| "FROM BAD TO WORSE..." Reviews/Comments [ 141 ] |
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Reviewed By: Editor Rascal On: January 29, 2003 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
While waiting for you to finish "Two Sides To A Story", I decided to reread this one. Fan-fuckin'-tastic(!!), is all I can say.(I seldom use profanity, but here it is warrented!). I have read all of your stuff and all of it is just as good. Keep it up!
This is Editor Rascal, plantin' a big wet one on 'ya! |
Reviewed By: Erin On: December 11, 2002 13:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved this story. I started reading and couldn't stop. Great job! :-)
~Erin |
Reviewed By: Koganei Kaoru no Anata [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2002 15:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You definately are the best writer on this site whom I've come across. Although the plot wasn't all that creative, you wrote it really well (though you raided the SAT vocab list). But I enjoyed this fan fic very much, and I'm looking forward to reading more of your works. |
Reviewed By: majin sue [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2002 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ALL I HAVE TO SAY ABOUT THIS CHAPTER IS ...
WOW! |
Reviewed By: majin sue [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2002 09:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS WAS BY FAR THE BEST B/V FANFIC I HAVE EVER READ.
PLEAS GIVE US MORE. |
Reviewed By: Darkfire85 On: July 24, 2002 10:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN, that was good! Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: 'lil debbie On: June 10, 2002 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Since this is one of my top 4 favorite fics ever, I decided to give it a re-read. Boy am I glad I did! It's even better than I remembered! I'm reading the sequel. . . and it's blowing the doors off everything else out there, you've got true talent!! |
Reviewed By: Mystic_blue [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2002 02:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story, you were sarcastic when you said 'realistic' right? OOC big time for Vegeta but very very cool fic. |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 22, 2002 10:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Susan is your biggest fan. I like it a lot. |
Reviewed By: Matrixchick [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2002 12:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really really really really really really liked it. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 09, 2002 04:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, what a chapter. I'm sitting at my desk with tears in my eyes. Vegeta distancing himself from Bulma, her pain at his aloofness, the conception of Trunks and Veggie's departure. This has been an incredible story, and I'm so glad I finally took the time to read it. You truly are a gifted writer. Good luck with "Two Sides,,,". I'll be reading and reviewing as the chaps come out. Again, Kudos for this brilliantly written fic. Ja |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 09, 2002 03:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic!! The short conversation between Vegeta and Yamcha was priceless-LAKE FLACCID OLYMPICS!!-ROTFLMAO!! That was rich. I loved the way Dorothy got her just desserts. The fight between Vegeta and Shithead had me in suspense, but the end was super. Now Yamcha will mind his own damn business for good. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 09, 2002 03:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. The dreams that Bulma experienced made me sick to my stomach, as well as what Frieza did to Chibi Vegeta and Bulma's reaction to it all. Then Yamcha shows up, again jumping to conclusions. That asshole just doesn't learn and I hope Vegeta puts him in the hospital. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 09, 2002 02:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chap. You know it's amazing how someone (Mrs. Briefs) who goes thru life with her eyes shut can have such an insight on Vegeta's character. I felt sorry for Bulma when Vegeta started saying how he didn't want to have any kids. I see now where the animosity in "Two Sides To Every Story" comes from. Great job as always. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 08, 2002 03:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one yummy lemon!! |
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