss--and reaction. Nice reaction. Onward. I like this. No cliffhanger for me. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Interesting.... So...Domino pinches nerves in the lower back to take over--kinda--people? Or something like that, right? Awww, ain't it sweet? Kakarott saved Vegeta. All I gotta say is Vegeta better top at least once, preferably the first time.... But that's--again--just me. lol Deejay? Sounded like Videl's entrance actually. And sounds like a Mary Sue too.... But she doesn't seem like that big of a character. And she's a hentai.... But ignoring Vegeta? Foolish woman.... Anyways, onwards.
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