| "Beautiful Dawn" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 22:53 CST
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Okay what is with the tease? -_- I thought you put a new chappie in and this is what I get? Make a new chapter please! I really love this story...
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Reviewed By: Devil On: July 29, 2003 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's... excellent, magnificence and enjoyable. I'll be waiting for the next chapter. Congratulations. |
Reviewed By: Bishoonenlover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 17:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh.My.God...THIS WAS GREAT!!!So good,so cute,I just wanted to die!If I write a story half this good I'll be happy.But I'm at a lost of inspiration...it's kinda of sad...but I'll get there eventually.I just wished for more lemon and less lime!I'm a dirty girl!I NEED the lemon!=^.^= |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 21:39 CDT
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The entire chapter pays homage to "Love hurts."
I love the way you've portrayed Duo here. I really feel for him and wish there was something that could make him feel like he belonged.
Heero's struggle to accept his feelings for Zechs is also nicely shown. Glad to see that one simple conversation with Duo doesn't have him doing a 180, even though it does have him thinking of what he SHOULD do or say.
A very well written story, and the feelings are so potent! |
Reviewed By: Ita-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAarrrrgggggggg,....*pout*......you MMMMuuuusssssttttttt continue SSSSoooooonnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!.......
i'm DDDyyyiiiinnggggggg to know what's gona happen next to poor ZechxHeero+duo love-triangle,.....CCCContiinueeeeeee Soooooonnnnnnnnnnnnn???....Onnneeeegggaaiiiii??? |
Reviewed By: Leanie On: June 15, 2003 01:35 CDT
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When I first ran across this fic i was like alright this sounds interesting and i was so glad that i gave it a try because it is really good and i like it alot.
I have searched sites hoping to find more chapters of this fic and i am always happy when i see another one written.
I have enjoyed Zechs persuit of Heero who is shy and hot. Poor Zechs, all he wants is to get Heero to relax and love him back. Zechs is being the total sweety to him and i like that. I like how you have presented all the characters and i love that way the interact with another. I like the treiz/wufei pairing as well.
I am so happy that another chapter is written though. Heero/zechs is a fave pairing along with Heero/duo and i like the way that you have been writting this.
I hope that another chapter comes out soon and i want to say that i cannot wait to read the end of this wonderful story. I pray that everyone will have a happy ending and that Heero and Zechs will be happy together and that no one dies.
Please write another chapter soon. |
Reviewed By: Kat On: May 27, 2003 06:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story! The way that you have written this story is wonderful. You can literally feel the turmoil that Heero and Zechs are going through. Normally, I would not read this type of story simply because it is a male/male story, but this story is the exception to the rule. I cannnot wait for your next chapter and hopefully it is soon! |
Reviewed By: Alan On: May 19, 2003 23:09 CDT
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Hallo from Alan-girl (I'm really a girl. The Alan confuses people) Well! This is the second time I have read your story in *checks watch* twenty four hours! I believe you have me hooked. I love your characterisation of Zechs and Heero! Yeah! And I love that last bit of your last chapter (Zech thinking of the bright future and Heero waiting for the darkness to return) Classic! I have bookparked your page so you had better grt the next chapter up soon! *growls at computer* SOON! |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2003 11:03 CDT
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Well...seems that Heero still has some issues to resolve, despite his willingness to accept Zechs.
And poor Duo! The shower scene was very poignant! What WILL he do?
All around, very nice portrayal of character emotions. |
Reviewed By: Purple Mist On: April 26, 2003 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So glad Heero has Zechs ^-^!! Another great chapter. Hope Duo finds happiness too. |
Reviewed By: Timber Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2003 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great!!!
A wonderful 6x1!!! |
Reviewed By: Purple Mist [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 14:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! |
Reviewed By: Lilyblue [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 00:39 CST
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Very sweet! I'm glad you updated. I'm really looking forward to more! |
Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: March 16, 2003 00:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOOOhhhh,......MMyyyyyy,....GGaaawwdddd,....*shiver*....this latest chapter,...the lemon scene is SSoooooooooooo Innnteennnsseeeeeeee and HHHHooottttt,.....*shudders*...*drools*...ya should continue soon,...can't wait to see what happen next,...will heero finaly love zech???...will ya put more YYYuummmyyyyyy lemon scenes between these two in the next few last chapters??...*hentai leers*...keep-up the good work kay,...and hurry-up with more new chapters,...till then,..JJaaaaaaaaaaaaa and GGGaaaanbbbaaaateeeeeeeeee-Neeeeee!!^.~!!
p/s:Zeechhyyyyy is SSSooooooooooooo Daaamnnnnn
SSeeeexxyyyyy in here,...*drools*...^O^ |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 10:46 CST
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Making my way through these chapters until I finish! Oh, man. Duo was...absolutely wonderful in this chapter. His acceptance, but more importantly, the deep feelings he has for Zechs, really shine here. Why else would you step aside and let someone else take your love away, unless you loved them enough to want to see them happy?
Who knew I was going to need a box of tissues for these last two chapters? |
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