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Reviewed By: Esso1979 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2017 20:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe I read this story and u went and fucked it up in
this chapter! U have been removed as an author I follow.
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Title: Change the shitty chapter of BR
Reviewed By: Dark Abyss [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2017 04:31 PDT
Comment/Review:
You sick bitch, just how sick are you? First you tell its BV fic
then you pull that BR shit. If you like raditz cock that much bitch
then write different story for him. You really broke my heart with
this fucking piece of shit chapter. Now who's son will be in bulmas
womb bitch huh? Now there no point of bulma getting together with
vegeta. She lost her memory and now fucked that sob raditz. Just
change the fucking chapter like frieza used some hologram of bulma
to show vegeta. And kill that son of a bitch radits. If you love bv
then you will change it. No BV lovers write sick shit like this.
Just change the fucking chapter for BV lovers or you won't find
many readers in future. You lying double timing bitch.
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Title: FUCK U 2$ SLUT
Reviewed By: Dark Abyss [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2017 17:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
You fucking slut. First you make vegeta rape her then only to make
bulma closer to him even though it wasnt his fault then you sick
bitch made frieza rape him. It doesn't even look like VB fic. You
twisted sick fucking bitch just to make your raditz more heroic you
made vegeta being get raped and humiliated. I hope you burn in hell
you 2 dollar whore. Instead writing this shit join some whorehouse,
or fuck your family for money. I hope to god you or your children
get raped like that in your life then you will understand the
humiliation.
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Title: Quiestion?
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2011 06:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why does it say completed when you haven't even finished the battle scene? Or gotten Bulma back, or killed Frieza |
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2011 10:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutely love this series!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! poor Yamcha in ♦s!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Font Color i can't stop reading this, its so good!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I ¢¾ This I can't wait to read more of your stories!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!☺ ☻ |
Reviewed By: GogetaSSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 09:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Like the story alot, but you havent updated in ages WWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYY??????????? this isnt fair no ending
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Reviewed By: Adela 4 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 21:30 PST
Comment/Review:
love it
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 14:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just found this, read it in one day, how can you just leave this like this, you should have done more, i need more story dammit...start writing again
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Reviewed By: SaiyanPrincessKiara [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 03:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved reading this! I've been reading non stop till way past midnight! You've done an amazing job, please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next! Great job, keep it up ;)
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Reviewed By: meljoy On: August 19, 2005 13:49 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, i love your fic. I've been reading non-stop for the past few hours. I'm kinda dissapointed that i had to stop here. i mean the fight! Vegeta's gonna have a handfull to do to get his beloved mate back (beloved hmmm?) Any how please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Keriana On: May 19, 2005 02:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
..Uhm.. Did you just.. drop off the face of the earth and die? 'Cause.. updating every week? HAven't updated in a loooong time. At least give me an ending or something. I read the.. other.. thingie.. and it went over my head, methinks. Fill in the gaps? Leaving us on a cliffie. Feh.
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Reviewed By: me On: September 28, 2004 16:03 PDT
Comment/Review:
have you died or somethin?
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Reviewed By: Lady Isis On: September 28, 2004 06:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even though your fanfic is waaaaayyy darker than what I usually read...its so easy to get absorbed into it, its very unpredictable...and long. Its taken me a couple days to finish reading the chapters you have. I origionally saw you on the ff.net but when you said in your profile that you were not going to update any more because of the ff.nets rule change I almost died, until I saw you had your other works on mediaminer...damn the ff.net...by taking your amazing piece of work off they lost a really awesome author and the chance for other people to read it. Iona
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Title: What? That it!
Reviewed By: empressariyana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 00:34 PDT
Comment/Review:
You gotta be kidding me! I hope your still alive and come back to update this story! It's great! We are still waiting for your return! And an end to this brilliant piece of fanfiction art!
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Reviewed By: You are my Hero. On: July 06, 2004 14:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so sorry that I didn't review all your chapters, but I was so caught up in this. I first started reading this on FF.net, but when you moved this here, stupid me didn't bother to read your profile so I didn't know. Anyways, this is an amazing fic. Let's just say that my parents had to pry me from my computer to go eat. Please update soon! (and I hate to bug you, but BOHOE sequel? That's my fav fic in the wholeeee world)
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