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Reviewed By: MegumiAmano [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 18:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is absolutely original and well written, but sometimes your spelling slips a bit.
Deejay is hilarious, I hope she's not a servant.
I also like your Goku Vegeta interaction, one moment Vegeta is almost annoyed enough to final flash Goku's sorry @$$ to the next dimension ^____^ and be done with it, but the next moment he shows a grumpy kind of affection that is just too cute!
I am VERY curious about chapter 5
Slam |
Reviewed By: Xero Sky [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 18:44 CST
Comment/Review:
Ah, that was wonderful! I'm SO glad you updated! I actually looked at this fic again last night and wished that you would update. I really enjoy your characterization of Vegeta in this, and the pain he suffers from Goku's lack of understanding. Very in character. I'm fairly dying to see what Goku does in reaction to the kiss and the smackdown that followed it. I really liked his sudden insight into Vejiita, and their constant tripping over each other's minds. I look forward to the next chapter!!! |
Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 16:28 CST
Comment/Review:
*grumbles at the stupid reviewing box for cutting off her review* Write more, this is good!!! |
Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 16:27 CST
Comment/Review:
KEWL!!! U updated! But u left an EEEEEVIL cliffhanger at the end of the chapter 4!!! >_ |
Reviewed By: fluffygcfh On: December 21, 2002 23:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great I can not wait to read more! |
Reviewed By: secretsquirl On: November 19, 2002 19:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*pokes head in*
^___^ I was looking around media miner and what do I find? Your ficcie and with another chapter to boot!! Needless to say I was excited!!!
Once again, as all your chapters have been, excellent job!!! Your pacing is exceptional and the fact that you're actually pacing Goku and Vegeta's relationship is awesome, it gives the pairing alot more sense and strength in the reader's eyes...or at least mine ^.^
Oh and another thing I haveta commend you for if I didn't already on ffn.net...I can't remember, is the fact that you've kept them in character, hell you've kept Chi and Bulma alive and what's this? You're not writing them to be horrid beasts either!! Gosh, it just makes this fic. all the better. *hugs the fic.* I love it!!
I've just started reading G/V's and I have to say so far your's has been the best one by far!!! It's not just a smutty 'throw them in bed' fic. like so many others I've seen....it has a fantastic storyline and has me at the edge of my seat what's this Damien guy gonna do next?!?!?!?!
I'm soooooooooooooo excited for the next chapter whenever you can get it out *grins* because I have your ficcie bookmarked and you better believe I'll be checking back on a daily basis until the next chapter's released! |
Reviewed By: Xero Sky [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2002 00:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is great!! Not to be too greedy, but MORE!! I love your Vegeta -- he seems dead-on in character to me, and that's harder than it sounds to accomplish. Goku is very good also -- wide-eyed without being stupid. The plot is good -- I don't really know what's coming next, and that's a horribly rare thing in fanfics. Domino is interesting too. Poor Yamcha! *smirks* So, consider yourself *SPORK*ed!! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 18:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a verty good fab fic love it keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Lauryyn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 17:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well, i love Deejay and her thinking about this family. You should put her in more often with er thaughts. its pretty funny. great work.
update soon. and i would be glad to see more of Deejay and her thinking of Kakarotto and Vegeta as couple, that have three, no two sons to share.
please update soon |
Reviewed By: Dark Serapha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2002 04:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
NEED MORE!! SOON! PLEASE!!! |
Reviewed By: Xero Sky [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2002 00:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, I'm not a big fan of authors who extort reviews out of their readers....but in your case I'll make an exception. *grins* This was very interesting and well written. I would definitely like to see more. |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin On: October 10, 2002 15:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well...I for one am interested. Very. Your writing style is smooth and your...gasp!...plot has me more than a little intrigued.
I can't wait.
Jada |
Reviewed By: SSJ_Kitana [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2002 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEAZEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!mORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WHO CARES IS SOMEONE ELSE DONT LIKES IT I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLEAZEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!mORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WHO CARES IS SOMEONE ELSE DONT LIKES IT I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLEAZEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!mORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WHO CARES IS SOMEONE ELSE DONT LIKES IT I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLEAZEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!mORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WHO CARES IS SOMEONE ELSE DONT LIKES IT I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLEAZEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!mORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WHO CARES IS SOMEONE ELSE DONT LIKES IT I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLEAZEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!mORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WHO CARES IS SOMEONE ELSE DONT LIKES IT I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLEAZEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!mORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WHO CARES IS SOMEONE ELSE DONT LIKES IT I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLEAZEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!mORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WHO CARES IS SOMEONE ELSE DONT LIKES IT I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: G-jin On: October 10, 2002 14:33 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm very interested! Please continue writing! I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Dark Serapha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2002 02:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god! A VegetaxGoku with a PLOT! I'm in heaven! Go on, go on, can't wait to read more! If you search for good Vegoku with plots, you might want to have a look at my favourites at fanfiction.net. Just go to www.fanfiction.net, search for Dark Serapha's profile and then check out my favourite stories. I'd especially recommend everything by Xero-Sky, Chibi-Vegeta, Rogue, Althiel and Syldana. That is if you don't know them yet. If you're really into the stuff, you probably do. Another good writer is b-chan. You'll find her fics on her homepage www.dbchan.com. Though she was offline for some time, don't know wether she's back on yet. I especially recommend "Claimed" and "Dirty Dancing". Yet another good collection is Syldanas Homepage. I hope that you like these stories. Continue writing, I'll be on the watch for new stuff from you! |
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