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| "Beautiful Dawn" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] | | Pages (4): [ « < 1 2 3 4 > » ] | Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 10:39 CST
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I haven't caught up with this one for a very long while. The way you wrote the "Duo-angst" was very moving - I got all sniffly as I read it! I was surprised Heero didn't realize where he'd "seen" Duo before - but Duo's sudden realization of just who Heero was...wow.
I really like the pairing of Zechs and Heero, and the past relationship of Zechs and Duo. Not seen very often, and it works very well as you've written it. | Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This fic has been really good. I think Heero gave in a little to easy in the end (but I'm an angst fan). Is Ch 30 the last? or will there be more? | Reviewed By: zechsluvheero On: March 27, 2003 01:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my favorite zechs and heero fanfic ever it is just so sweet and hot and the 30 chapter was so hot especialy when heero serrendered to zechs. The lemon scenes in all the fanfic was so hot I hat to turn on the airconditioner in my room.
Please hury update i cant wait for more *drools* | Reviewed By: Rude On: February 24, 2003 18:27 CST
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AAAAAAAhg!!!! I'm doing the lemon dance, woyoyoy
~_~ | Reviewed By: rude On: February 24, 2003 17:19 CST
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Wow! °_° There is a site about Soursop!!, jeje I live on a caribean Island myself and now I cant see the fruit in my grand parent's the back yard without thinking of sexy Zech an Heero under the tree..oh gosh..hentaihentaihentai.... | Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: February 21, 2003 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WWWWWoooHHHoooooooooo,...*huff,huff*....anybody feels the HHHHeeeeaaatttttt???...is it me,..or is it sudenly SSSSooooooooooo HHHHoooootttt in here??...*wink,wink*...^.~
i guess it's safe to say that yer-next chapters gona've these two screwing like WWWWillldddddd-rabbizzzz Neeee???...*hentai grins*....HHHHHmmmmm,...zechy almost naked,..only wearing a TTTiiinyyy bath-towel,...heero in a sleeping-robe,..BBBaaareelyyyyyyy concealing anything,...poor hee-chan,...he's gona be "eaten" by BBBiiggg,..BBBaaaddd,..SSSSeeeeeexyyyy,...ZZZeecchhyyyy-wolf Sooooonnn,...*giggles*..CCContinueeeeeeee Soooooonnnn,...OOnneegggaaaaiiii??...and keep-up the good work kay,...till yer-next chapter,..JJJaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa and GGGaaaanbbaaaatteeeee-Neeee!!^.~!!
p/s;poor duo-kun Neee??...*sssssiiggghhh*...
well,...he can't have EEEveeryythingg can he?..
at least he's tryin to be understanding,..
and trowa is SSoooooooo Veeerryyy "helpfull"..*giggles*..wonder what
quatra gona think when he found-out what his koi been up to,..to help our poor
starcross lovers,..CCCoontinueeeeee soon,...i DDDeeeemmaaaanddddd it,...*grins*..gona give some Yuuuummmyyyy pokky if ya do,..*puppy-dog-eyes*..U.~ | Reviewed By: Lilyblue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 19:58 CST
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Lovely fic Michalyn! I really am looking forward to the next chapter. Wow, Duo vs. Heero. For some odd reason I'm picturing *blushes* a threesome lemon in my head. Either way, please update soon!
