| "Mother's Day" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Lucifer the D I [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great story. Very . . . wicked of you to think of something this creative and sensual, too.
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Reviewed By: EscalasAmarai [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 12:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is awesome... a manga of it would be cool ^^
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Reviewed By: cyzay [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 03:11 CST
Comment/Review:
haha now thats a mother's day present saiya-jin style! lol that was great. i loved it.
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Reviewed By: DarkDeath [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2003 21:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! It was extremely well-written. The lemon was awesome, and incest stories rule!! |
Reviewed By: Oolong On: January 04, 2003 08:13 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a bit hard to read at times because of some of the formatting, but other than that it was pretty good.
also the incest might put some people off. |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 00:04 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Okay ... I admit, this is original. And, yes, I'm one of these sick freaks that sits back and wonders what COULD have happened between Bulma/Mirai Trunks (considering SHE didn't know who he was) ...and THEN giving MTrunks the same blindess (I mean... what if his Bulma died when he was younger and then HE found the timemachine plans or invented one himself and then he didn't recognize her when he showed up to stop Frieza??)
For the record ... incest is WRONG, in my opinion. (!! And if they DID have sex not knowing what relation they had to each other ... what if she got pregnant?? Would the baby be another Trunks?? O.O) I think too much ... -_-
Note: I gave you a 10 for enjoyment because it WAS a well done lemon. (even if I did morally object to it)
*scratches head* Other than that ... I just DON'T know what to say. OH! Keep writing, though, because you're style IS good!! :) |
Reviewed By: LordPendragon13 On: November 20, 2002 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good fic i liked it i thought its one of the best storys i ever read you should do more of those |
Reviewed By: Corrie On: November 16, 2002 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story sucks donkey ass - no, I'm kidding, it's actually pretty good. I'm not usually a big fanfic person, but I thought this was pretty good. I can just see Vegeta, Trunks and Bulma on "Springer" - I Seduced My Son because My Dad was too Busy To Hold Up to his Husbandly Duties. LOL Good job, Ami! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2002 16:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is great |
