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 Reviewed By: nan-chan  On: November 20, 2002 17:34 EST
Comment/Review:
I love both of the last chapters! Anyway, after reading them an image popped in my head that just won't leave. If you don't like it, ignore it, but I think its cute. Can you see Gohan cutting his hair to help make Sage feel better about Sage's own cut hair? Again, it was an image that just wouldn't leave my head, so I decided to pass it on. Love your stories and Dasia's!
 Reviewed By: A reviewer  On: November 19, 2002 16:46 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think I sense another ass kicking coming on for an alien slave abuser... this time from Sage.

Excellent as always Talon.
 Reviewed By: Crafty [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 17, 2002 00:18 EST
Comment/Review:
I won't be able to sleep peacefully until I know what happens to Sage and his family, you know. ::glares:: Damn it, why do you have to write such incredible stories? Please have mercy on my poor tired self and continue soon! ^_^
 Reviewed By: zingzinglee [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 16, 2002 13:43 EST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Stop abusing my prince dangit! I'm too busy trying to deal with mr burns and his numbbrain girlfriend to have to fly to outer space to kick more butt! Although, I must admit, his angst does lead to good stories! O^_^O

btw, what happened to the day at the zoo? murder! mayhem! Yamucha-mush!
 Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 16, 2002 01:42 EST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
you write some damn good storys Ill give you that and this is no diffrent
 Reviewed By: Anon  On: November 15, 2002 18:02 EST
Comment/Review:
You Evil Evil Evil wonderful writer you.
Please write more of this soon i love/hate the way you have ended chapter 5 but i want more, i need more. please sunggle Sage for me he needs it.
Excellent as usual, another master piece from you.
Did i mention id like more :)
 Reviewed By: Crafty  On: October 26, 2002 21:26 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hello again! I wandered over here from BOAP, and let me tell you, I was very happy to see Sage again! Poor Sage...he's had such a terrible past...I hope he realizes that his parents love and miss him, and that he re-finds his real past. Please update soon! ^_^
 Reviewed By: bakayaro onna  On: October 26, 2002 01:02 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Pass me the next chapter to beta, my dear danglemate! These reviewers are beginning to pull on their tethers, demanding more!

Think the muses can be bribed with lemon pudding cake this time?

*smoochies!*
 Reviewed By: Xero Sky [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 24, 2002 20:56 EDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Horrible...
in a wonderful kind of way. When will they get home? What will Vegeta no ouji do? Why, why must you torture me this way??!?

The details of Sage's captivity were very well drawn, especially the...thing...with the arms thing... that Sage liked. I thought his ability to speak her language was quite realistically done, as well, i.e. differences in physiology. I hope that Vegeta no ouji quietly flays the thing she bought him from, though....

So, there is light at the end of Sage's tunnel, but when will we get there, you awful torturing woman? Will Sage grow up and fall in love with Turles? (Note my new thing for Turles... *giggles*) Will horrible retribution fall on the heads of the slave owners? Will Sage face his father? Just a few of the many questions that make me go "AAAIEEEEEE!" whenever one of these chapters ends... *whimpers*

UPDATE!
 Reviewed By: Kate  On: October 22, 2002 19:52 EDT
Comment/Review:
Yay another chapter! *bounces up and down clapping hands in glee* Not what I would have expected, but at least Sage is opening up a bit. I can't wait to see how Kakarott and Vegeta will react to seeing Sage and finding out he was a pleasure slave for three years. Please write more soon. *pouty face* Please.
 Reviewed By: Anon  On: October 18, 2002 22:24 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*cheers wildly* wohoo another chapter, still going great carn't wait for number 4.
(Will check your website for updates(love thoes chibi tales))
 Reviewed By: Talon Sage [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 18, 2002 19:14 EDT
Comment/Review:
*looks calmly at Herself*

My dear Lady, HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO TELL YOU THIS SAGE ISN'T YOUR BABY???

*sighs* Must we go over this again?

Eye color: Look closely. R&L Sage has BLACK eyes. Your son? Last I checked he had GOLDEN eyes!!

Hair color: Hn, R&L Sage has black hair streaked with blue. Now your brat, Ryu Sage, did have that hair color at birth...but what color is his hair THIS week? *rolls eyes* I don't know either...ask Tora.

And finally...pay attention...look closely...R&L Sage has a TAIL!!!

Therefore...I am NOT torturing your baby!!!

Harumph.

Dearest beloved twin, please...keep her under a little better control...*chokes on it* Ok, so I couldn't say that with a straight face...

*giggles*

Love ya brat-koi...

Talon
 Reviewed By: Dasia  On: October 18, 2002 02:03 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Herself: He he he...didn't think I'd find you, did you? *brandishes kendo stick menacingly* What did I tell you about torturing
MY BABY!!!! *pant pant pant* *goes on a thwacking rampage...*

Dasia: Sorry, sister dearest...*grabs Herself by the hair and marches Herback to Her ownuniverse* We love it, you know we do...we just want to kill the bastards a little bit...you can have the pieces when we're done!!

Dasia
 Reviewed By: The reviewer  On: October 18, 2002 00:03 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very good stuff here, I don't have a clue where you are taking it. I find that in a lot of fics I know the end a chapter into it. That being not the case for this one gets you lots of points.
Keep up the good work!
 Reviewed By: Kate  On: October 17, 2002 20:08 EDT
Comment/Review:
First I want to say that I love Sage in this story and in BOAP. He is such a sweet heart. Second I would like to plead with you to have mercy on him and to keep him from suffering as much as possible. I love you for updating and would like to beg you for more updates as soon as possible, because if I could I would do nothing but read about Sage all day everyday. So I thank you, your muses and your betas for the good work and I ask you to please keep writing. Also, I would like to apologize for not reviewing sooner. It was really lame of me and I sorry.
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