Lily | Reviewed By: Elle-FaTe2x1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2003 10:40 CST
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oooooooooooo!!!!!! This is getting good! I love it so far. Is there going to be a show down between Duo and Heero? Pleaseeeeeee update again soon this is such an awsome story! | Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: January 12, 2003 02:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOOOhhhhhhh,...seems SSSooooommeeoneeee a lil GGGrrreeeeeennnnn on the eyes,..and duo sure got it BBBaaadddllllyyyy,......*smirk*....HHHHHHmmmm,......things're getting much more intresting somehow Neeeee??...let's see;....zechy want's heero,...duo want's zechy,...heero hates zechy,....heero loves zechy,....duo hates heero,...duo seems abit attracted to heero???....maybe????....HHHmmmmm,....what about a threesome???...zechy+heero+duo,...*evil hentai grins*...i usualy don't go for threesome,.....i'm a big 1+2+1 fan after all,...but i don't know,...these threesome seems a bit intresting to me sudenly,....*ponders*......*shrugs*...all in all,...another GGGrreeaaatttttt and Innntreesstinnggggg chapter,.....*clap,clap*....LLLLooooooovveeeee it,....keep-up the good work,...and continue soon,...till yer-next chapter,...JJJJJJaaaaaaa and GGGGaaaannbbbbaatteeee-Neeeeeee!!^_~!! | Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 09:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read all 28 chapters at once, which should tell you how enthralling the story is.
I love how you've portrayed the characters, and Duo's reappearance at such a critical juncture...wow. I am so glad you didn't make him out to be some total cad.
I feel for them all, as if I knew them...especially Zechs, Heero, and now Duo.
Very well written - exceptionally emotive. | Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: January 02, 2003 05:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GGGGAAAAHHHH,....*scowl*....*glared at zechy*......hope heero won't give into him easily this time,...let zechy suffer more,....*grins evily*...let him feel much angst before any happy-ending between him and heero begins,...*grins smugly*...continue soon kay,...want to see how duo feels after he finaly gets to meet the man that took his place in zechy heart,...
MAAAANNNN did that feels weird,...usualy i read fics that featured 2+1/1+2,...i don't normaly likes them bein pair-up with others,....*frowns*....this is one of the few times that i tried to read them pair-up with the other pilots,...and i got to admits that zechy and heero seems cute together,.....but i'm STILL a hardcore fans of 1+2/2+1 though,....nothing beats those two as a yaoi couple in gundam,....*grins*...keep-the good work and continue soon,...till yer-next chapter,...JAAAAAAAAA and GAAANBBAAATEEEE-NEEEEE!!^_~!! | Reviewed By: SSProcyonShields [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2002 21:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes you have updated! excellent, very good continue. Your good work. | Reviewed By: Timber Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2002 05:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is going great!
Keep it up!
Keep it a 6x1!
That 13x5 sounds a good idea! ^_^ | Reviewed By: Solder Heero On: December 20, 2002 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent .
You do not find many Zech's, Heero coupling.
Continue with this fic you have a great winner here add some more Lemony goodness with the other couples. | Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: December 10, 2002 23:50 CST
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i'm an avid fan of 2+1/1+2,...and usualy tends to avoid reading heero or duo bein pair-up with others,..such-as duo+wufei,heero+trowa,duo+quatra,...etc,etc,etc...
but sometimes,..i would stumble upon a fic with different pairings that i found quite good,..just like yours,...heero and zech makes quite a pairing Neeee??...your story is very intresting and the plot is amazing,...full of angst and sappy momments,...with a touch of humor and not to mention VEERYYYYYYYY HHOOTTT sex scenes,....*wink*....only one thing though,....it kinda get a lil bit wierd when duo character shows-up,...because even though zech said that he and duo are history,...he still admits that he cared for duo,...and duo seems not quite over him,...the question here is;how much does zech cared for duo??...is it as a friend or a lover??...and does he really over him??...and also the thing that makes it more wierd for me to read is that usualy i read in any fic the main couple usualy tends to be duo and heero,..soo it's kinda funny to me to read heero in a relationship with someon other than duo and duo bein the ex-lover to heero love,...
sorry if i bored ya with my ramblings here,...*rubs head sheepishly*....kinda gets abit carried away sometimes,...*grins*...
ignored it kay,...all in all,...a VVERRRYYYYYYYYYYY well done fic and i LLOOOVEEEEEEE it,....hope ya keep-up the good work and continue soon,...till yer-next new chapter,....JJJAAAAAAAAAAA and GAAAANBBAATEEE-NNEEEE!!^_~!! | | Pages (4): [ « < 1 2 3 4 > » ] |
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