| "FROM BAD TO WORSE..." Reviews/Comments [ 141 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jan_AQ On: October 27, 2001 20:39 CDT
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My favorite line of Chap 13 was: "If it wasn't having the cuffs of his pants hemmed up
because they were too damn long, it was having to find some clothes in the
mall's children section. Was there anything about this planet that wasn't
intended to be personally humiliating?" LOL! Keep writing! :) |
Reviewed By: Alexa On: October 27, 2001 21:03 CDT
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WOW!!!!! I am so far on the edge of my seat that I think I'm going to fall off!!!!!! That was an excellent chapter!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: October 27, 2001 21:17 CDT
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Not only was this chapter hallarious but it was absolute perfection. The usual from Darke Angelus. ^.~ It's an amaziong story. I can't wait to find out what Dr. Breifs wanted and exactly why the Z Fighters were searching the city. |
Reviewed By: Vanity On: October 27, 2001 23:59 CDT
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Like you, I am tired of ff.net's unreliability. But anyway, I've stuck with the story since then and just finished chp. 13 and thought it was excellent. I can't believe you did that to Vegeta, how embarassing! I anticipate the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: pandora homerus On: October 28, 2001 12:37 CST
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My dear dear Angelus,
I LOVE YOU(r writing)AND WANNE HAVE YOUR BABY (when you're a guy that is, when you're a girl I WILL be getting troubles with my parents, but hey, what the hack)!!
This story is just sooooo f**king good! All your stories are good!! I love them all! Did I mention that I wanne marry you and have your babies? Did I?! (doorbel rings, and a couple of very concerned looking orderlies enter my apartment. "So little girl, you forgot to take your medication AGAIN, didn't you? Well, lets get dressed and we'll take you to see that nice doctor that you're so fond of." I shiek while my chibi eyes are filled with horror. "Oh no! Not doctor Freud again! That creep wrote a whole book that I was forced to read! No please not him! Anyhing but him! Have mercy!!!PLEASE!!!PLEASE!!!" the orderlies ignore Pandora's rather pathetic display and draggs her away while popping some happy pils into her mouth.
Fin |
Reviewed By: Darke Angelus On: October 28, 2001 21:16 CST
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(Looks up at the comment above and then shakes head in dismay) "I've destroyed another young mind...too sad...too sad..." |
Reviewed By: Solitary Hawk On: October 28, 2001 21:25 CST
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Y'know, my friends and I used to blow up condoms as balloons and hang them around the dorm rooms. We used to have pink ones..and glow in the dark ones..and ribbed ones..But I've never discovered any edible ones before! Laughter! My gawd you torment that lil Saiyan like nobody I've ever read before! Keep up the great work, ya fool!! |
Reviewed By: Mishka On: October 29, 2001 04:18 CST
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boy oh boy. I thought I was cruel, but you've taken it to a whole new level. I can't wait a whole week for the next chapter. I'm on the edge of me seat!
Poor old Veggie. The boy's got problems, huh. I nealry died laughing when he ate the condom though!!
You do realise that this story is a paradox in itself, don't you. I realise that things are getting "from bad to worse", but the story is going from good to better. It's so gripping. Keep it up ^_^ |
Reviewed By: D-chan On: October 30, 2001 14:22 CST
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What can I say? I'm impressed. You have a wonderful talent for keeping people interested. You're also very inventive. Great job! |
Reviewed By: a schizophrenic On: October 31, 2001 16:25 CST
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I laughed, I cried... |
Reviewed By: Sansei On: November 01, 2001 19:06 CST
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Oh, this story has put the bulma vegita relationship on my list of favorites: specifically this one!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! I am soooooooo looking foward to the next chapter. i didn't expect him to eat it. I was holding my breath during half of it and at other times, kaasan was asking me what was soo funny? LMAO!!!! |
Reviewed By: missmagick On: November 03, 2001 04:31 CST
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love it love it keep up the good work can't wait for more
P.S. dorothy must die lol |
Reviewed By: KangaKilla On: November 04, 2001 02:48 CST
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ok, i love the fanfic but hey can you atleast put up the next chapter on time, its the 3rd and theres no chapter 14 so hurry up im very impatient
:P |
Reviewed By: Imajineer On: November 04, 2001 10:57 CST
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An excellent and believable redition of the Vegeta and Bulma get together.
I really must praise the author on the ability to keep all the personalities in character.
Action, humour, drama and more galore. Something for everybody and not just for Bulma and Vegeta fans.
Remarkable work keep it up. |
Reviewed By: Golden Shadow On: November 04, 2001 21:50 CST
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I've been following your story for quite a while now, and I dub it "the best B/V fic I've read as of yet!" I really do love your story, and that means something coming from me! (I usually don't give out such generous comments! ^^) ANyway, as I was saying, I think what make this story so good is your grasp of emotional reaction. You manage to fit so many aspects of heart-wrenching behavior into the story. And who's to say the characters are out-of-character? It's your fiction, so therefore, for your story I say they're in-character! Hah! You include all sorts of little elements: angst, confu cion, even a little humor for us all! ^^ Good grammar too, by the way... I'm always searching for fanfics with this sort of *empty, haunting* atmosphere... How lucky I was to find this one! I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Has Dr. Briefs cooled off any? Who was it that revealed Bulma's apartment to him? AHH! Hurry! I think I'll go insane if I don't get to read it soon! (This story's definitely on my fave list! ^^) |
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