| "That'll Do, Son." Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Title: That'll Do, Son
Reviewed By: bunnicle [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 00:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! please write the next chapter soon! i kinda feel sorry for Bardock... i think i would have kicked both toma and Turles asses. but that's just me.
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Reviewed By: lee-lee On: May 16, 2004 07:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm so loving this story. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 19:25 CDT
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I'm posting this here instead of elsewhere since I know how hard it is to get reviews here. I like this!!! That three way...Woohoo. I almost feel sorry for Vegeta. Kakarrot is trying to get back to Heaven not earth. But Vegeta is being nice; even fixing up the dojo. The next person they need to talk to is female? Hmmmm... She should be scary. Lets face it, any girl who did something bad enough to warrrant hell......I really like this and am looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: gemini66 On: January 08, 2004 10:42 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story hope to see more R/K(G)...update soon....
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Reviewed By: saiyainprincess88 On: January 05, 2004 01:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ya know this story is really great. I've never read anyting quite like it. i usually never give reveiws to people who have alot but im makeing a exception for you. i really wish you would update soon because i really enjoyed reading it and i want goku outta HELL!!! When will vegeta and goku get together?? i started this story for that perpose alone, but now that i have started to read more i see that rattiz really isnt that bad. But i will stick to my love of goku and vegeta.....gezz im such a perv!!! HAHAHAHAAHAHA MUCH LOVIN' Saiyainprincess88
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Reviewed By: Sky, Xero On: January 03, 2004 17:20 CST
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Yay for Vegeta smut!! And good for Turles. I always did like him... More Goku/Radditz would be good too. Wow, I sound like a complete pervert... but I've been following this story from the beginning and I'm glad to see it's still going.
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Title: I WUV IT!!!
Reviewed By: Echimon! On: October 16, 2003 01:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it and I love the lemonly goodness! YUM!! Loves, Echimon!
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Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 22:00 CDT
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Man, sucks to be Bardock. And hey, I wanna see more Radditz/Goku action! Brotherly love, and all that.... XD |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 06:53 CDT
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Damn you Toma!! How DARE you upset my hunny bunny?
Turles is great, no denying that, but - BARDOCK!!! The man is a GOD! How can anyone begin to compete with the most gorgeous, wonderful, sexiest man of all time??
Please, dear author - make the title of the chapter true, and it's all a dream... Please??
Bardock/Toma... yummmmm |
Reviewed By: arovak On: July 12, 2003 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey luv the story! Its excellent! cant wait to see what happens next! |
Reviewed By: Yosh On: March 27, 2003 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Really great! I'm a fan of shounen ai stories, I mean it doesn't really need to have sex to be good... but now after reading this one i'm becoming fan of yaoi too.
You see, I never thought I would like to read homosexual things but the way you fanfic authors write definitely changed my mind.
Great job! You're one of the best authors I've ever read. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 20:50 CST
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I must say that I really like this story. I liked the whole eerie tension between Goku and his exenemies and the father he never met. Very cool. |
Reviewed By: Korian Stone konrinastone@gmx.net On: February 04, 2003 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That is a great fanfiction. poor saiyjains turned on only by seeing goku fight, but it is understanding. poor raditz, yes. and poor other new friends. and we nice that the old and cold commander zorns heart is warming up for goku. oh, and what had happend to bardock. was is to much for him seeing his son like this *giggle* i bet the whole saiyajin population in hell is going to hit on goku. and if only it is for the fact and chance, that they can say aferwards i have once sleeping with the legendary or rather was having sex with the best/strongest a saiyjin can get.
i would like it, if he can get back his tail for his time in hell or maybe keeping it and going in hell strait to level four. yeah, gt sucks at some times. but i think level 4 looks sexy and animal like wild. it shoul be drive the saiyajins more crazy.
i sure would not mind seeing there reacting at a goku as a ssj 3 and ssj 4.
i hope all of his new friends and his father get a turn with him. would raditz or turles be jeaoulsy then, hm? |
Reviewed By: atshi On: January 20, 2003 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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more more more! YAY!! |
Reviewed By: Ichigo On: January 20, 2003 10:27 CST
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It seems so as if you write excat the fiction they i have ever want to get reading.
I am eager to hear the commentars form Goku sayajin-comarades at how he looks at ssj1 or ssj2. Wow, image it he in his black/crimson battle armor and spandex and then powerd up to ssj. that looks for sure sexy. would be a wonder if they saiyjins not getting turned on by this sight and powerplay.
*lol* cell went back with his tail between his legs so to say |
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