| "The Burning Leftovers of Temporary Madness" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lady Wolf On: December 01, 2002 22:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow your story is great, I love it, please post more soon, I can't wait to find out what happens next!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: SkittleKicks [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2002 09:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the whole "Vegeta drunk" thing as not a sillyfic deal. It's usually OMG I GOTSORD VEGETEA DRUKN AN LOOK AT HMI GO!!!!111
Or, the converse, no matter how much he drinks, his "Saiyan tolerance" won't let him be drunk. People that much in control are usually the first to fall to the prey of alchohol's effects.
Good deal. |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2002 06:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey, I was wondering when we'd see more of this! I'm sorry to hear that this has happened in your family, but I guess it's good that you can laugh at it. Angst is always more fun in a book than in your life.
Good wrap-up to the flash back, I can't wait to see the Earth chapters. |
Reviewed By: Dragon On: November 04, 2002 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not a reader of this kind of story/writting, hence the 7 in style and the overall 8. The first part seemed to drag to me which is normal as I read something I am not used to. As I read I became more engrossed. Some of the scenes were very realistic and the ending made me want to keep reading. Very nice! |
Reviewed By: wawashkeshi On: November 04, 2002 18:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
i really think i could enjoy this fic, once i have an inkling of an idea where you're going with it? i will be looking for more, so please don't leave me hanging. |
Reviewed By: Elvia On: November 04, 2002 01:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh... its been a long time since I've read a story that could actually hook me with the first chapter. Your style of writing is damn near flawless. You have that first person technique down perfectly. I saw no spelling or grammer mistakes (unlike my stories), and damn if this ain't original! I mean most fics have Vegeta (my all time fav character by the way) as the "bad guy", cheating on bulma or beating her up or whatever. But you showed it how it most likely would be. The other way around. Lets face it, Bulma is the type to trade in her guy for the better model like she did with yamucha. She even admitted it herself in the original Dragon Ball. I truly enjoyed this story! My gosh I can't wait to read the next chapter! It's been so long since I've read a story of this calliber. And for all these reasons this chappie get a 10 out of 10! Hope you like this review its by far the longest I've ever written. ... My finger hurt from typing so much!
~Elvia |
Reviewed By: Sam On: November 02, 2002 21:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked It alot. Espwcially the way you made Bulma the bad guy. I don't really like her(Isn't it obiveus?). Please update soon.
Sam |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2002 04:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmm, taste the angsty goodness. Of course Bulma's nuts. Gotta be. How could she do that to him? She had to know how much he had trusted her. Aaaaaaaghhh!
Love the story. Can't wait to see more! |
Reviewed By: lillithan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2002 00:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Isn't it funny how the worst moods turn into great stories? Well that seems to be the case here, it's turning out wonderfully. I feel bad for Vegeta losing Bulma to Goku, but somehow it seems right. ~I know I'm demented, maybe it's cause I want Veggie all for myself ^_* ~ Any how, keep up the good work, you have me hooked! |
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