| "The Burning Leftovers of Temporary Madness" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: dbz72 On: July 14, 2003 00:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, good story. Please update your "True Torture" fanfic! it's my fave story of yours so far!!! Everyone who has read this story should check out True Torture! |
Reviewed By: I Luv Vege [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 07:14 CDT
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Oh wow...This ficcy is great!! I was never a fan of Piccolo paired with anyone, but you make it so.. appropriate?? Hmm I dont know if that is the right word, it will do for now though!
I cant wait to find out more, its rare that I find a fic so... intersting. And this I do find very interesting. I have to know what the connection between 'him' and that big dark things is...!!
UPDATE SOON!! |
Reviewed By: Khandy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting scenario, although i'm not really a fan of that pair...hell, i didn't even think that it was possible. It was a bit hard to read at times, but okay for the most part. It was...good. |
Reviewed By: dark star On: July 12, 2003 13:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is great! I like your style of writing
please update soon and keep the yaoi coming!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Christina G. On: April 16, 2003 06:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool story. the way you have Vegeta is just... awesome. the depths to his character in this fic are just beyond comprehention at times.
i hope he does get over Bulma soon and settle on the hunky green bean.
what would we do without Vegeta? for one thing; the show sucks without him.
i'm a usual yaoi reader. mostly Veg/Goku fics. but i am glad that this one looks like it'll be Veg/ pic. a v/g in this story does not fit. |
Reviewed By: Joanna On: April 12, 2003 17:35 CDT
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After reading your sucky B/V fics, this is a drastic improvement. |
Reviewed By: Korisovra [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 12:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this maybe one of the most interesting fanfics I've come across in quite some time. I'd really love to see more of this caliber of work. |
Reviewed By: Korisovra On: April 07, 2003 12:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this maybe one of the most interesting fanfics I've come across in quite some time. I'd really love to see more of this caliber of work. |
Reviewed By: Brit On: March 27, 2003 22:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YESH! I live for the angst. I must say, this is definitely one of the better fics I've read. I LOVE IT! Keep up the good work, and please, update soon. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 14:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Just... wow. NOT what I expected, and a really great surprise. I really like the way you are writing Trunks, btw. Update soon.
Also - Give Goku a good ass kickin' for me,k? |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 04:31 CST
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Nice. Will love finding out what this dark... thing is. Loved Vegeta's tussle with the kitty! Gorgeous! And Gorika? Gave ME the creeps, just from how Vegeta reacts.
Yay for kickin Kakkarotto in the ass! =D |
Reviewed By: HUNBUNBABY On: February 17, 2003 17:11 CST
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WOW! You have to be the most creative person on the planet! I didn't like the Gorika chick tho-it should've been ChiChi! That would've served as better revenge. She shouldn't have been dead in the beginnin and she should have been cheated on as well. Oh wow tho..Goku's a jerk! FUCK HIM! And I never did like Bulma either..the fuckin ho. OMGsh PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE finish this story!! ahh it's so good. PEACE OWWWWT |
Reviewed By: Brity On: January 08, 2003 21:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ACK! >_ |
Reviewed By: Daniel of Lorien On: January 06, 2003 22:58 CST
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hey... great story... I should have stopped by earlier! |
Reviewed By: Setos Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 16:59 CDT
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wow. this is great. so amazingly written. i love vegeta. hes such a strong character in this story. i love it. i love him. and ill love u if u write more. write more. please. |
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