| "Restraints and Liberations" Reviews/Comments [ 99 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kate On: October 22, 2002 19:52 EDT
Comment/Review:
Yay another chapter! *bounces up and down clapping hands in glee* Not what I would have expected, but at least Sage is opening up a bit. I can't wait to see how Kakarott and Vegeta will react to seeing Sage and finding out he was a pleasure slave for three years. Please write more soon. *pouty face* Please. |
Reviewed By: Anon On: October 18, 2002 22:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*cheers wildly* wohoo another chapter, still going great carn't wait for number 4.
(Will check your website for updates(love thoes chibi tales)) |
Reviewed By: Talon Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2002 19:14 EDT
Comment/Review:
*looks calmly at Herself*
My dear Lady, HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO TELL YOU THIS SAGE ISN'T YOUR BABY???
*sighs* Must we go over this again?
Eye color: Look closely. R&L Sage has BLACK eyes. Your son? Last I checked he had GOLDEN eyes!!
Hair color: Hn, R&L Sage has black hair streaked with blue. Now your brat, Ryu Sage, did have that hair color at birth...but what color is his hair THIS week? *rolls eyes* I don't know either...ask Tora.
And finally...pay attention...look closely...R&L Sage has a TAIL!!!
Therefore...I am NOT torturing your baby!!!
Harumph.
Dearest beloved twin, please...keep her under a little better control...*chokes on it* Ok, so I couldn't say that with a straight face...
*giggles*
Love ya brat-koi...
Talon |
Reviewed By: Dasia On: October 18, 2002 02:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Herself: He he he...didn't think I'd find you, did you? *brandishes kendo stick menacingly* What did I tell you about torturing
MY BABY!!!! *pant pant pant* *goes on a thwacking rampage...*
Dasia: Sorry, sister dearest...*grabs Herself by the hair and marches Herback to Her ownuniverse* We love it, you know we do...we just want to kill the bastards a little bit...you can have the pieces when we're done!!
Dasia |
Reviewed By: The reviewer On: October 18, 2002 00:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good stuff here, I don't have a clue where you are taking it. I find that in a lot of fics I know the end a chapter into it. That being not the case for this one gets you lots of points.
Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Kate On: October 17, 2002 20:08 EDT
Comment/Review:
First I want to say that I love Sage in this story and in BOAP. He is such a sweet heart. Second I would like to plead with you to have mercy on him and to keep him from suffering as much as possible. I love you for updating and would like to beg you for more updates as soon as possible, because if I could I would do nothing but read about Sage all day everyday. So I thank you, your muses and your betas for the good work and I ask you to please keep writing. Also, I would like to apologize for not reviewing sooner. It was really lame of me and I sorry. |
Reviewed By: nan-chan On: October 17, 2002 17:38 EDT
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I love updates!!!! Rejoicing abounds! |
Reviewed By: Amora On: October 17, 2002 16:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its good
weird and new but
good |
Reviewed By: Lully On: October 17, 2002 12:20 EDT
Comment/Review:
I can't believe you only have five reviews so far.
*shakes head* Sage is an amazing character and so very intriguing to read about.
You know I need more of this as well as all your other wonderful stories.
And it is nice to see Turles in a fic. |
Reviewed By: anon On: October 16, 2002 14:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love the way you write your stories, and simply adore Sage in this incarnation as well as
BOAP. Pease write more of this saga soon |
Reviewed By: Amora On: October 14, 2002 00:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u sooo have to finish this story |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 19:14 EDT
Comment/Review:
Yeee! Must read more! Very enticing opening, especially because I already know who the boy is. He just doesn't have much luck in any of your universes, does he? Well, I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next, my heart goes out to the guy. |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: October 12, 2002 15:56 EDT
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Geez, for someone who's "forced" to start another story, it's starting out really good... but unfortunately, I must be a little dense, cause I still don't know who the boy is :/ ... Keep writing though, it looks promising! |
Reviewed By: Lily254 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 11:36 EDT
Comment/Review:
very very cool. poor boy. write more soon!
Lily |
Reviewed By: Amaris [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2002 23:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful...please continue and is this a squeal to something? i would like to read the first if it is....anyway a happy ending please. |
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