| "Fall Of an Empire- From a slave's POV" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 11:28 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very powerful stuff. Nice job
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: ~Aaralyn~ On: August 20, 2005 01:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to absolutely agree with all your other reviewers.. this story was amazing and much more realistic than anyone else's.. this is the true life of a slave, and i hope that soon you write a story just like this.. not just a one shot!! Beautifully Written! Absolutely Amazing!!!
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: Catie On: June 19, 2005 06:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story. It was wonderful and I completly understand when you say none of the other stories are realistic! I mean in most of them they have sex one time and they're automaticaly in love. I have to say you are on of the best authors ive ever seen! Keep up the good work. And if anyone gives you a bad review i will be very shocked.
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Reviewed By: Evil Saint (not logged in) On: February 17, 2004 08:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Most fics I read fall into the category of up-to-scratch. I can count on one hand the number of stories that, in my opinion, could be called briliant and this is one of them. Thanks for a great read!
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Title: Write more!
Reviewed By: Pocket Rat On: January 15, 2004 13:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more!!! Did my color work?
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Title: ^_^ Love it!
Reviewed By: Pocket Rat On: January 15, 2004 13:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, never thought Vegeta would save them....I don't like Freeza much, but I enjoyed that story!! Write a sequel if you haven't already!! It's that GOOD!! Lots 'o Hugs, ~*~*~Pocket Rat~*~*~
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Reviewed By: LadyJadeVotrin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2002 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All of those 10's up there, I mean it! Very good... I loved it. Keep up the exellent writing... |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2002 09:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow girl! This is a very dark DARK stroy! It's filled with so much pain...my heart goes out to the slave, and all she's been trough. Being with Freiza is enough ::shudders::! Good work Lady V...I hope you will continue! |
Reviewed By: {*.*} On: October 24, 2002 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An excellent beginning to what will hopefully be an excellent, and long, fic.
(I can't stand it when fics are cut to half what they could be.) |
Reviewed By: Cyan On: October 24, 2002 22:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! WOW! WOW! O_O!!! WONDERFUL! i know what u mean about those 'fake' slave stories. i love slave stories, but some of them are sooo cheesy. but urs is the tops!!! |
Reviewed By: Dark Oblivion [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 02:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
