| "FROM BAD TO WORSE..." Reviews/Comments [ 141 ] |
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Reviewed By: Fuyuna [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2008 10:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's good. But i feel sorry for Vegeta. Sell his body for address? such desperate attempt unlike Vegeta. But it's good. Especially, i like Dorothy Vs Bulma catfight. Good job Bulma!!! And i'm glad you make Vegeta "return the debt" to Dorothy. That's Vegeta. Although i feel the ending feel left hanging. Anyways i will read the continutaion of this fic
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Reviewed By: lovesreina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 01:09 CDT
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Very good story! I really enjoyed it. Stayed up all night to read it, it's a long one. Thanks for writing it!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 02:06 CDT
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Damn. This is one good story. It's probably been a while since you last got a review, but I'm impressed with the story. The sex is a minor part only, but the story, the strength and determination, and the complexity that is the mind of Vegita, is vividly portrayed. Thank you for sharing this story with us.
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Reviewed By: majin sue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 21:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Problay the best dam B/V get together i've ever read. I re-read it just because. Great work. Now i'm reading the others.
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Reviewed By: majin sue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 21:56 CST
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Probaly the best story (B/V get together ) i've ever read
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Reviewed By: silver wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 00:11 CST
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I can say whole heartedly that that was one of the best V/B fics. I've ever read, actually the second best and ya just about beat the one I hold as the best! Can't wait to read you're sequile eother.
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Reviewed By: silver wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 00:09 CST
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I can say whole heartedly that that was one of the best V/B fics. I've ever read, actually the second best and ya just about beat the one I hold as the best! Can't wait to read you're sequile eother.
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Reviewed By: silver wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 00:06 CST
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I can say whole heartedly that that was one of the best V/B fics. I've ever read, actually the second best and ya just about beat the one I hold as the best! Can't wait to read you're sequile eother.
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Reviewed By: silver wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 00:02 CST
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I can say whole heartedly that that was one of the best V/B fics. I've ever read, actually the second best and ya just about beat the one I hold as the best! Can't wait to read you're sequile eother.
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Reviewed By: devildice708 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 13:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. I like it a lot. I see why it got a lot of good reviews. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: AJ125 On: October 24, 2004 15:33 CDT
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One of the best B/V stories ever, i'm about to read the sequel. I know it will be as good. PS- Have you posted on Fanfiction.net yet, it's a lot more exoposure, and everyone deserves to read this great story. God, keep writting-XOXO
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Reviewed By: majin sue [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 06:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perhaps one of the best V/B get togethers i've ver read. i've just finished reading it again......and it's still great. ...........
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Title: From bad to Worse
Reviewed By: Christyx On: January 04, 2004 21:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am in the process of writing a fanfic! and now I am SCARED SHITLESS because of your BRILLIANT WRITING! MAN you r intimidating!!! Truly the BEST fanfic i ever read on B/V! LOVE IT!
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Reviewed By: MajinSakuko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 07:37 CST
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Wow! I definitely haven't read such a dark fic recently. As for the German in one of the first chapters. "Thank you" is "Danke schön" The "ö" can be written as "oe" And "you're welcome" is "Nichts zu danken" I like it when someone uses German in his fic, and I abolutely enjoy the sequel! Thanks, MajinSakuko
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Reviewed By: Tara On: March 26, 2003 22:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! i know it has been three years since you wrote it but it was great! i love these B/V get together stories! keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Editor Rascal On: January 29, 2003 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
While waiting for you to finish "Two Sides To A Story", I decided to reread this one. Fan-fuckin'-tastic(!!), is all I can say.(I seldom use profanity, but here it is warrented!). I have read all of your stuff and all of it is just as good. Keep it up!
This is Editor Rascal, plantin' a big wet one on 'ya! |
Reviewed By: Erin On: December 11, 2002 13:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved this story. I started reading and couldn't stop. Great job! :-)
~Erin |
Reviewed By: Koganei Kaoru no Anata [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2002 15:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You definately are the best writer on this site whom I've come across. Although the plot wasn't all that creative, you wrote it really well (though you raided the SAT vocab list). But I enjoyed this fan fic very much, and I'm looking forward to reading more of your works. |
Reviewed By: majin sue [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2002 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ALL I HAVE TO SAY ABOUT THIS CHAPTER IS ...
WOW! |
Reviewed By: majin sue [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2002 09:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS WAS BY FAR THE BEST B/V FANFIC I HAVE EVER READ.
PLEAS GIVE US MORE. |
Reviewed By: Darkfire85 On: July 24, 2002 10:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN, that was good! Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: 'lil debbie On: June 10, 2002 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Since this is one of my top 4 favorite fics ever, I decided to give it a re-read. Boy am I glad I did! It's even better than I remembered! I'm reading the sequel. . . and it's blowing the doors off everything else out there, you've got true talent!! |
Reviewed By: Mystic_blue [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2002 02:38 CDT
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Great story, you were sarcastic when you said 'realistic' right? OOC big time for Vegeta but very very cool fic. |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 22, 2002 10:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Susan is your biggest fan. I like it a lot. |
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