| "FROM BAD TO WORSE..." Reviews/Comments [ 141 ] |
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Reviewed By: majinsk8rvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2001 22:55 CST
Comment/Review:
DAmn D.A.!! Your fic is so fucking great i couldn't rate it!! This fic rates higher than what the rating says!!! 100 out of 100 points at most!! I just read the last chapter and i can't wait for the sequel. I hope it will be as good as this one!!!
I wish you could give me some pointers on how to write a really good b/v fic!!
Keep on the b/v pride, Dark Angelus!!! |
Reviewed By: Claire On: December 11, 2001 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoW! great story! i love b/v fics, and this by far is my favoirte one! I hoe tyou are goign to write a sequal that would make me love this stpry even more. You are a great writer and i hope to see more from you. |
Reviewed By: AngelKali02 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2001 01:17 CST
Comment/Review:
wow! great ending. I can't wait for the sequel. such a great writer. take a nice break, and start again nice and refreshed. |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2001 07:52 CST
Comment/Review:
goodness! i missed dinner and a night out for this one!
i just couldn't stop reading it! by far one of the best
V/B i have EVER read! (and believe me, i've read them all)
if you don't keep writing, i suppose you should be
prepared to have an incredible amount of nagging e-mails
waiting for you :) |
Reviewed By: YumeHana no Kuro On: December 07, 2001 20:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yatta! Oh my God! Great ending! I can not ABSOLUTELY WAIT until the sequel! See, this was the only thing that I really looked foreward to in the weekends (where I live, there's not alot to do). Man! Now I have nothing to read until the New Year! Kuso! Grr... snarl... snort... growl... but, that's okay! Great job! Heheh. I was listening to Elton John's 'I Guess That's Why They Call It The Blues' while reading, and it was uncanny and impecible at how it entwined with the story. Scary... anyway, keep up the writing, and I'll be here every day in the week before New Year's. Great job, once again. ~YHK |
Reviewed By: sansei On: December 02, 2001 10:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent, and I d not even read bulma vegita fics. |
Reviewed By: Dark Jades [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2001 11:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do enjoy this fic. The style and talent you show are amazing. There's just one thing I take issue with: the characters. There are a few scenes where the characters are ooc. Other than that, I LOVE this fic. |
Reviewed By: summerkangaroo On: November 26, 2001 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was soooooooo sad! please keep writing!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: zorella On: December 08, 2001 04:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An absolute pleasure to read! That was the best (by far) fan fic I have read in years! I can't wait untill New year for more. You turned one of the most re-told DB stories into a complete new light.
Zorella. |
Reviewed By: Alleycat On: November 24, 2001 17:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is utterly amazing. It's got everything from blood and gore to comedy and action to romance and angst (along with a manipulative bitch and a rotting corpse), and everyone's just about as in character as they can be, considering the plot. I like how you've managed to show the intellectual, almost-softy side of Vegeta without squashing the angry, disturbed, bad-ass part. The storyline's wickedly creative and totally awesome, and your writing style kicks. I've found a lot of authors are good with either imagery and descriptions or dialogue and character interaction, but you handle both extremely well. And your English! *dies* Pretty damn close to impeccable. This story's got it all. You update regularly and frequently to boot (with nice long chapters, too!). This fic is most definitely among my three faves. I can't wait for the next chapter; the fight should be interesting (provided it actually takes place, that is). Ja ne~! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: littlemoonhime On: November 24, 2001 16:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Thanks for more great chapters and always updating so quickly. I don't know how anyone could flame this story (i was reading some of the comments since I last posted.) This is an awesome fic, and your writing style is excellent. You actually delve into the characters and you are filling in the gaps of their personalities. I give it an A+++ ;) Keep up the good work ;) |
Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2001 03:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story. Every chapter I read is more compelling than the last. The best thing about this fic is that you give them time to develop their relationship into something deep. It seems with every V/B fic out there all Bulma and and Vegeta do is argue and screw. That's it and most of the authors have to gall to say it's true love. All that is is a shallow relationship based on lust and hot-tempered attitudes: Hardly anything insightful or worth reading cause once you've read one, you've read them all. Totally not the case with your story. Every new chapter is something interesting and difference. Not typical garbage. I love their relationship, how it's forming, how they are really getting to know each other. It's so awesome. Now I just can't wait till Yamcha and Vegeta get it on, especially since Bulma seems too incapacitated to stop them. ^_^ This is getting so good. You are officially my most favorite author! |
Reviewed By: Jen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2001 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's an excellent story. Very well written and more than worth the week long wait between updates. |
Reviewed By: W-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2001 23:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The interaction between Vegeta and Bulma seemed so real. The descriptions of his past were graphic, and gripping. Excellent chapter, excellent story! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: AngelKali02 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2001 17:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! remember me, good old 2nd commentor. i just wanted to tell you that your story is getting better and better and i'm very happy it's gotten the recognition it deserves. maybe mine'll get popular someday :P keep up the spectacular work. |
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