| "Love On A Leash" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mahtab On: July 25, 2003 03:28 CDT
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Hey, chapter 18 was unexpected and good. go on and PLEASE> up dare a little faster this time. |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 14:49 CDT
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Awww... Ken is so nice. Go Ken!!! Try to rescue your Aya-sama!!! Go! Go! Go!
^__^ Nice chapter and it's so cute... making me so shaky what's going to happen next. It's a good thing Youji, Omi and Aya understands Ken... ::sighs:: ::hearts:: How cute!!! Okay enough with the squealing -_-'
Keep it up!!
Please update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: malik_n_ceres_s_hana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 16:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting fic so far, hun! Granted, this type of story has been done many times before, I'm not complaining at all- you've put your own little twist on the story and I applaud that! ^_^.
+Ah... Ken and Ran are finally letting each other know their feelings... *_*. kawaii kawaii...!
+Now it Takatori REALLY killed? Hmph... it would be great if he was actually dead, though- that damn fish fin man... >.<
+The situation with Youji and Omi is pretty cute. Very nice pairing, too.
+DAMN THOSE PEOPLE WHO HURT KEN!
Okay- ranted enough. Good job! |
Reviewed By: Jade Green [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 03:45 CDT
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Weeeeeeeee!! I've been checking for this fic for months! And now it's updated! Woohoo! *snuggles Ken* I love this story so much X3 |
Reviewed By: chaotic kat On: July 07, 2003 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOW CUT THAT OUT!!!!! I love a good cliff hanger but the down side is waiting for the next chapter... please hurry up with it. |
Reviewed By: Firekitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO!! You must write more!!!!! I am going to go insane!!! You must finnish it!!!! Please!!! I'm begging you.... *sniff* I just...want them together....and kase dead. *eyes glow red* I WANT HIM 6 FEET UNDER!!! DO YOU HERE ME?? ILL GET HIEI'S KATANA AND COME AFTER YOU!!!!HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!! *Hiei comes in and smacks me over the hesd*
Hiei: Baka, You shouldn't threaten the author. You will never get anything that way.
Me:*waterfalls* Yeah I guess so. THEN I WILL PRAISE INSTEAD! *sets up a shrine to Atsureki* All praise Atsureki.
Hiei: *sweatdrop* she will never learn. |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2003 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAH! Finally finished reading the chapters ::rubs eyes:: ^_^' Anyways... I like it. Not bad. I can understand why you don't like those rape stuff.
Your style of writing isn't so bad. It's understandable and nicely described. Well brought out too.
There are a few grammatical errors and some typos. Not too much, but a few here and there.
I've read a few here and there slave fics and such... so it's not bad if you get a 9 there.
I really enjoyed some of the parts. I meant "some" because the part where Kase was raping Ken and all was so hard for me to get over. But I really like the Ken+Ran moments and cute Omi+Youji moments. KAWAII!!!
I totally agree with you. Kill Kase! KILL HIM! Someone HAS to kill that %$#@*& (insert curses)I hope Aya/Ran is going to be alright. Don't let the injustice come in! WHERE'S THE JUSTICE?!!! That's it. LET me at that Kase and kill him! GRRRR :( Maybe I can kill him somewhere between the chapters of your upcoming updates? ::grins::
Update soon please and keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Lordess of Hell [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 04:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so, ur fic is really good, the topic it deals with is something completely different, I have never seen this topic before, and it is genious!! u did a great job!!!pleeeeeezeee update soon *beggs*, oh, yes, by the way...*goes in line to kill kase*
so, pleeze update soon(am I repeating myself?^^°) |
Reviewed By: Sunam devy On: June 13, 2003 05:54 CDT
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hope that happy events made you forget this fic.
I hope you update soon but more then that I wish with all my heart that you are all right and happy. |
Reviewed By: dettamba On: May 24, 2003 06:38 CDT
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I'm following quite a while. I hope you didn't forgot about this fic. It's been quite atime since your last update!!!! |
Reviewed By: Beheena On: May 07, 2003 04:33 CDT
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nice fic. I hope ou up date soon. Ending it at such a trilling point and then forgetting to up date! Really!!! |
Reviewed By: Suisei Lady Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You must finish this soon, please. I just got to ir tonight and can't stop reading until last chapter but it's not finished yet, so, can you be so kind to continue it? |
Reviewed By: SavageTrinity On: April 07, 2003 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is honestly one of the best AU fanfics I've read. For the love of Takhito keep postage regular!!!! |
Reviewed By: A-chan On: April 05, 2003 20:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gosh, I love this fanfic! I've never been here before, but I read the whole thing and I'm loving it. At first, I wasn't so sure, because the summary sounded just plain disturbing, but it wasn't at all. Actually the whole Ken standing naked thing made me want to die laughing. ^^ I love ken and Aya! BWAHAHAHA! But yeah, you should continue! Please!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 18:07 CST
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yahoo you updated! i never liked the ken/ran pairing(i'm an avid YxR fan), but i can read this. it's very good, good enough that even though i don't like the pairing i still like it. heck, you might even make it so i like the pairing a little... i'll be lookingforward to another update. i hope the next chapter is longer also.
Mara |
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