| "FROM BAD TO WORSE..." Reviews/Comments [ 141 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nosehair On: October 08, 2001 15:05 CDT
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the writing is really really good but they're ooc!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: AngelKali On: October 08, 2001 22:34 CDT
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awesome story. bulma and vegeta are just awesome characters, especially interacting with each other. it's quite amusing sometimes. |
Reviewed By: jterra On: October 14, 2001 14:13 CDT
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Excellent chapter, but it made me so angry to read it! That Dorothy woman must die! I want Vegeta to have her head - or maybe Bulma. She had better get what is coming to her. I can't believe Vegeta would sleep with that woman! She is going to have set him back so far. I'm glad Vegeta and Bulma are back together again though. You had better update on time! Anyway, very, very good job. Keep up the great work, and keep muddling through the OCC comments - I think you are starting to win me over. |
Reviewed By: Solitary Hawk On: October 15, 2001 14:03 CDT
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Holy shit!!! Poor ol' Veggie had to slut himself to get to Bulma! I want that Dorothy bitch to die (even if she IS just meant to be a female Vegeta)! At least B/V are reunited! Do I see a catfight in the future between B/D? That would be cool! |
Reviewed By: lenika On: October 20, 2001 00:41 CDT
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I truly enjoy this story more and more. I always look forward to reading the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Lotus-chan On: October 20, 2001 17:01 CDT
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Good God, this just keeps getting better and better! I cannot wait for the next part. What an emotional trip... This is the most insightful, in-character Bulma/Vegita 'get together' fic I've ever read. Probably the best portrayed Dragonball Z fic I have ever read. Your skills as an author cease to amaze me. |
Reviewed By: YumeHana no Kuro On: October 20, 2001 20:40 CDT
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Whoo! Angelus, hun, you never fail to keep me interested! Man, what a talent! Ooh, I wanted to throw Dorothy's head through a WALL... ehm... maa, when I couldn't read it on FF.net, I was alittle upset... no... Yumehana wasn't pulling her hair out... oh, no... ^_^; But then you had emailed me with the new chapter postings (yay! You never fail with that, either!), I was ecstatic to find that you post on this site, as well. You have to get the next chapter out! I'll be waiting!! ~YumeHana no Kuro |
Reviewed By: Jasmine Shragen On: October 20, 2001 22:56 CDT
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I read this story on ff.net it was WONDERFUL.......just thought you would like to know :) |
Reviewed By: firestarsolo On: October 22, 2001 17:35 CDT
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Sweet chapter |
Reviewed By: littlemoonhime - bunny On: October 25, 2001 13:00 CDT
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Awesome chapter!! thankies for updating so quickly!! Can't wait to read more!! |
Reviewed By: firestarsolo On: October 27, 2001 09:59 CDT
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You're going to make me wait another week?? =( |
Reviewed By: jterra On: October 27, 2001 11:07 CDT
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Very, very good chapter. I love Vegeta eating the condom! very funny!!! It's annoying, but a bit of a relief to see that the virus is not totally out of his system. It'd be too easy if it was. Also glad to see that the Saiyan mating techniques don't go over that well with Bulma - that is a refreshing change from all other fics. Keep up the great work. I just hope Dr. Briefs gets over himself! |
Reviewed By: JK On: October 27, 2001 11:16 CDT
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Beautiful chapter with the right amount of comedy and angst. Having Vegeta eat the condom was something rather interesting and something that I have never seen before. The hallucinated (or is it) Z-Fighter interaction was extremely disturbing and thought provoking. and the fact that he's now hallucinating Nappa and his father calling him home is making me worry about Veggie. Dr. Briefs at the end....oh my....what's going to happen now? Keep up the fantastic work. |
Reviewed By: bkerrmom1 On: October 27, 2001 12:01 CDT
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Great Chapter!! What a ride!! Can't wait for the next one. |
Reviewed By: faded On: October 27, 2001 13:39 CDT
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Get more out. I hope ffnet can get running up again. |
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