| "Love On A Leash" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hope On: December 10, 2002 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O Will you update soon? Please? I just came upon on this fic, and started reading it.....I need more. O.O Wonderful plot! Kase will die.....won't he? At the hands of Aya, right? He MUST DIE.......DIE.... *narrows eyes* *heads off muttering something about chopping Kase up in little bits and peices, starting with his most senstive area...* |
Reviewed By: SlvrTrinity [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2002 21:48 CST
Comment/Review:
*ARUGH!!!!!!*
Pulls hair out! I'm reading both on fanfiction.net and here and I'll say it again...
*KASE! You F%*#ing Bastard! DIE!!!!!*
(SlvrTrinity goes after Kase in full Shi'ne mode that would make Aya proud!)
"Help me!"
"DIE!"
Kase is then squired, beaten, and cut into tiny little chunks with a very sharp Katana...
SlvrTrinity: (smile, and whipes off Katana) I feel much better now....
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
(I'm not above begging!! {Big puppy eyes}) |
Reviewed By: Jade Green [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2002 01:04 CST
Comment/Review:
*wails* KENKEEEEEEEN!! *jumps Kase and beats him with a 4 iron* DIED BASTARD! SHI-NE! *whimpers* Will Ran find KenKen? *whimpers again* Pweese? He can't stay with Kase! He can't! I'll cry! *sniffle* |
Reviewed By: Akari On: December 05, 2002 23:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh that was evil! *kicks Kase around*
And the short chapter was evil too.
*kicks short chapters*
More soon onegai? |
Reviewed By: trinity_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 20:45 CST
Comment/Review:
GOod good, more....la |
Reviewed By: Akari On: December 02, 2002 20:05 CST
Comment/Review:
need more need more need more!
*reloads the page trying to make more chapters appear* |
Reviewed By: Jade Green [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 00:53 CST
Comment/Review:
*whimpers* Kenkeeeeeen! You should have let SchuSchu buy him. *sniffles* SchuSchu would be nice to Kenken. At least nicer than Kase. But a poke in the eye with a sharp stick is nicer than Kase... |
Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2002 16:30 CST
Comment/Review:
Ah, you should have Schu INSIST on buying Ken. He wouldn't be as cruel as Kase. But then again maybe Schu and Yoji are buddies and he might mention something to Yoji? I know I shouldn't write your story for you, but Kase is such a creep in this. I don't know if I want to read Ken being tortured again.
Good chapter. |
Reviewed By: trinity_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2002 16:21 CST
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AAAAh nooooooooo he's gotta be okay...Someone will find him, nurse him back to health, he'll go home, find Kenken is gone *waaa* then go kill kase and save Kenken yippee!!!! |
Reviewed By: Jade Green [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2002 10:04 CST
Comment/Review:
O.O
RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN!! *screams* wake up Ranran and save Kenken! *whimpers and whine* Keeeeeeen! No! Don't go back with Kase! Kick his ass! Call Yohji! *groans in dispair* *whimpers* Mebbe Yohji came to check on Ran and he's there when/if people come to take Ken away.. You could throw a twist in and say they try to take Omi too.. but they CAN'T succeed! I'll hurt someone if they do.. *whimper* |
Reviewed By: ember_fang [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2002 22:35 CST
Comment/Review:
WAHHHH!!!! WHY DID YOU KILL RAN? You better not make him dead! |
Reviewed By: Talon Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2002 21:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish the enjoyment factor went higher than ten. Hiya, I normally review your fics on FF.net, but since my stuff is hosted here, and FF.net is a bitch for putting up updates when they say they are I thought I'd check over here and see if the latest chapter of my favorite fic was up here as well!!!
*growl* If Ran dies, I don't know what I'll do...to you. *grins*
Just kidding.
I really really really love this fic, and damnit all, now I'm all worried about Ran and Kenken again!!!! *whine* Moremoremore!!!
Gods, I'm so addicted to your fics it isn't even funny.
Thank you so much.
Oh, I may have mentioned it before, this fic inspired me to write my own slave fic, though rest assured it's nothing like this, not even in the same fandom. *smiles* It is archived here, Restraints and Liberations.
But if it came down to it, I'd rather you wrote another chapter of anything of yours than read anything of anyone's!!!! *grins*
Not obsessed...not at all.
More.
Talon Sage |
Reviewed By: Enna Namo On: November 06, 2002 05:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Don't you dare and give Ken to someone else? That would do more damage than *using* him as a bed slave. In fact, I guess if Aya would just do it, Ken might feel better about their *relationship*. I'm not speaking of Aya raping Ken or just enjoying the sex, but of making a gently way of love to him. At least, I doubt that Ken will ever think of himself as something different than being a slave, after the life he had to live.
I vote for lemon in the next chapter. *G* And be gently Aya or else....... |
Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2002 18:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Ah, make you want to bap both Aya and Ken upside the head in this part. Aya seems to forget that as a slave Ken has never been given free will, so expressing what he wants is not something he can easily do. Ken needs to figure out that this owner has never BEEN an owner and he needs to tell Aya the what and whys of his actions.
Can't wait to see more. |
Reviewed By: Jade Green [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2002 18:09 CST
Comment/Review:
*whimper* Poor Kenken.. *whimpers more* Don't let Ran get rid of him! I'd say Ran should start showing submission to Ken, but that would probably piss Ken off, thinking he was being mocked. I dunno. But damnit! Don't let that baka get rid of him!! *whimperwhine* They're so cute... Maybe Omi could come back over and try to help Ken! He could leave Ken with Yohji and Omi for a week or something. I dunno. Don't mind me. I really really like this story! ^.^ |
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