| "FROM BAD TO WORSE..." Reviews/Comments [ 141 ] |
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Reviewed By: Matrixchick [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2002 12:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really really really really really really liked it. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 09, 2002 04:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, what a chapter. I'm sitting at my desk with tears in my eyes. Vegeta distancing himself from Bulma, her pain at his aloofness, the conception of Trunks and Veggie's departure. This has been an incredible story, and I'm so glad I finally took the time to read it. You truly are a gifted writer. Good luck with "Two Sides,,,". I'll be reading and reviewing as the chaps come out. Again, Kudos for this brilliantly written fic. Ja |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 09, 2002 03:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic!! The short conversation between Vegeta and Yamcha was priceless-LAKE FLACCID OLYMPICS!!-ROTFLMAO!! That was rich. I loved the way Dorothy got her just desserts. The fight between Vegeta and Shithead had me in suspense, but the end was super. Now Yamcha will mind his own damn business for good. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 09, 2002 03:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. The dreams that Bulma experienced made me sick to my stomach, as well as what Frieza did to Chibi Vegeta and Bulma's reaction to it all. Then Yamcha shows up, again jumping to conclusions. That asshole just doesn't learn and I hope Vegeta puts him in the hospital. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 09, 2002 02:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chap. You know it's amazing how someone (Mrs. Briefs) who goes thru life with her eyes shut can have such an insight on Vegeta's character. I felt sorry for Bulma when Vegeta started saying how he didn't want to have any kids. I see now where the animosity in "Two Sides To Every Story" comes from. Great job as always. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 08, 2002 03:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one yummy lemon!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 08, 2002 02:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh what a lovely chapter. Bulma and her dad have made up, Vegeta's healing up nicely and now maybe they can start to have a real relationship. I still can't believe that Veg ate a condom-lol. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 08, 2002 02:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor B/V. Nothing seems to be going their way. I think the Z fighters and Nappa are hallucinations. As far as Dr. Briefs showing up, I think Bulma's mom spilled the beans. Let's face it, she's totally clueless. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 08, 2002 01:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GGGGGOOOOOOOO BULMA!!! She's looking after her man and slapped the slut around. Great chap (^_^). |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 08, 2002 01:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
See? I knew that bitch was gonna put the moves on Vegeta. Damn her!! Well, at least Bulma and Veg are together again. Good chap. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 08, 2002 01:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no, I knew we hadn't seen the last of that bitch! For a moment there I thought he had sensed Bulma. Personally I think she's gonna try to take advantage of Vegeta in the state that he's in. I hate her. Anyway, I don't think Dr. Briefs has a posse looking for Vegeta, but in the condition that he's in and after everything he's gone thru what else is he supposed to think. Btw that was some hallucination that Veg had in the forest. Good chap. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 07, 2002 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sheer brilliance. The conversaton between Kami and Vegeta was fantastic, bordering on spiritual. I would pay to see Vegeta's face as he looked upon himself as a Super Saiyan. Yeah, this chap was great! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 07, 2002 21:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe Vegeta wants to end it all. He must be in some serious pain. I love the fact that Bulma moved out in protest. Good for her. She's old enough to take charge of her life. Poor Vegeta, I wonder where Piccolo is taking him...to see Goku perhaps? Great chap. Loved the fight scenes too (^_^). |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 07, 2002 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe what that bastard Yamcha has done, kind of like the domino effect. I hope that somehow, someway Bulma is able to find Vegeta. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 07, 2002 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SHIT!!! Everything was going fine and Yamcha has to come and ruin everything. I say kill the bastard! Dr. Briefs is an idiot for listening to him. Didn't it occur to him that Yamcha was just plain jealous? Ugh!! I can't write anymore. I'm pissed!! |
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