| "The Sexual Escapades of Takeru Takaishi" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Title: Fucc the Title
Reviewed By: Soratoness On: June 27, 2006 11:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE DRAMA BULLESHIET! Sorato/Koumi Foe Life..
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: RedDragonKnight [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 12:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been an interesting read so far. The first few chapters had pairings that are wuite different from what I normally read, however I enjoyed them none the less. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
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Title: "Shoot"
Reviewed By: Koumi/Loc On: June 26, 2006 11:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come on can I least get some Koumi lemon huh??? It's coo Tk rulez too I guess.!,>
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Reviewed By: Yasanagi On: June 25, 2006 18:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really do have a knack for creating crazy tangled up sexual relationships. I look forward to seeing how you top this latest twist.
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Title: Please keep it NanTakCher
Reviewed By: NancyTakeruCherise-fan On: June 25, 2006 00:18 PDT
Comment/Review:
Yes. Don't let her give him up. TK needs Cherise and Nancy. NOT Kari. Usualy I'm a Takari fan, but not here. Cherise is so much better than Kari. And Nancy is too.
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Title: Don't go wrong
Reviewed By: Capito Celcior [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 08:12 PDT
Comment/Review:
I mean, TK should NOT regret him being with his mom or Cherise. That doesn't sound like him at all. Not the TK we learned in chapter 1, 2 and 3! And why lead him back to Kari? He doesn't need her, after she betrayed him! Please don't let this end like that. It started out SO STRONG! I can understand him feeling bad about Sora, infact I encourage you to insure that he feels bad about it. Just get him to be back with Cherise and Nancy. They truly care for him. You can see it. They are lovers. LOVErs Love-rs. They love him. Family, who cares. THey have transcended that fase.
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Reviewed By: J On: June 14, 2006 06:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's OK. Not much interested in Takeru, to be honest. How about letting Yamato rape Takeru to show him how a real man does it in the family? =P OK, I just muffled a laughter at how Takeru was "on par" with Yamato. More used to Takeru living in his older brother's shadows, I guess. =P Interested to see what else you can come up with. Takeru and his aunt (or was it cousin?...) didn't interest me much because she was an original character... felt like there really was no relevance to it. =\ I'd like to see a Yamato/Takeru scene (as stated previously), but I don't know if that floats your boat. =P Up to you, chief.
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Reviewed By: Lollyn00b On: June 05, 2006 21:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic; I've always been a fan of incest pairings, but I've never seen this one before! Great job :D
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Reviewed By: nemismon On: August 02, 2005 11:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it! Could you put the url to that in your bio or in the author note of your next fic?
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Title: this is great
Reviewed By: the kid On: June 03, 2005 16:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is great i love this incest and by the way im a big fan of incest if u can please write another chapter my email is josh20_3@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: hopefullight On: July 02, 2004 04:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i am a long time fan good going :)
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Reviewed By: King Haruka On: May 21, 2004 10:34 PDT
Comment/Review:
I usually don't like these kidda things,but eehm this was damn well written and before I knew it my screen was "SPLASHED"
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Title: shoot I forgot the title!
Reviewed By: S-locc On: April 15, 2004 03:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This ficc was good for a incest, even though im against incest, I wish you added Koumi too this cuz most ficcs that have incest or not alwayz havin fuccin jyoumi! Fucc jyoumi fans cuz Koumi-loc fan foe Life I could cee a sicc Koumi Fan but im not perverted Koumi fan, I just like Koumi lemons or Koumi fluffs in ficcs you feel me? Peace Koumi-loc and Sorato sicc fan foe Life cuz from that Loc-State Cali...
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Reviewed By: fatass666 On: January 27, 2004 18:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the fic its beautiful i enjoyed reading how nancy got tk to "ehem" yes the way she did it i liked much. says the kai ecchi
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Reviewed By: ac On: December 20, 2003 13:24 PST
Comment/Review:
cool fic man. tk rocks ;-)
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