| "FROM BAD TO WORSE..." Reviews/Comments [ 141 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: March 07, 2002 18:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great. They're finally starting to be civil with each other, for the most part. There's something about that Dorothy that I don't like, and I get the feeling we haven't seen the last of her. Yamcha is really starting to get on my nerves and I can see now that he's gonna be starting something nasty. I just hope Vegeta kicks his ass into next week. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 07, 2002 18:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this chap had me crying. You captured Vegita's sense of hopelessness so well that my tears ducts couldn't take it anymore. No wonder Bulma falls in love with him. All he's ever known is hate, betrayal, pain and violence, yet his spirit and pride remain intact. The end to this chap was kind of like the calm after the storm. Awesome (^_^). |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 07, 2002 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, so all this time Vegeta had been working for Dr. Briefs. Amazing. Now Bulma owes him an apology. As far as Yamcha goes, will he create problems for Bulma to spite her for being more interested in Vegeta's welfare than in Yamcha's? Guess I'll have to continue reading to find out. Good chap (^_^). |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 07, 2002 04:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Boy, Yamcha must have a death wish to challenge Vegita like that. I guess you can't blame him though. I'd do the same thing if I heard Vegeta say things like that about a friend of mine. On second thought, no I wouldn't...I'm not that crazy. Gotta hand it to Bulma for sabotaging the gravity room. Someone had to curtail that idiot's masochistic tendencies to train when he obviously wasn't up to it. Again great chap. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 07, 2002 04:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent start to your story. This is more like I would imagine Vegeta to be. Rude, caustic and with about as much charm as an ingrown toenail. I love Bulma's verbal dressing down, even though I think she overdid it a little. Frankly I feel a little pity for Vegeta. He is who and what he is because of his past life and experiences. Only someone with a death wish would say that to his face though. Anywho, great chap. |
Reviewed By: j-goddess On: February 22, 2002 18:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so long! But SOOO good! I hope you right another fanfic :) |
Reviewed By: mic On: January 27, 2002 10:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! I read it start to finish in one day! Can't wait for the next one! |
Reviewed By: Kichi On: January 15, 2002 09:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story it's so full o vegeta-angst! it's so great. i've been following it for awhile and was on your mailing list and i don't know if i ever left a proper review because my computer has too much stuff on the harddrive for things to work properly. but now i'm saying it. i LOVE THIS FIC!!! |
Reviewed By: W-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2002 09:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
We all miss you on FFN, and we're looking forward to the sequel to From Bad to Worse.
Sincerely,
Wanda Chan |
Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2002 13:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
..gasp..*attemps to speak again*
*coughcough*
i..i...bloody...amazing...brilliant...bulma...and....vegeta...for...ever...
*faints and gasps with last bit of energy*
great story!truly amazing!:):):):P |
Reviewed By: SilverSun On: January 12, 2002 20:51 CST
Comment/Review:
WHEW! This story rules, I'm SO HAPPY YOUR HERE DARKE!! YAY!!!!!! WHOOOHHOOOO!! *cringes* geez, I'm a geek. >_ |
Reviewed By: Marron On: January 12, 2002 15:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, it took me a long time to read it but i finshed. and over all, it was the best story ever!!!!!! i mean it! so thinking of another? |
Reviewed By: W-Chan (Not logged In) On: January 08, 2002 12:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are one of my favorite authors both here and on FFN. Keep up the good work and forget about the flamers. They're just jealous of your talent!
=) |
Reviewed By: autumn On: July 25, 2002 11:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
You deserve all kudos possible for this fantastic fic. It was exciting, sad and overall an enjoyable read. A most interesting view into Vegeta's character, and a much more believeable B/V get-together than most out there. So glad you have a sequel already up, I'll be reading that one as well! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2001 03:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was the fist fanfic I ever red and it got me hooked on them. Now I not only read them I write and it's all because of From Bad to Worse. |
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