| "FROM BAD TO WORSE..." Reviews/Comments [ 141 ] |
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Reviewed By: Golden Shadow (melancholy_shadow@hotmail.com) On: November 04, 2001 21:54 CST
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Oh, my gosh! I just reread my review and noticed all the TYPOS!!! Oh, well it's late... That's my excuse. I also forgot to comment on how I love how you present how he's haunted by his past. It's a refreshing potrayal... Okay, now I'm going for real! Promise!
G.S. Over and out! Peace! ^^ |
Reviewed By: Darke Angelus On: November 05, 2001 15:22 CST
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Yeah, Yeah, I know that Chapter 14 got posted two days late. Blame MediaMiner.Org, not me. I always post after Midnight on Fridays and they were down at the time. Thanks to all of you who had the patience to wait, for the rest of you, get on the damn mailing list. Everybody else got a link on the third, as promised because this is NOT the only site I post this story on. |
Reviewed By: Darke Angelus On: November 05, 2001 15:39 CST
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To the prick going around and lowering the ranking of this story and the others: If I find out who you are, I'm siccing my cadre of Hacker buds on your sorry ass and shutting you down. |
Reviewed By: littlemoonhime On: November 05, 2001 18:11 CST
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I just LOVE this ficcy!!! Please update soon, i can't wait to see what happens next!! |
Reviewed By: Juice On: November 09, 2001 20:24 CST
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Dark Angeles, your story is over done and over dramatized. Vegeta is way too out of character and it adds to the unoriginality. And don't you think the whole "at its best" is a little cocky? I really don't think this fic is that well done and by no means deserves a spot in the top 15. Fix it up and give it a story of its own that hasn't been done by a million other fanfiction authors and maybe I'll care. Might I add that your Halloween fic is good (not great), but you really need to let go of it. Halloween is over and people just don't care anymore. Be smart and write a Christmas fic. That way, it actually deserves to be on the charts before the holiday - not afterwards like your Halloween fic, which you obviousl keep rating up. |
Reviewed By: Golden Shadow (melancholy_shadow@hotmail.com) On: November 09, 2001 21:01 CST
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To Juice: *HELL-oO!! fanFICTIOn=FICTION!!! Get a life! Writing is for creativity, and last time I checked, you could write about anything, it doesn't have to be "in-character"!! Regardless, of rather it is in-character or not, the story is written extremely well for its GENRE! Do you know what GENRE means? It means the "type"! Oh, yes! There ARE different TYPES of stories! *wow... Drama**, Angst** Humor**... yes, they're all different TYPES! (i'm being sarcastic, BTW.... -_-) I mean, I could write a lemon between...say ... MAster Roshi and Goku... and my writing and story might be *GOOD!! (but, I'm not going to do that because it's *sick...) But, the point is, I can, it's FAN*FICTION!
TO Dark Angelus: Flames can't burn paperwork on the net, keep it up! ^^ |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: November 09, 2001 23:33 CST
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I want to thank JUICE for giving me the FIRST and ONLY truely maliciously critical review of over 500 that I've received for "From Bad To Worse..." Quite obviously, I don't take the tone seriously, they're just comments and accusations that only seem to fuel an overblown image of superiority(and probably to cover up a VERY small penis). I've read other comments you've left for the other authors and all are the same-*BlahBlah-mydickispuny-Blah* I have no control over the ranking of any of my stories. They're there because they're GOOD and people enjoy re-reading them. |
Reviewed By: Solitary Hawk On: November 09, 2001 23:53 CST
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All this talk of OOC pisses the hell out of me. If there's anyone to blame here, blame Akira Toriyama himself! When Vegeta first arrived on Earth, he was a snickering, sarcastic, wise-ass little bastard who didn't take anything seriously. On Namek, he was mature and charismatic and almost honerable. During the Android saga, he was a cocky asshole and during the Cell Saga, all he did was grumble and piss and moan. How the F*** is anyone supposed to get the little shit right in character when even his own creator screwed it up?!? Darke A. you're keeping a happy blend between all of the persona's: Not too likeable, but not loathesome. It's about the best as anyone could hope for. Obviously JUICE either A: Never even bothered to read the story or B: got bored after the first chapter because his ADD was kicking in. Whatever the case, ignore the little prick, remain reeeeal quiet and maybe he'll go pester someone else. His type never hang round for long. |
Reviewed By: cha On: November 10, 2001 00:54 CST
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Thanks for updating so quickly!!! Your writing continues to get better after every chapter. Keep uo the great work!!! |
Reviewed By: Kuu On: November 10, 2001 11:10 CST
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What the hell are you talking about Darke Angelus posing as anonymous? You obviously are rating your stories up if you take it so personally. And your stuff isn't good. Get over it. |
Reviewed By: Sailor MarZ On: November 10, 2001 12:29 CST
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As always you amaze me with ur talented writing. keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Re-o-ko On: November 10, 2001 15:39 CST
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It was great! it was a good story...untill...the 11th chapter...it sucked after that! ican't belive how terrible it was! it was the worst! i'm sorry. but it really could have been better! |
Reviewed By: Golden Shadow (melancholy_shadow@hotmail.com) On: November 10, 2001 18:06 CST
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It's good as usual Dark A. but don't you think it's time we get out of the apartment business... It's kind of going stale. ^^ I wanna see where everyone is... (Not yet though. ^^) Let's see some more chapters!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Juice On: November 10, 2001 19:13 CST
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Solitary Hawk, I understand your point, but this fic is labeled as a continuation - not alternate universe/reality (it changes with each site I visit.), which is the correct type. So Vegeta should be in character from where this takes place. I real author would notice that. |
Reviewed By: Solitary Hawk On: November 11, 2001 11:00 CST
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No, I don't agree with your 'logic'. The three year gap is fair game to any author who wants to take a hack at it. In all honesty, Vegeta would never have shagged Bulma AT ALL and we ALL know it. Truth be told none of the characters are IN character from one episode to the next. How the hell is anyone supposed to nail such poorly animated characted 'dead-on'. I'm right how I view Vegeta in this fic, D.A. is right in his intrepretation and (sadly) so are you. |
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