| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kina [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 17:14 CST
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HEY! Where are the updates. I'm waiting!!!
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Reviewed By: Kina [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 12:30 CST
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please?
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Reviewed By: Kina [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 12:29 CST
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Next chapter? P
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Reviewed By: anonymous2 On: December 20, 2003 21:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i found this fic really interesting and i'd like to see more but one question. Where can you find this 'embryonic' by arch nemesis?? if anyone else knows plz email evo105@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: Kina [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 16:57 CST
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First, I have to say what a horrible thing to happen to a girl, especially Kari. This was a very well written story despite the dark nature. I don't usually read fanfics so scary(I have a problem with rape) but the romance peaked my curiosity, so i read it and i have to say i enjoyed it and am going to check in on it when you update. Keep up the creative writting.
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Reviewed By: john hawk On: December 09, 2003 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey great fanfic, though im not one for rape this fanfic has caught my interest, good job, cant wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Cherry Dragon On: November 28, 2003 18:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When is the next chapter coming? Good chapter by the way!
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Reviewed By: twin-dragon On: November 27, 2003 22:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this stort is one of the best that I've read until now although I don't really approve in bondage and yuri but I think this story is pretty sweet. you should update more for this fic.
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Reviewed By: AngelOfBlades [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 18:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update!! i love this fanfic!!
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Reviewed By: i dont know On: November 14, 2003 16:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it could you update please sorry im not very good at writing reviews
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Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U UPDATED! ARIGATOU!!!!!!!!! about time^^. interesting couple, i really wanna see where this leads. get the rest here soon!
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Title: yay!!
Reviewed By: Chloe On: October 18, 2003 19:24 CDT
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You need to write more!! it's so special!! I'm glad you updated! Keep up the fantastic work, man!
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Reviewed By: Dragon kaiser On: September 27, 2003 22:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What`s up warwolf? This is Dragon kaiser, who`s writing you for the first time, although I`ve been seeing this fanfic of yours since you posted chapter 1. This is one of my favorite fanfics, so keep going, please. And by the way, congratulations for the chapter 3, because I think it`s even better than the others, although you really took your time to write it, don`t you? Well, that`s all what I have to say, so bye for now.
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Reviewed By: pocketeraser On: September 20, 2003 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. um. wow. that was totally intense.
i wonder if takato is actually a good person on the indide.. or if he's a crazy hormone drivin bastard as well. or would that be his father... update soon... |
Title: Now this, IS good..
Reviewed By: HaXx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 08:08 CDT
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Ahh, a delightful mix of hentai, with a strong plot and excellent character development. It made my day |
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