| "The Burning Leftovers of Temporary Madness" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bowgirl On: September 11, 2005 14:58 CDT
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Wow i'am so glad that you update. Chapter 17 was great. This is one of the best stories I read in a long time . Thank you for updateing it. Good luck1!!
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Title: chapter 17
Reviewed By: visitor On: February 07, 2005 23:00 CST
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I'm glad you updated, even if it did take more than a year. Life happens, eh? I would not have guessed the creature as being Bulma, or as having once been Bulma. I might have missed it, but did you say why Goku was able to be around her without any adverse effects? Or has he just not *seen* her? I'm also surprised that Vegeta doesn't hold killing Radditz against Piccolo, or at least confront him directly about it. This is one of the better stories I've seen in a while, and I'm glad you continued with it. Even though it's going to end soon, I hope it turns out well. Good luck.
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 23:18 CST
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And to think, I thought I'd never see an update on this. I suppose I should have known better. Of course I had to go back an reread it. Yeah its still good. Looking forward to the mystery of Bra being explained. Also looking forward to finding out Vegeta's plan. Is he going to get Goku back like Bardock asked? Or is he going to break the bond and leave Goku wallowing in misery? Thank You for writng and updating this. -El-
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Reviewed By: yuikey On: September 02, 2004 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UP DATE YOU HAVEN"T SO LONG!!! PLEASE DON'T GIVE UP ON THIS STORY!!! IT REALLY GOOD!!!!!!~_~
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Reviewed By: keyKi On: August 19, 2004 15:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: hot cat On: May 20, 2004 23:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story!Please update soooooon ^_^
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Reviewed By: Jin56 On: April 15, 2004 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update this is such a good story!
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Reviewed By: something like human [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 22:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I FOUND IT! AFTER I TOOK THE TIME TO EMAIL YOU AND EVERYTHING! OMG...I AM SOOO STUPID SOMETIMES. Anyways, this is just brilliant. can't say enough about it. I see that you haven't updated in a while...want to borrow a few muses to get the job done? You can have all three of mine if that'll get you to finish.
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Title: Ch 16
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 17:51 CDT
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Wow! Amazing! Fantastic! Ok, enough praise. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: I Luv Vege * i need to log in* On: October 08, 2003 01:02 CDT
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SHIT! I gooooootttttaaaaa read more more more! Wow.. as I've said before, this is just TOO good! I have to read more!
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Reviewed By: SSJ Lychee On: September 19, 2003 22:32 CDT
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oh wow. when I first started reading this I thought "eh, it's okay..." and left it alone for a while. I just caught up and Wow! this is really good! I'm not crazy about Gorika, but I love the Piccie and Veggie pairing. Good interaction between the characters too. Can't wait for the rest. |
Title: This ficcy rules
Reviewed By: I luv Vege *it wont let me log in!* On: September 16, 2003 03:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I SO have to know whats going on!!!!
This is one of the greatest fan fics ever!! WOO HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! |
Reviewed By: I Luv Vege *it wont let me log in!* On: September 13, 2003 09:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!! I NEED more of this!! PLEASE can you update?? Please??
I just love Vegeta's character in this ficcy... I think it fits him so well!! Hehee.. and Im not a big fan of Piccolo, but I actually like him in this ficcy too!! WOW! Thats some feat you have achieved!!
Please update soon! Im going INSANE!!!!!! Please try and keep me sane!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: I Luv Vege [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 06:40 CDT
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WOO HOO!! AN UPDATE! I LURVE IT! HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEEEEEEEEEEE!!! I WANT ANOTHER UPDATE VERY SOON!!! :) :) |
Reviewed By: ssjchrissa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 02:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i completely love the interplay between Vegeta and Piccolo. They fit so well together. Both are absolutely gorgeous, smart, witty, sexy, and have been two of the best bad guys on the show.
i'm thinking the shadowy thing is one of two things. first it is either it's Goku or Goku related. or that alien Prince's curse upon Vegeta.
can hardly wait for the next chapter. |
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