| "Restraints and Liberations" Reviews/Comments [ 99 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sakiku On: December 06, 2002 11:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is a GREAT story!!!!! I like that Idea with those male pregnacies, how did you get it anyways? Otherwise: just continue as you did before, you got me hooked... |
Reviewed By: PrincessEmeraude [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2002 23:19 EST
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I am shocked! This story makes me cry..sniffle. It is good though. I hope the Chibi gets home soon!! All your writing is soo cool!
*a small present from Sage appears*
Oh boy!! *opens it* A small Yamcha that says squeeze me?
*squeezes and yucky stuff comes out*
Ewww!!! Sage that is gross!!
Hey, a Neko Sage is in my hair!
Keep up the great work, I look forward to your next chapters! *smiles* |
Reviewed By: blu saneda On: December 01, 2002 16:59 EST
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Gulde and Yayyan ought to be toture forever and a day for what they were going to do to Sage and what they did. Are they finally going home or are they going to stop off somewhere else or is something else going to happen? The suspense is killing me. I'm also ready to read the tearful reunion. |
Reviewed By: PrincessEmeraude [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2002 19:03 EST
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Ack! *falls over* That was SOO cool!! I am getting so excited now that Sage is gonna get to be home soon!!! *grins*
*neko Sage mews happily* *pats tiny neko Sage in hair*
I can hardly wait for the next chapter and the happy reunion! I will have to make sure I have lots of kleenix though... |
Reviewed By: Mor1814 On: July 03, 2003 01:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy reading this fanfic. I'm a big fan of the Goku/Vegeta pairing, and I love reading about other potential aspects of their pairing. This fic is one of the coolest I've read in a while because Sage is such an interesting character. I love reading about the interaction between him and Turles as well as the angst of family members being reunited. All in all, a very enjoyable fic. I can't wait to read the next part! |
Reviewed By: Crafty On: December 06, 2002 15:56 EST
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So very unfair...::cries:: I want to know what happens! And Sage's parents shouldn't have to wait another second to see him. I hope there's a happy ending at the end of all this angst, but without the angst, a happy ending wouldn't be appreciated. Sage, you shouldn't hate yourself...we all love you! |
Reviewed By: nan-chan On: November 20, 2002 17:34 EST
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I love both of the last chapters! Anyway, after reading them an image popped in my head that just won't leave. If you don't like it, ignore it, but I think its cute. Can you see Gohan cutting his hair to help make Sage feel better about Sage's own cut hair? Again, it was an image that just wouldn't leave my head, so I decided to pass it on. Love your stories and Dasia's! |
Reviewed By: A reviewer On: November 19, 2002 16:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I sense another ass kicking coming on for an alien slave abuser... this time from Sage.
Excellent as always Talon. |
Reviewed By: Crafty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 00:18 EST
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I won't be able to sleep peacefully until I know what happens to Sage and his family, you know. ::glares:: Damn it, why do you have to write such incredible stories? Please have mercy on my poor tired self and continue soon! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: zingzinglee [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2002 13:43 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stop abusing my prince dangit! I'm too busy trying to deal with mr burns and his numbbrain girlfriend to have to fly to outer space to kick more butt! Although, I must admit, his angst does lead to good stories! O^_^O
btw, what happened to the day at the zoo? murder! mayhem! Yamucha-mush! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2002 01:42 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you write some damn good storys Ill give you that and this is no diffrent |
Reviewed By: Anon On: November 15, 2002 18:02 EST
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You Evil Evil Evil wonderful writer you.
Please write more of this soon i love/hate the way you have ended chapter 5 but i want more, i need more. please sunggle Sage for me he needs it.
Excellent as usual, another master piece from you.
Did i mention id like more :) |
Reviewed By: Crafty On: October 26, 2002 21:26 EDT
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Hello again! I wandered over here from BOAP, and let me tell you, I was very happy to see Sage again! Poor Sage...he's had such a terrible past...I hope he realizes that his parents love and miss him, and that he re-finds his real past. Please update soon! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: bakayaro onna On: October 26, 2002 01:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pass me the next chapter to beta, my dear danglemate! These reviewers are beginning to pull on their tethers, demanding more!
Think the muses can be bribed with lemon pudding cake this time?
*smoochies!* |
Reviewed By: Xero Sky [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2002 20:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Horrible...
in a wonderful kind of way. When will they get home? What will Vegeta no ouji do? Why, why must you torture me this way??!?
The details of Sage's captivity were very well drawn, especially the...thing...with the arms thing... that Sage liked. I thought his ability to speak her language was quite realistically done, as well, i.e. differences in physiology. I hope that Vegeta no ouji quietly flays the thing she bought him from, though....
So, there is light at the end of Sage's tunnel, but when will we get there, you awful torturing woman? Will Sage grow up and fall in love with Turles? (Note my new thing for Turles... *giggles*) Will horrible retribution fall on the heads of the slave owners? Will Sage face his father? Just a few of the many questions that make me go "AAAIEEEEEE!" whenever one of these chapters ends... *whimpers*
UPDATE! |
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