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"Twist of Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ]
 Reviewed By: pretty_princess_2k6 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 26, 2009 16:29 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I loved this fic'. I was so disappointed that it was short, as I (we xP) would have loved for you to extended it a bit longer. Overall, it was brilliant. I let a few tears slips - No word of a lie. x) SonXKnux = Lovee. =D. Two of my most favorite characters from the Sonic world. Keep up the great work! ^^
 Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Ren3oki chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 26, 2006 08:28 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey i readed it long time ago and now i can tell you what i think....i loved it!this was the first sonxknux yaoi i ever read and since it, theyre one of my favorite couples (sonadow its the first XD) your story and the caracter"s personality arent very diferent than the original and i dont speak english but i enjoyed reading your fic..sigh..wish i could write my lemon that way...hehe keep going and write a sonadow onegai??
 Reviewed By: Impmonn  On: April 06, 2004 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was a good effort, but it falls short of transition from when the two discover the feelings for each other to full blown porno. I personally would of liked to see some more thoughts by the characters (as well as telling the story in the past tense) when the two discover their love for each other.
 Title: YAH!!
Reviewed By: nokiasama03 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 11, 2004 21:54 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
...okay, I remember reading this before I joined mediaminer, but of all people, I never expected to get an e-mail from!! X-D Anyway, the story's awsome!! And your not going to just end it here are you? I think you should write more! :) Your writting's are a lot better than mine, which I'm always hurrying w. typing I hardly check for spelling and grammer. ^.^' Anyway, catch you on the flip side.
 Title: TO BE AN YAOI... ITS COOL
Reviewed By: Darkstalker X [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 23, 2004 21:33 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
freaking cool even if it is an yaoi fanfic, i like more the lemons, but i see every kind of hentai known by the humans, and this one is no exeption to be cool.
 Title: kemanoral2000@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: Seto Son  On: October 06, 2003 10:46 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
You did a very good job with this story and I was disapointed that it was so short. I hope you do a sequeal to this because Knux and Sonic now mated will deffaently be interesting to see how it matures.
 Reviewed By: Sapphire17  On: April 19, 2003 03:50 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I absolutey luved this story! Sonic/Knux is my all-time fav sonic the hedgehog pairing. Yes, I admit it. Anywaze, this was great to read and I hope you'll write more in the future too!!
 Reviewed By: Lil_Hentai_Elf [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 05, 2003 23:38 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow,this is one of the best lemons i've read(i always go for the yaoi)keep up the amazing writing!
 Reviewed By: mewmewrei  On: March 31, 2003 16:05 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Heehee. I love romance lemons. This was good. Sonic's cool! Knuckles is cool too. I liked how the fic started out sad, but then turned happy. And with everyone dead, they wouldn't have to worry about what they'd think!
 Reviewed By: cat  On: January 22, 2003 01:08 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Good story. Nice writing. This is definitely one of the better lemons out there. In any fandom. Keep up the good work.
 Reviewed By: cat  On: January 22, 2003 01:07 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Good story. Nice writing. This is definitely one of the better lemons out there. In any fandom. Keep up the good work.
 Reviewed By: yaoi girl  On: November 17, 2002 17:02 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow... it was very well written. I never thought of them like that but yeah it makes since and goes great together. Keep up the amazing work.
 Reviewed By: Ultrix [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 16, 2002 20:13 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Generally I despise yaoi fics, but this was well written, believable, and worth reading. 70% if hentai Sonic fics consist of 'sonic f*cked harder omg wtf so goooood *hump* *hump*'. Thank you for the refreshing prose. :3

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