| "Love On A Leash" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: Silvia On: October 29, 2002 08:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I loved this chapter, so many emotions... and a bit of "action" coming from Ken! Yes! Too bad he still doesn´t trust Ran; I hope that now that Ran has to cofront Ken about the kiss he will realize that his owner really cares for him. I love how sweet you make them together.
Superb!! |
Reviewed By: Jade Green [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2002 00:20 CST
Comment/Review:
*squeeks* Noooo! No Kenken! It's okei! *pushes Ken towards Ran* He's not gonna hurt you!! Oh pooor Kenken! *whines* Why can't he let himself be happy? *huggles Ken* Poor lost little darling. Ran will make it all better... right? *whimpers* |
Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2002 06:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I won't mention the other website where I've read that fic before. Grrr. But I'm more than happy to see it here, too. *g*
I love this story. Youji and Omi are soooo cute together. And Aya being so adoringly nice to Ken is just heartbreaking.
The last sentence was, sniff, sniff, smile, so sweet.
**Like I'm ever going to let him leave my bed if I get him in here?**
What did Ken think when he was ill? Wasn't it something like he would love to sleep in those strong arms that carried him to the bathroom?
But I doubt that Aya will realise this unless Ken smacks him hard. Aya still is to shaken about what Ken had been used for and what Kase and others did too him. Thus if Ken ever wonts to sleep in those *strong arms* *G* he has start it. Go Ken Go. |
Reviewed By: Jade Green [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2002 01:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
I reviewed this on the *evil* story place that dare not speak it's name. but I'll review it again! WOOOOO! I heart this story! Ran is so sweeeeet! And Ken is just *deliciously* submissive! I heart it so much! Please write more! and soon! |
Reviewed By: ...I guess you can guess^^;; *snickers* On: August 25, 2003 10:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like i've been saying, i love your ficcies!! LOVE ON A LEASH! LOVE ON A LEASH~! LOVE ON A LEASH~!!!!!!!!
@__@
Woo!
Goin' insane there for a minute.......
*calms down*
Hmm...i'm wondering if this fic really is an "R" rating here, though i'm just wondering.
Heehee..
Ooo!
I've an idea..sorta *sweatdrop*
Could ya put "Letters of Black" in 'ere?
*grin*
Just a thought.
Welp, i be seein' ya 'round^__^ |
Reviewed By: Sephykoi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2003 10:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woooo!
Like i've been sayin', i love your ficcies! *g* LOVE ON A LEASH! LOVE ON A LEASH!! LOVE ON A LEASH~!!!
@____@
Random bout of insanity for a minute there........
*calms down*
heehee..
Ooo~!
I've an idea..sorta.
Do ya think you'd stick "Letters of Black" here?
=^.^=
Umm..yea.
Welp, i'd be seeing ya~!!!!!
Ja na^_^
-I guess you can...guess^^;;; |
Reviewed By: Sephykoi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2003 10:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Arrgh..i put that twice.
@_@
stupid me...well, just remove one of 'em or don't pay any attention to one or the other. |
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