| "Conflicted" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: Animechick On: February 12, 2003 19:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Please update!!! I have been waiting half a year for u to update this story!!!! I'll give u pocky if u do!!!!!!!![choclate covered biscit stick] |
Reviewed By: AngelEyes On: January 26, 2003 19:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
10.10.10.10. I GIVEYOU THE TOP RATINGS NOW WHERE IS THE REST??? PLEASE!!! :grovels on knees: PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!! YOU ARE TORTURING ME!!! |
Reviewed By: Evil Inga and Evil Yami Inga On: January 15, 2003 17:29 CST
Comment/Review:
Evil Inga: ACK!!! THAT IS IT?!?!?!?! *looks at Evil Yami Inga* ACK!!! WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU!?!?!
Evil Yami Inga: ~_~ ... what does it look like!?! I"VE BEEN TURNED INTO A MAN!!
Evil Inga: *grins* i'll have to thank my sister the bunny magician for that!! o.o .. oh my.. look at our review... |
Reviewed By: Child of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2002 21:16 CST
Comment/Review:
Ello! |
Reviewed By: TheOtherChair On: December 19, 2002 20:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Grrr...This is good, so finish it! Just finish the stupid thing!*thrusts pencil into Child of Darkness's hand* C'mon! Fishish it! I wanna see some angst here, too! Don't listen to those people who don't want this sad! I've seen plenty of nice, cute happy Yami/Yugi stories, but I want something different!!!
**sane side takes over**
So please finish it? |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2002 16:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
wheres the rest? update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: CasualOtaku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2002 02:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmm, I'm curious yet afraid all at once. It would be so easy for it to go badly, but then again, it could turn out quite right.
Oooh, what the hell! I'll bite, the first part was good, so where's part two?
As long as Yugi gets to enjoy it at least a little. I'd hate for him to be totally broken. |
Reviewed By: Kari On: November 28, 2002 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's very good but where is the rest. THAT'S why you got a 9 where it could have been a ten. Where is the rest? You MUST finish this. |
Reviewed By: *cries* On: November 26, 2002 12:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooo!! Don't have Yami rape his aibou! I love this couple! Angst is not at all bad. Infact, I enjoy angst. But, please, please, please!! *gets down on her knees* Let Yami think about what he's doing and make the next chapter happier! Or, as a suggestion, Yami could be ATTEMPTING to rape Yugi and then suddenly realizes what he's doing. Yes? No? Maybe? Simply suggesting ^_^
Oh, and I LOVE the detail you put into this! It's beautiful! Keep writing! ^_~
*hopes you write next chapter soon and make it happy* |
Reviewed By: AMG On: November 12, 2002 00:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Niffty coolness! Really cool! Please have more! ^_^ Yami and Yuugi rule! =) Kawaiiness! Lemony Goodness next, ne? Please?! ^_~ I wish you didn't have to make it rape though...that's mean. Yami isn't THAT mean. ^_^
Y+Y4EVER AND EVER! |
Reviewed By: yamifan101 On: November 11, 2002 19:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I KNEW YAMI HAD IT IN HIM JUST PLEASE DONT WRITE ABOUT ANZU/TEA I HATE HER ESPECIALLY WHEN PEOPLE PLACE HER WITH YAMI/YUGI IT MAKES ME SICK.KEEP IT UP I LOVE IT SO FAR GREAT JOB I LOVE THEM TOGETHER THEY SO HOT!! |
Reviewed By: Imhotep On: November 10, 2002 12:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR?! WRITE MORE!!!! I ABSOLUTLY LOVE THIS STORY!!!! AND I'M REALLY NOT A FAN OF YAOI!!!!!!!!! YOU ARE SUCH A GOOD WRITER!!!!! NOW WRITE! WRITE LIKE YOU'VE NEVER WRITTEN BEFORE!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: November 09, 2002 19:39 CST
Comment/Review:
This is really good so far. I hope you post more soon so I can see what happens. |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2002 09:44 CST
Comment/Review:
Wheee! Great potential for angst and lemony badness, my two favorite things! Please write more soon!! |
Reviewed By: GOODwriter123456 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2002 09:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
weird I didn't know Yami, would give a care about Yugi that way.
OH well, pretty goodfic. YOu have good description skills. just don't make Yami seem like a creep! |
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