| "Lemon Fantasy" Reviews/Comments [ 57 ] |
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Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2002 03:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Oooooh. BDSM = good. Vegeta's fantasy with the tail-play was especially nice. Mmmmmm. Tail. ;D |
Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2002 15:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT was soooooo funny, i like it how you kinda got the last chapter to start out as though it wasn't a fantasy, and then ended it with...well, i'm not gonna ruin the ending, you know what it was, i noe plenty of ppl that read reviews to find out whether or not the story's good b4 reading it. well, this story is damn HOT and wet too...if you get my drift..LOL ^_^ but it is sooooo funny, and damn your lemons are good...but, that's not the point is, it's the fact that Ms. Tina Lang has a decent, genuine plot behind the madness (LOL yea right) i noe sometimes that i only write stories for the lemons. but enough of my babble. great story, continue please...okey-doke? ciao for now.
~n. |
Reviewed By: Jasp_jedi4hire [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2002 21:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Ha take that Vegita. hehehe I liked that last chapter. Poor Veggie such a let down that IT"S ONLY A FANTASY. Ha! SOrry I get carried away. ANyhow. Great chapter! |
Reviewed By: xel On: November 02, 2002 18:01 CST
Comment/Review:
More sex, more bondage and maybe a little SM |
Reviewed By: syethemano On: October 29, 2002 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn. This fanfiction is sexy. |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2002 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the lemon!! Wasn't really THAT kinky. I've read kinkier....heh heh. I love that quote you put: It was just a daydream that came to me while I attempted to masturbate—I mean, meditate!
SOOOO FUNNY!! LOL!!
GREAT LEMON!! CAN'T WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER!! ^^
CONTINUE!! |
Reviewed By: Sara On: October 29, 2002 17:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Aww, that's so sweet! Kinkiness just for me?! I feel so happy! Hehe. Yay Kinky!! |
Reviewed By: Joleen On: October 29, 2002 11:02 CST
Comment/Review:
Good job, Tina (say hi to Hobo for me) |
Reviewed By: Tara Veseur On: October 29, 2002 10:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really need to stop reading lemons at work, if I do then I can't concentrate for the rest of the day!
My boss walked in on me while I was reading this, and before I could click away she looked over my shoulder and asked me what I was reading. I was mortified. So I told her and she went into her office and locked the door.
I hope I don't get fired for this. |
Reviewed By: Legana On: October 29, 2002 09:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, cool =)
I thought that was her revenge lol, that she played som mind game with him or som.
but cool, I'm looking forward till the next chapter, luckily I saw no yamcha *sighs happily* |
Reviewed By: Susan On: October 29, 2002 07:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG Poor Veggie, it was all a daydream-lollol!!!
The lemon was simply delicious and so naughty ^_~. What a way to start my morning :D. I can't wait to see what Bulma has in store for Veggie *laughs evilly*. |
Reviewed By: Legana On: October 28, 2002 08:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey, nice fic, curious to what happends next, sillly bulma, if she 'd know Vegeta, she would know his feelings.
woman just cannot understand the pride of people, well men neither :s |
Reviewed By: Tara Veseur On: October 28, 2002 03:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My my, I do so hate it when men just leave afterwards!
I liked the lemon though. *smirks* It was very juicy. *smirks* So the next one's going to be in the gravity room? *smirks* I wonder what her revenge is going to be? *smirks* I wonder when I'm going to get tired of all this smirking? *smirks* So hurry up and get writing, before I end up smirking myself to death. *smirks* |
Reviewed By: syethemano On: October 27, 2002 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was a little confused by the fantasy/reality thing. Although I hate weepy women dreaming about love, everything fits so well that I can't help but like your fic anyway. Ah, that's a compliment... |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2002 18:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! GREAT LEMOn!! CONTINUE!!
WHat's Bulma revenge gonna be. DID YOU SAY THE NEXT CHAPTER IS GOING TO BE THE LAST?? *gasp*
GAHHHH!!
CONTINUE!! LEMON!! NOW!!
PLEAS!!! I LOVE YOUR LEMONS!!!!
but Vegeta was quite an ass in the chapter...but still hot hot hot!! ^^ |
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