| "Love On A Leash" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2002 16:30 CST
Comment/Review:
Ah, you should have Schu INSIST on buying Ken. He wouldn't be as cruel as Kase. But then again maybe Schu and Yoji are buddies and he might mention something to Yoji? I know I shouldn't write your story for you, but Kase is such a creep in this. I don't know if I want to read Ken being tortured again.
Good chapter. |
Reviewed By: trinity_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2002 16:21 CST
Comment/Review:
AAAAh nooooooooo he's gotta be okay...Someone will find him, nurse him back to health, he'll go home, find Kenken is gone *waaa* then go kill kase and save Kenken yippee!!!! |
Reviewed By: Jade Green [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2002 10:04 CST
Comment/Review:
O.O
RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN!! *screams* wake up Ranran and save Kenken! *whimpers and whine* Keeeeeeen! No! Don't go back with Kase! Kick his ass! Call Yohji! *groans in dispair* *whimpers* Mebbe Yohji came to check on Ran and he's there when/if people come to take Ken away.. You could throw a twist in and say they try to take Omi too.. but they CAN'T succeed! I'll hurt someone if they do.. *whimper* |
Reviewed By: ember_fang [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2002 22:35 CST
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WAHHHH!!!! WHY DID YOU KILL RAN? You better not make him dead! |
Reviewed By: Talon Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2002 21:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish the enjoyment factor went higher than ten. Hiya, I normally review your fics on FF.net, but since my stuff is hosted here, and FF.net is a bitch for putting up updates when they say they are I thought I'd check over here and see if the latest chapter of my favorite fic was up here as well!!!
*growl* If Ran dies, I don't know what I'll do...to you. *grins*
Just kidding.
I really really really love this fic, and damnit all, now I'm all worried about Ran and Kenken again!!!! *whine* Moremoremore!!!
Gods, I'm so addicted to your fics it isn't even funny.
Thank you so much.
Oh, I may have mentioned it before, this fic inspired me to write my own slave fic, though rest assured it's nothing like this, not even in the same fandom. *smiles* It is archived here, Restraints and Liberations.
But if it came down to it, I'd rather you wrote another chapter of anything of yours than read anything of anyone's!!!! *grins*
Not obsessed...not at all.
More.
Talon Sage |
Reviewed By: Enna Namo On: November 06, 2002 05:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Don't you dare and give Ken to someone else? That would do more damage than *using* him as a bed slave. In fact, I guess if Aya would just do it, Ken might feel better about their *relationship*. I'm not speaking of Aya raping Ken or just enjoying the sex, but of making a gently way of love to him. At least, I doubt that Ken will ever think of himself as something different than being a slave, after the life he had to live.
I vote for lemon in the next chapter. *G* And be gently Aya or else....... |
Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2002 18:56 CST
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Ah, make you want to bap both Aya and Ken upside the head in this part. Aya seems to forget that as a slave Ken has never been given free will, so expressing what he wants is not something he can easily do. Ken needs to figure out that this owner has never BEEN an owner and he needs to tell Aya the what and whys of his actions.
Can't wait to see more. |
Reviewed By: Jade Green [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2002 18:09 CST
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*whimper* Poor Kenken.. *whimpers more* Don't let Ran get rid of him! I'd say Ran should start showing submission to Ken, but that would probably piss Ken off, thinking he was being mocked. I dunno. But damnit! Don't let that baka get rid of him!! *whimperwhine* They're so cute... Maybe Omi could come back over and try to help Ken! He could leave Ken with Yohji and Omi for a week or something. I dunno. Don't mind me. I really really like this story! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Silvia On: October 29, 2002 08:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I loved this chapter, so many emotions... and a bit of "action" coming from Ken! Yes! Too bad he still doesn´t trust Ran; I hope that now that Ran has to cofront Ken about the kiss he will realize that his owner really cares for him. I love how sweet you make them together.
Superb!! |
Reviewed By: Jade Green [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2002 00:20 CST
Comment/Review:
*squeeks* Noooo! No Kenken! It's okei! *pushes Ken towards Ran* He's not gonna hurt you!! Oh pooor Kenken! *whines* Why can't he let himself be happy? *huggles Ken* Poor lost little darling. Ran will make it all better... right? *whimpers* |
Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2002 06:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I won't mention the other website where I've read that fic before. Grrr. But I'm more than happy to see it here, too. *g*
I love this story. Youji and Omi are soooo cute together. And Aya being so adoringly nice to Ken is just heartbreaking.
The last sentence was, sniff, sniff, smile, so sweet.
**Like I'm ever going to let him leave my bed if I get him in here?**
What did Ken think when he was ill? Wasn't it something like he would love to sleep in those strong arms that carried him to the bathroom?
But I doubt that Aya will realise this unless Ken smacks him hard. Aya still is to shaken about what Ken had been used for and what Kase and others did too him. Thus if Ken ever wonts to sleep in those *strong arms* *G* he has start it. Go Ken Go. |
Reviewed By: Jade Green [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2002 01:10 CDT
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I reviewed this on the *evil* story place that dare not speak it's name. but I'll review it again! WOOOOO! I heart this story! Ran is so sweeeeet! And Ken is just *deliciously* submissive! I heart it so much! Please write more! and soon! |
Reviewed By: ...I guess you can guess^^;; *snickers* On: August 25, 2003 10:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like i've been saying, i love your ficcies!! LOVE ON A LEASH! LOVE ON A LEASH~! LOVE ON A LEASH~!!!!!!!!
@__@
Woo!
Goin' insane there for a minute.......
*calms down*
Hmm...i'm wondering if this fic really is an "R" rating here, though i'm just wondering.
Heehee..
Ooo!
I've an idea..sorta *sweatdrop*
Could ya put "Letters of Black" in 'ere?
*grin*
Just a thought.
Welp, i be seein' ya 'round^__^ |
Reviewed By: Sephykoi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2003 10:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woooo!
Like i've been sayin', i love your ficcies! *g* LOVE ON A LEASH! LOVE ON A LEASH!! LOVE ON A LEASH~!!!
@____@
Random bout of insanity for a minute there........
*calms down*
heehee..
Ooo~!
I've an idea..sorta.
Do ya think you'd stick "Letters of Black" here?
=^.^=
Umm..yea.
Welp, i'd be seeing ya~!!!!!
Ja na^_^
-I guess you can...guess^^;;; |
Reviewed By: Sephykoi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2003 10:59 CDT
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Arrgh..i put that twice.
@_@
stupid me...well, just remove one of 'em or don't pay any attention to one or the other. |
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