| "Restraints and Liberations" Reviews/Comments [ 99 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kaialicious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 02:35 EDT
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Aaawww...a review slut aye? Well i'll just have to do my best to provide you with enough reviews to fill your mighty ego. ^__^ Lol!
I loved this one. I thought that the interaction between kakarott and Vegeta were comical and touching. Also again, poor Sage. Vegeta will be royally pissed I am sure. |
Reviewed By: Talon Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 01:44 EDT
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*grins* It's quite all right, you're not the first person to think Miju was mine. And he is mine in a way...the same way that Sage is Dasia's.
Besides...I'm such a review slut, I'd probably forgive just about any transgression simply due to the number of reviews I'm getting from you!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kaialicious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 01:38 EDT
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now I must point out, to those who don't read author's notes, that Mijuku and The Lady Herself are the sole property of my tsuin, Cleodasia...I was allowed (by them mind you) to include them in this fic...
Duly noted and completely embarassed. I sort of got impatient and rushed past the notes. My apologies. ^__^ *Hands Talon and Cleodasia plushy Saiyans of their choice* |
Reviewed By: Kaialicious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 01:29 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
“I hate me,” said Sage softly. “Papa won't be able to not hate me. We're too much alike.”
That got me right in the chest. That is so horrible! *wails profusely until Vegeta yells at me to knock it off.*
Poor Kaky fainted from the news. How adorable. *rushes off to read the next chapter* |
Reviewed By: Talon Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 00:52 EDT
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now I must point out, to those who don't read author's notes, that Mijuku and The Lady Herself are the sole property of my tsuin, Cleodasia...I was allowed (by them mind you) to include them in this fic...
*shifty eyes* Ok, they FORCED me to write them in because I was torturing their BABY!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kaialicious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 00:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How do you come up with such woderful characters? O___o! I like Miju-kun! ^__^ I want to see his baby too. Please? No? O__O Okay. -__-'
And my left eye started to drip water. No, Kaia wasn't crying. *laughs uneasily*
I said I wasn't crying and we'll leave it at that. No more purple font...too sad to make color... |
Reviewed By: Kaialicious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 00:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, that was so sweet. ~,____,~ I hope Sage arrives safely home. |
Reviewed By: Kaialicious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 23:48 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Why does Sage have to suffer so much? Its an emotional roller coaster and I love it. ^__^ I blame you of course. *pout* I'm going to continue reading. Its too good to stop after just one chapter. Its like potatoe chips, except instead of you can't eat just one, you can't read just one! ^___^ |
Reviewed By: Kaialicious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 03:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Sage...being abused by that brute alien! He's just a baby! *sobs unprettily* I hope Vegeta visits that bastard in the penal colony and blasts him a new one!
*blows nose and shuffles off to bed* I'll read the rest tomorrow. Count on it. ^__^ |
Reviewed By: Kaialicious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 02:59 EDT
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*grins* Do you mean "Talon" or "Turles"?
Turles of course. ^__^ At 3:oo in the morning, I'm prone to making mistakes. ^___^ *blush* Also, I left excerpts at my lj, in case you're interested *end of blatant plug* |
Reviewed By: Kaialicious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 02:52 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Progress indeed. ^__^ I'm so happy that he's coming out of his shell. |
Reviewed By: Talon Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 02:30 EDT
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*grins* Do you mean "Talon" or "Turles"? |
Reviewed By: Kaialicious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 02:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sobs profusely for poor Sage* That was so sad, but painfully good. All I kept thinking was, "Talon would make a good Saiyan father." Was I wrong for thinking that? O____o? I can't wait to find out what will happen when Sage arrives safely at home. How iwll Vegeta and Kakarott react to their son's return? Drama I am sure will abound! You have me glued to this fic. *reads on, mouth agape, eyes in a dreamy wonder* |
Reviewed By: Kaialicious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 00:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, Talon! ~,__,~ That was so good! Poor little child! I'm glad that I read this because if I hadn't the similarities between this chapter and The Master Becomes the Slave would have been frightening. They already are, and I do believe that I am trying to find excuses not to finish it at all. *Kaia tears out hair* Why didn't anyone tell me?
*Oh stop babbling Kaia!*
Okay, I really enjoyed this chapter. I wanted to hurt the gel broker for doing what he did to that young Saiyan male. And Turles, how good of him to take the child away from that horrible place.
When ever I read a fic, I know that its good if I get drawn into the story, and this fic was EXCELLENT. I can't wait to read the other chapters! ^__^ I will leave a review for each of them, because as I've said before, that's just the way that I am. Good stuff! |
Reviewed By: Shisou [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2003 19:19 EDT
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*holds out a plate of cookies* My offering in awe of this fic.
*grin* You know.. I think I'd pay to watch you hose them both down. But are you sure Miju and Sage wouldn't enjoy it too much? |
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