| "FROM BAD TO WORSE..." Reviews/Comments [ 141 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dark S. Princess (SMDSP) On: October 27, 2001 16:55 CDT
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*ROTFLMAO* Oh, my good. The bedroom scene was just too funny. I couldn't stop myself from laughing outloud. I can't believe he ate it. This is getting good. I await the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Crimson On: October 27, 2001 17:10 CDT
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*claps* MORE! I don't think they are ooc, I think this is a really good story that really does explain how Vegeta changed from being a killer to being tamed by Bulma^^ Keep up the great writing! You are talented! |
Reviewed By: Eloy Brightdreamer On: October 27, 2001 17:25 CDT
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OK, I'm still really liking this story. It's one of the best B/V stories I've ever read. There's just one little tiny nitpick that's been bothering me. You say in Ch. 12 that Vegeta's normal temp is about 112. If that were so, there'd be no way Bulma could tell he had a fever just by touching him. I'm guessing you put that in there for shock for the doctor, but it's a little hard to belive. Like I said, just a little nitpick, nothing that would stop me from reading this story and loving it! |
Reviewed By: Ember On: October 27, 2001 17:47 CDT
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Impecible writing as ever! This is definitely one of my all time fave fics. The condom scene was just too funny. I can't believe you're making us wait for the lemon, though, thats just cruel, but hey punishment isn't necessarily a bad thing lol. I just can't wait for the next chapter! K i'll stop doing cartwheels now, sayonara tensai *-_-* |
Reviewed By: seiya_odango On: October 27, 2001 17:54 CDT
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Gah! Cliffhanger! Cliffhanger! You are truly evil. Poor Vegeta. Condoms must not be something he's not at all experienced with... I'm REALLY glad that you poster. I've considered posting my chapters here. I suspected Fanfiction.Net was going to go bankrupt, but I didn't actually think there was that possibility. Anyway, wonderful chapter, I'm dying for the next! |
Reviewed By: Buffynick6 On: October 27, 2001 19:36 CDT
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Chapter 13 is awesome:) good job :) thanks for posting even though FF.NET isnt working :) i know a lot of writers who have suspendend writing there fics until FF.NET is working so thanks for keeping us entertained :) great job :) |
Reviewed By: Jan_AQ On: October 27, 2001 20:39 CDT
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My favorite line of Chap 13 was: "If it wasn't having the cuffs of his pants hemmed up
because they were too damn long, it was having to find some clothes in the
mall's children section. Was there anything about this planet that wasn't
intended to be personally humiliating?" LOL! Keep writing! :) |
Reviewed By: Alexa On: October 27, 2001 21:03 CDT
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WOW!!!!! I am so far on the edge of my seat that I think I'm going to fall off!!!!!! That was an excellent chapter!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: October 27, 2001 21:17 CDT
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Not only was this chapter hallarious but it was absolute perfection. The usual from Darke Angelus. ^.~ It's an amaziong story. I can't wait to find out what Dr. Breifs wanted and exactly why the Z Fighters were searching the city. |
Reviewed By: Vanity On: October 27, 2001 23:59 CDT
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Like you, I am tired of ff.net's unreliability. But anyway, I've stuck with the story since then and just finished chp. 13 and thought it was excellent. I can't believe you did that to Vegeta, how embarassing! I anticipate the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: pandora homerus On: October 28, 2001 12:37 CST
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My dear dear Angelus,
I LOVE YOU(r writing)AND WANNE HAVE YOUR BABY (when you're a guy that is, when you're a girl I WILL be getting troubles with my parents, but hey, what the hack)!!
This story is just sooooo f**king good! All your stories are good!! I love them all! Did I mention that I wanne marry you and have your babies? Did I?! (doorbel rings, and a couple of very concerned looking orderlies enter my apartment. "So little girl, you forgot to take your medication AGAIN, didn't you? Well, lets get dressed and we'll take you to see that nice doctor that you're so fond of." I shiek while my chibi eyes are filled with horror. "Oh no! Not doctor Freud again! That creep wrote a whole book that I was forced to read! No please not him! Anyhing but him! Have mercy!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!" the orderlies ignore Pandora's rather pathetic display and draggs her away while popping some happy pils into her mouth.
Fin |
Reviewed By: Darke Angelus On: October 28, 2001 21:16 CST
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(Looks up at the comment above and then shakes head in dismay) "I've destroyed another young mind...too sad...too sad..." |
Reviewed By: Solitary Hawk On: October 28, 2001 21:25 CST
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Y'know, my friends and I used to blow up condoms as balloons and hang them around the dorm rooms. We used to have pink ones..and glow in the dark ones..and ribbed ones..But I've never discovered any edible ones before! Laughter! My gawd you torment that lil Saiyan like nobody I've ever read before! Keep up the great work, ya fool!! |
Reviewed By: Mishka On: October 29, 2001 04:18 CST
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boy oh boy. I thought I was cruel, but you've taken it to a whole new level. I can't wait a whole week for the next chapter. I'm on the edge of me seat!
Poor old Veggie. The boy's got problems, huh. I nealry died laughing when he ate the condom though!!
You do realise that this story is a paradox in itself, don't you. I realise that things are getting "from bad to worse", but the story is going from good to better. It's so gripping. Keep it up ^_^ |
Reviewed By: D-chan On: October 30, 2001 14:22 CST
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What can I say? I'm impressed. You have a wonderful talent for keeping people interested. You're also very inventive. Great job! |
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