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Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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O.O You have to read my story. I know I'm plugging, but you and I are on the same wavelength about Vegeta and Goku.... Plus...you obviously like Kakarott more than me. ^_~ I personally hate him...yet Kakarott-lovers everywhere like my story. And it's in his pov. >.< I hate him damn it.... Anyways, lol @ the book exchange.... Like little children. "Am not!" "Are too!" Etc.... I do that with my six year old brother. I always win! ^_^ >.< It is too something to be proud of! I gotta ask this. What the hell does it matter if they like each other? What? It's suddenly 'evil' to like Vegeta? Well, sign me up for the evil alignment! I worship the man--er, Saiyan. Okay...looks like in the end...the story between G and V goes the way it usually does. Kakarott learns about his heritage. Thank you for not using the 'wish' cliche. You know, Kakarott wishes to know about his heritage. This way is much more personal.
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Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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"...and do his best impression of a guppy-fish." lol Guppy. Yes, Kakarott would look like a guppy. Guppies are coot! ^_^ Finally. I was waiting for the explosion. Not only that--but Vegeta's right! Baka no Kakarotto. Nice kiss--and reaction. Nice reaction. Onward. I like this. No cliffhanger for me. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Interesting.... So...Domino pinches nerves in the lower back to take over--kinda--people? Or something like that, right? Awww, ain't it sweet? Kakarott saved Vegeta. All I gotta say is Vegeta better top at least once, preferably the first time.... But that's--again--just me. lol Deejay? Sounded like Videl's entrance actually. And sounds like a Mary Sue too.... But she doesn't seem like that big of a character. And she's a hentai.... But ignoring Vegeta? Foolish woman.... Anyways, onwards.
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Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Satisfyingly long! ^_^ I like. I especially like the bond getting smaller. Vegeta and Goku are going to be *close*. *waggles brows* I loved the part where Goku tried to convince Bulma that they appreciated her work and asked Vegeta and he just turned away and Goku said 'See!' That was exactly what he would have done too. Baka. lol The only part I didn't like? It was a cliche. Very old and I'm--well, sick of seeing it everywhere. Gohan's in trouble, Gohan will be killed. Da da dah! Piccolo to the rescue. You know...I have respect for the Namek until he does stuff like that.... But that's just me. Continuing once more....
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Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 17:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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O.O This is really good. I was hesitant at first, but I'mm glad I decided to try it. Wow! You're grammar and spelling...I can read your writing! That's awesome. So far, I like it. ^_^ I'm continuing reading now....
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Reviewed By: atshi On: September 28, 2003 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i really enjoyed this piece of fiction and i am looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: zorella_ On: September 27, 2003 09:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
aw... makes you feel all warm and fuzzy :D
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Reviewed By: KRP On: September 26, 2003 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cu~te! I really like this fic. It's the first good one I've read on this site. Your characterization is bang-on! I'm very impressed. Plus, your insights into Vegeta's phsyci (ooh sp, there)is incredible. I really like this fic, as I said. I really really hope you continue soon ^^
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Reviewed By: likeacat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2003 00:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been waiting and waiting for more of this great fic. You manage to keep Vegeta and Goku pretty much in character, but still have them meshing through the bond. What will Yamcha do now? I hope you update faster than you have been, though, because this is taking waaayyy too long for just 5 chapters. |
Reviewed By: arovak On: August 08, 2003 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i luv this story! it has an excellent plot, really! I cant wait to read more so write again really soon! |
Reviewed By: kitkat On: June 01, 2003 14:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo! that's me again.
i'm waiting anxiously for the next chapter..
post it soon ...ok? |
Reviewed By: Ambivalence On: February 23, 2003 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's hard to find an excellent, plot-filled Goku/Vegeta fic, so I was overjoyed to find this! You're great with detail and emotions. I love how Vegeta and Goku getting closer to each other, and yet they are so in character! Poor Vegeta seems to be having a hard time coming to terms with his feelings, eh? ^_^ This is a great fic and I hope you keep writing it 'cause I can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: gemini On: February 08, 2003 16:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more soon i can't wait to read what happens next |
Reviewed By: kalliope On: January 31, 2003 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooh...
I love this fic. Especially the way you've captured Vegeta's character. Very masterfully done! I was almost afraid you were going to start bashing Yamcha there for a few minutes, which is something that too many biased authors do. He's
not a bad guy! But to my great pleasure you're keeping the plot perfectly in perspective to the show.
Keep up the wonderful work! |
Reviewed By: Lisy-lis On: January 31, 2003 04:35 CST
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Helloo! *stalk stalk* I would have rated this, but I couldn't figure out if 1 was highest or lowest. -_-
Man, Vegeta reminds me of you. *scared* But he's STILL not a big giant girly sook! *love*
But eeew! Icky! They kiissed eeeew! rofl .. I'm fine, really ..
I like your stooory *nibble* but I still miss BCD *whinge*
Crap! I can't find the submit button .. so you may never read this at all *stab* |
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