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"The Burning Leftovers of Temporary Madness" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ]
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 Reviewed By: I Luv Vege * i need to log in*  On: October 08, 2003 01:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SHIT! I gooooootttttaaaaa read more more more! Wow.. as I've said before, this is just TOO good! I have to read more!
 Reviewed By: SSJ Lychee  On: September 19, 2003 22:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh wow. when I first started reading this I thought "eh, it's okay..." and left it alone for a while. I just caught up and Wow! this is really good! I'm not crazy about Gorika, but I love the Piccie and Veggie pairing. Good interaction between the characters too. Can't wait for the rest.
 Title: This ficcy rules
Reviewed By: I luv Vege *it wont let me log in!*  On: September 16, 2003 03:18 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I SO have to know whats going on!!!! This is one of the greatest fan fics ever!! WOO HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
 Reviewed By: I Luv Vege *it wont let me log in!*  On: September 13, 2003 09:34 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Gaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!! I NEED more of this!! PLEASE can you update?? Please?? I just love Vegeta's character in this ficcy... I think it fits him so well!! Hehee.. and Im not a big fan of Piccolo, but I actually like him in this ficcy too!! WOW! Thats some feat you have achieved!! Please update soon! Im going INSANE!!!!!! Please try and keep me sane!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: I Luv Vege [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 27, 2003 06:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
WOO HOO!! AN UPDATE! I LURVE IT! HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEEEEEEEEEEE!!! I WANT ANOTHER UPDATE VERY SOON!!! :) :)
 Reviewed By: ssjchrissa [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 17, 2003 02:33 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i completely love the interplay between Vegeta and Piccolo. They fit so well together. Both are absolutely gorgeous, smart, witty, sexy, and have been two of the best bad guys on the show.

i'm thinking the shadowy thing is one of two things. first it is either it's Goku or Goku related. or that alien Prince's curse upon Vegeta.

can hardly wait for the next chapter.
 Reviewed By: dbz72  On: July 14, 2003 00:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, good story. Please update your "True Torture" fanfic! it's my fave story of yours so far!!! Everyone who has read this story should check out True Torture!
 Reviewed By: I Luv Vege [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 13, 2003 07:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh wow...This ficcy is great!! I was never a fan of Piccolo paired with anyone, but you make it so.. appropriate?? Hmm I dont know if that is the right word, it will do for now though!

I cant wait to find out more, its rare that I find a fic so... intersting. And this I do find very interesting. I have to know what the connection between 'him' and that big dark things is...!!

UPDATE SOON!!
 Reviewed By: Khandy [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 12, 2003 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
Interesting scenario, although i'm not really a fan of that pair...hell, i didn't even think that it was possible. It was a bit hard to read at times, but okay for the most part. It was...good.
 Reviewed By: dark star  On: July 12, 2003 13:24 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this story is great! I like your style of writing
please update soon and keep the yaoi coming!!!!!
 Reviewed By: Christina G.  On: April 16, 2003 06:13 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
cool story. the way you have Vegeta is just... awesome. the depths to his character in this fic are just beyond comprehention at times.

i hope he does get over Bulma soon and settle on the hunky green bean.

what would we do without Vegeta? for one thing; the show sucks without him.

i'm a usual yaoi reader. mostly Veg/Goku fics. but i am glad that this one looks like it'll be Veg/ pic. a v/g in this story does not fit.
 Reviewed By: Joanna  On: April 12, 2003 17:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
After reading your sucky B/V fics, this is a drastic improvement.
 Reviewed By: Korisovra [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 07, 2003 12:55 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think this maybe one of the most interesting fanfics I've come across in quite some time. I'd really love to see more of this caliber of work.
 Reviewed By: Korisovra  On: April 07, 2003 12:40 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think this maybe one of the most interesting fanfics I've come across in quite some time. I'd really love to see more of this caliber of work.
 Reviewed By: Brit  On: March 27, 2003 22:00 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
YESH! I live for the angst. I must say, this is definitely one of the better fics I've read. I LOVE IT! Keep up the good work, and please, update soon. ^_^
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